Re: FB for FIC: For You, I Will Wait (1/?) (to Phoen Dusk)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Phoen,

> Here's a good example.  "Hear" is present; 
> "tried" is past.  Using "trys" would keep it in 
> present.

Except that it's misspelled.  The word you're looking for is "tries".
;-)

Desdemona, 

Yeah, I thought English might not be your first language, but I'm sure
you'll improve.  TidalWave had, IMO, a rougher time with English in her
earliest fics, and she's gotten much better.  Keep at it!

Dan

whose English is pretty much his only language, not counting some
liturgical Hebrew, some rusty and bad French, and some Spanish that's
only really useful for following a boxing match&

(¡Gancha Izquierda!) 



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