Reviews for The Two sailor80 sailor680@yahoo.com 2004-05-10 id # 488 Very nice start. You have my attention. I'm looking forward to the next part. mike wizathogwarts@yahoo.com 2004-05-18 id # 535 This is a fascinating idea and you're doing great with it so far. Buffy remaining mysterious rather than just trying to explain everything right off the bat lends an additional element to the story that builds anticipation, keep it up. Clay 2004-05-18 id # 536 I like! Can't wait for more, thanks for the read! technogeek 2004-05-19 id # 542 Swweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! I love the idea, it's awesome and great. Can't wait for me read. Dilvish blachaume@wanadoo.fr 2004-05-21 id # 547 Awesome. I like the way Buffy is slowly adapting herself to the life in this alternate universe. Madeline seems to know something about Buffy's presence there. Poor Tara, for someone with empathic abilities like her, it's not a good thing to read Buffy, and she didn't even came across the worse. Dawn's got her own stalker: a scary woman who can fight five vampires at once without a problem... I discovered your stories with "Girl in a bar" on TTH. What is it with you and the Buffy/red-headed girl pairings? Who's next? Jean Grey? Not that I mind. In fact, I enjoy your stories very much. I read a lot of fanfiction and I can say your writing skills are largely above the average. zorro 2004-05-21 id # 548 This is fast becoming one of my favourite b/w fics. I like the way you describe buffy here, not to mention the way the alt-verse characters are described. The plot also seems to be coming along nicely, not too confusing, but interesting enough that i eagerly await another section(not to mention going off to read your webpage to see if i could catch any plotbunnies:) Nice that other story there aswell btw, the buffy/Ginny one. I like well-thought out crossovers) Anyway, keep on writing, great work sofar. Zorro. nicky 2004-05-22 id # 549 Your story is great write more soon. please.please Clay 2004-05-22 id # 551 Sweet can't wait for the next part and to see who this Madaline really is, or what she knows. I'm really enjoying the ease in which you spin this tale. It's really an eye catcher fro the first part. helen hez2004@hotmail.com 2004-06-05 id # 571 hey! this stuffs great! cant wait till the next chapter! keep em cumin! luv helen xxxxxxxxx redwitch redwitch@willowwiccan.net 2004-06-18 id # 596 This just keeps getting better. Time is of no importance. Just don't stop writing. K. nicki 2004-06-19 id # 597 please post more soon. your story is great. sailor80 sailor680@yahoo.com 2004-06-21 id # 601 Nice with the "Willowism." Looking forward to the next part. Ivy 2004-07-05 id # 644 Another incredible part! I loved how Buffy was able to fight, finally. But, again you leave me wanting more, now! I know, I know, you are a slow writer...still I love this story. I like your Willow a lot, you a great mix of a new different Willow and the old Willow that we and love. And I really love this Buffy, how she's a take control of a situation, doesn't back down, but isn't all bossy either. More soon!? Dukeroyal dukeroyal@aol.com 2004-07-05 id # 656 Good Story. I'm looking forward to more. nikki 2004-07-06 id # 661 i want more. your story is great. Drea 2004-07-08 id # 699 here's to hoping life gives you a break for a while so you can post more and more often this is a really interesting AU fic and i am anxiously awaiting more updates....totally cool you should be proud..........;-) drea 2004-07-31 id # 775 hi...i really like where you are going with this story......i just wish you'd update more often......please!...:-) drea 2004-10-02 id # 924 i really like this story and wish you would update more often and regularly!!!!! bhv 2004-10-02 id # 925 nice. I'm thrilled to see you're continuing this. Jane Doe 2004-10-02 id # 927 This was a very nice brigde part. Keep up the good work! Jane Doe 2004-10-19 id # 944 Another fine part! Bringing "Beth" in on it was a great twist! drea 2004-10-19 id # 945 thanks for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!......im really intrigued by this story....i read the version you have on your website and note that you changed some things from the rough draft........you are doing good writing........im a big fan......keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jane Doe 2004-10-25 id # 947 Ooo! The Hellmouth! And cute Willow/Buffy intereaction, what more could a girl ask for! another nice part! And so soon! drea 2004-10-26 id # 948 thank you, thank you, thank you for updating so timely!