Re: FIC: Just Desserts B/W 1/1

[Silverna <silvernawolfe@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thought this was a nifty piece, Mike. I liked the
aptness of your closing line. Overall it was really
'feel-good' and 'see all your Wiffy dreams come true.'

That's what I liked about it but it's also my one
gripe. It was too perfect to be real (as were the
oh-so-stunning otherworldly-looks girls). A little
realism can go a long way to giving a story some
pizazz. How do you spell pizazz?

Good job though.




		
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