| I liked the concept of your story. When I watched the original "Prom" episode I kind of daydreamed about it going something like your story. If anything could have been improved, perhaps there could have been something more...background or something to add to the believability aspect. The sudden appearance of Willow and the matter-of-fact explanation of her breakup with Oz, along with all that transpired so quickly there with Buffy and Willow, just seemed too out of the blue. Considering that you said you wrote it in just about a half hour, it's well done. I gave it 4 stars. Compared to much of the REALLY bad fic out there, yours was really very good, especially considering how little time you put into it. |