Re: FiC: Seasons B/W

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Hey, dizzy!  Glad to have a new ficcer on board!

This was a brisk, enjoyable read, although, since came soon after two
other "movie night at Buffy's" fics were posted, the plot did feel a
little bit worn.  (Not that it's your fault other authors have had
similar ideas, of course.)  But there were two nice touches that I
enjoyed, namely the whipped cream (mmm!) and, more importantly, the snow
being a sign.  Why should Angel get all the omens, after all?  (And good
job on making the snow seem incidental and unobtrusive, yet having the
later revelation make perfect sense.)

Thanks,

Dan



Willow: "It's a good fight, Buffy, and I want in."
Buffy:  "I kinda love you."
                     'Choices'

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