If this were given a happy second part then it wouldn't be brilliant.
However as is it not brilliant either. It's powerful, real, terrible and one sided. Perhaps it's the end, perhaps not. However, while part 2, if following after part 1, cannot, if ever written, and must not be happy, it also should not be ignored the 'And then what' possibilities. As is right now it'sa gut check of a short piece. A good gut check of experiment but just an experiment. |