Re: Fic: Intervention 3/3 Vampire Stories B/W/X NC17

["jin_hayte" <jinhayte@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Well, now. This was a pleasant surprise. Every day I check the list,
and almost every day I find nothing of interest, if anything at all.
Another part in Vampire Stories is definitely of interest, though.

I believe I once told you - back when you posted the very first part
of this series - that it had the potential to be one of the biggest
(as in grandest) and very best fanfics.

I still say that. It's not QUITE there yet, but it's well on the way.

My mind is still a bit flustered. I SO wasn't prepared for how long
this was gonna be. Took me hours to go through. So you'll have to
excuse me if my comments seem a bit cut short.

I love it.

I love the vampire Scoobs.

I love how you've made them all different.

I love Buffy's crawing for danger, for risk, for adrenaline.

I love Willow's faux-conscience, aka the coin.

I love Xander's playful rage.

I love their sexcapades.

I love their new condo.

I love their underwater sex.

I love Jenny's line: "They wouldn't do this to someone they love."

And, though you sometimes stumble over words and lose my interest, I
love your writing. The pacing, the use of just the right amount of
detail, the dialogue, the way you set the mood (such as the nailbiting
realtor scene).

Please, continue writing this series. I don't care if it takes you
weeks, months or even years to get the next part out. I just know that
it's a story that needs to be written.





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