RE: FIC: Allergies Actualize (1/2)

["Jamie" <jim.rundle@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Wwwwwwwooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!!!!

 

I loved this story, the sort of comical, yet romantic setting was extremely well created, and your description/interaction was fluid and interesting. I love it, and I'm really desperately waiting for more (so you'd better write part two, or I'll send the pigmes round)!

 

 

"Had Buffy just said what Willow thought? Had the Slayer just implied what seemed to be the clear implication? Was this a moment of daydreams come true; the fruition of all those long classes spent looking sideways at Buffy's golden hair, at the smooth line of her chin?

 

"Achoo!" Buffy released Willow's hand and turned away to dab furiously at her nose. This was so humiliating! Here she was with the big revelation and she couldn't stop with the broadcasting of disgusting bodily fluids and the extreme unattractiveness. You'd think a Slayer would have a little more control..."

 

HAH!

 

Only thing I'd say is that the formatting messes up halfway through. I assume you did it in Word and then c+p'd it. Apparently I make the same mistake *shrug*.

 

Again, fantastic work. Well done! :)

 

- Jamie

Willow: "It's a good fight, Buffy, and I want in."
Buffy:  "I kinda love you."
                      --'Choices'

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