Hey Dan,
Thanks for your review on my first chapter. I'm really new in TV shows fanfiction so this is my first fanfic. hehe...and I just started watching the previous seasons...so if some things are not the same...I may do it abit differently. Hehe..
Thank you again for your review. English is not my strongest language so I'm still trying to make the story interesting. =)
Thanks again!
Sincerely,
desdemona
danspector@xxxxxxxxx wrote:
Ah, angst!
Pretty good for a first fic. Slightly stilted at some parts but a good
read. I particularly liked the little emotional details you worked in,
like Buffy catching herself being a bit harsh, or Willow be slightly
worried Buffy would be angry because she rebuffed her. And the ending,
with Buffy thanking Willow for understanding, was very sweet.
Also liked Buffy assuring Willow that she's special, although I wasn't
too thrilled the first thing she said was "witchcraft". But she
corrected it: it's Willow Willow-ness, not her powers, that make her
special.
Taking it slow, huh? Good, let's see those little steps. More, please.
Dan