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Wow. What a story. And I'll say it again. Wow!
Geez, badbard, I loved this! It kept me up real late and led to me taking a sick day today in which I continued reading right to the...oh wait. There is no end yet.
And thus you must write more! Soon! Soon!
What did I like about it? Well, Willow POV for one. Willow POV is a favourite of mine and I could hear her in my head when you did it.
I liked that it's set in younger, happier days for our couple. You had some great hurt/comfort scenes that I appreciated. And your Giles was eerie. That was a bit of a shocker when his identity came out.
I liked how you handled Oz. You were nice to him and didn't turn him into some kind of villain which is always good to avoid. I'm an Oz fan in case you can't tell.
Faith was a bit of a villain but hey, it works on her. I LOVED the bedroom scene with Buffy/Willow hiding under the covers. Hillarious. Though Buffy seemed a tad dumb. But I guess that made her funnier.
Anyway, it was very well written and a joy to read and I'm a big fan now so write more soon. Please.
Silverna
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