Re: Re: FIC: Where the Books Are. (B/W) [R] [2 of ?]

[Andrew Stoffel <see2go4me@xxxxxxxxx>]

On Jul 4, 2006, at 10:57 PM, Windsor Williams wrote:

> Lorne is always interesting, with what he sees and what
> he says. Some interesting hints, to be certain.

I try to use him sparingly. It could be too easy to
have him say too much. Sort of like having a prophecy
that gives away the story.

> I really liked the Buffy and Willow conversation around
> lunch, and also the Buffy and Dawn conversation around
> shoes. You're doing a very nice job of gradually shading
> in the details, showing us a bit more and a bit more of
> this AU you're presenting.

Thanks :-). I'm hopefully getting better at the character
interaction the more I write. And the longer I write the
longer those kinds of sections get. Now if only the
"action scenes" would get easier.

> I'm rather curious now about this book Willow is working
> on. Maybe it is just a device to get her in contact with
> Buffy? Or maybe there is more to it than she has yet
> found.

It serves multiple purposes :-).

Thanks for the comments.

-Andy-


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