Re: FIC: "The Vampire Slayer: Final Part" NC-17 By: Joshua (V, C-D, and N)

["jab21kill" <the.evil.guy@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Well, in answer to the entirety of this review, I really only have one
reply; I wrote this entire story like 4 years ago and since the final
part was written, I haven't written ANYTHING in it.  4 Years.  I'd say
it's kaput.

The body parts imagery; IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE DISTURBING.  I suppose I
should have put up a disclaimer, but I was in kind of a rush when I
cut and pasted these directly from the file I finally manged to find,
and the Yahoogroup Sendmail.

Besides, if I ever were to continue this, Naked, bloody, VampWillow
playing with severed broken bloody hands, arms feet and ribs would be
the NICEST, GENTLEST, most "Fields of Pure White Lilies in the Spring
Time" imagery of the series.

Suffice to say, they capture Giles when he walks in, hold him in the
basement with Buffy's mother and Faith.  Then Buffy kills her mother
by breaking her neck (Vampire's mercy) the moment she wakes back up,
making Faith and Giles watch, and then torture the Slayer and Watcher
all day until it's almost sunset.  Then they go out and kill Xander
and Cordelia, then come back, kill Giles, and continue to torture
Faith for weeks on end, keeping her alive, until she mentally breaks
and Willow drinks too much so Buffy turns her, but Faith is still
"broken" and becomes Willow's "Pet Puppy".

I came up with that on the fly.

;>

-- Joshua


--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, "Chris" <eddie4102000@y...>
wrote:
> Hey Joshua
>
> while most of the group don't particualrly care for Buffy or Willow
as vampire stories, i definately find them very interesting. oh, and
Willow sitting playing with body parts? now there's a disturbiong
piece of imagery that will be hard to shift!
> one thing though...you called this the final part...surely you must
be mistaken, cos if your not, that's the worst kind of cruelty
> leaving a story hanging like that is like taking a child on a
rollercoaster and having it stop at the top of the highest peak
permanently
> not fair
>
> later
>
> -Chris-



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