Re: FIC: Just Another (Christmas) Day - B/W - NC-17

[Silverna <silvernawolfe@xxxxxxxxx>]

Ok, great fic :)

I liked the flow of writing even though I don't watch
Scrubs. It was still easy to follow.

My favourite thing about the fic was the 'this is me,
like it or lump it' tone of more mature Willow. While
I don't feel it would work on Willow Season 1, Willow
of Virtual Season 8 would have made these small
changes. Good Willow-babbles too.

I appreciate how you've got the Scoobs back to living
a regular life, albeit in Cleveland now and how you
mentioned regular life things like Willow finding
Cleveland waaay too cold.

Sex with Kennedy sounds right in character. Also Buffy
staring out the window moodily (even for a paper) is
so very post Season 7 Buffy. Kudos.

Ooh, I like this idea of B/W in a sordid affair. That
could happen. Obviously Buffy doesn't care for
Kennedy's feelings all that much and her character can
believably have an aversion to the public gay
relationship. Or any relationship after all her
baddies!

Sex on the washing machine was sordid and appropriate
;)

I liked the big 'Dawn sees us, what the hell, Dawn
always sees us.' It'd be interesting to find out
Dawn's outlook on the whole shebang.

The end of Buffy saying 'I love you' and Willow
secretly not liking that is cleverly poignant. I think
Willow would feel guilty if Buffy was to say that
since there is something guilt-worthy about two
relationships, regardless of one person saying they
want a secret one. Even more mature Willow has to get
back to her old fear of hurting people eventually
(which I notice she hasn't particularly yet). 

In the meantime it will be nice to see if she tries to
justify staying with Kennedy without love per se.

Nice one, Jin. So 'not generic', which is one of my
highest compliments :)

Silverna


		
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