Reviews for Addiction
BHV 2003-12-17 id # 198
promising start. I'm looking forward to more.


Ivy 2003-12-18 id # 199
A very good start to the story. I can't wait to see what happens next.


blinviz 2003-12-19 id # 201
You've definitely piqued my interest. I look forward to more. Cheers!


vykor lord_vykor@yahoo.com 2003-12-19 id # 202
Remarkable... Please continue?


Bob Head frank_8281@yahoo.com 2003-12-20 id # 204
Liking this one a lot!


Aether aether_4@hotmail.com 2004-01-04 id # 213
This story is wicked. I love the way you write. Hope you write more soon. =)


BHV 2004-01-05 id # 214
oh my fucking god! I'm speechless. and that's saying a lot!


BHV 2004-01-05 id # 215
except you HAVE to fix that it's error in the second to last line -- it's is" it is". The posessive is just: its


UrbanGoth 2004-01-06 id # 216
thanks BHV. missed that one. :P

i dont suppose anyone knows of someone who would be willing to beta? it would help a lot.


drea 2004-11-14 id # 971
i was bored and looking for something to read.... low and behold....looky what i found!!!!!.......very interesting re-write....really really liked it...(could've been a tad more explicit for my own personal tastes....but that just ME)...anyway.....such a DAMN shame you never finished it.....i would love to see how you resolve it.....


Ahn 2007-06-25 id # 5738
That was great how you worked that! I hope you do more with this plot!


Rin 2007-06-25 id # 5740
Good to see an old story renewed!! YAY!!!


zigpal 2007-06-25 id # 5741
Hey, this is all new to me, so this story is great. I like the whole Wiffy take on their addictions. Please continue soon, I want to see what the morning brings.


Howard R 2007-06-26 id # 5744
Oh. My. God! This is fantastic! I can't believe I hadn't read this before. This is a wonderful story.