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are building yourself one hell of a story!!!!!!!!!!.........are there going to be ANY smooches between Buffy/Willow anytime soon???????????????????????????? *pout* but seriously.........you are doing great!!!!!! an avid fan Drea Per J 2004-12-13 id # 1011 Great story. I like the balance between differences and similarities in the two Sunnydales. When will Buffy come clean and ask for some assistance in figuring out how she got there? Rin 2005-02-04 id # 1135 I'm hooked on this story, and am itching for the resolve. You've written this really well, and the development of the characters, plot, and setting...wonderful. The fact that you don't throw Buffy and Willow into a relationship but have Dawn trying to hook them up, and Willow's crush obvious...it takes true talent to build tension, especially sexual tension, and you've done exactly that in this story thus far. I can't wait for the rest of the story! bwriter feedbacktome@hotmail.com 2005-12-12 id # 2008 I LOVED it, so cant wait for the next story drea 2005-12-12 id # 2013 thank you for updating!!!!!!!!!!!! and i'm glad you had a chance to flesh those chapters out a little more from what i previously read on your website........this is a very intriguing story.......i can't wait for it to become more and more involved......as i hope Willow and Buffy will as well.......well done and looking forward to more! slayergirl23 2005-12-12 id # 2014 This is an absolutely great fic. I've thought so from the begining, which I believe was a really long time ago. I can't wait for more. I think that you are able to write all of the characters very well, and it makes the story so much more enjoyable when writers can do that. I really like the revisions that you have done, and can't wait to see what you have planned. I must admit that I do cheat, and go to your site to read as much a I possibly can of this fic. Please update soon. I am impatiently awaiting your next chapter. drea 2006-01-24 id # 2441 i really love this story.....and some of your others.......but my god i wish you would update more often.......i've seen your outline and know that we have a ways to go........but like i said.......i really wish you would update more often!!!!!!!!! AMITEN AMITEN_ART@HOTMAIL.COM 2006-02-19 id # 2639 JUST READ IT FOR THE SECOND TIME, CAN SEE A LOT OF POSSABILITIES, HOPE IT BECOMES A SERIES OR AT LEAST A NOVEL BEST OF LUCK IN SEEDY WRITING SolidState thomas.payne@min.midco.net 2006-06-08 id # 3366 Arg, I was just clicking onto your author record to find out what other things you have written after loving the opening of "Where the Books Live".. and I found out you were writing this one. The Two is one of my favorite ongoing stories, and one that I have been most interested in seeing an update for. I love your writing. You have a real gift for original set-ups and interesting ways to use the characters of Buffy and Willow in unique ways. Can't wait to see somemore of this story, and I'm terribly excited to see the slowly developing romance in this one develop. It is interesting to see Buffy as the outsider in a world (as in this story) rather than having the "mysterious stranger" enter into the Buffy-centric world. It's particularly neat to be one of the audience in on the nature of the outsider, and seeing things from their perspective, while the "main story" characters are still mystified. It's one of my favorite things about crossover fics, and you've managed to do it here within a slight twist on the standard Buffy-verse. Love your work, keep writing... and of course, update every day. Thanks for the time and effort, you have eager readers waiting on the next installment of whatever you choose to write. Brian Anon 2006-07-23 id # 3948 I hope that the next update is sooner in coming... zigpal 2006-07-24 id # 3958 looks like the fun is about to begin. wonder how Dawn knows Buffy isn't a real blonde, hmm. great story, update soon Par 2006-07-30 id # 3971 Great story with just the right amount of difference between the two Sunnydales. red 2006-08-22 id # 4044 Ok, finally got to read this...please, may I have some more? laura laumeljon@hotmail.com 2006-09-02 id # 4078 love this fic and the librarian one more chapters pretty please jaltax 2007-08-15 id # 6157 really good story please update it soon!!! Bryan robbinsbm@uindy.edu 2007-11-04 id # 6748 Are you planning on finishing this story or the two before it. I want to know if I should still look for updates. silver anjo2006vivo@yahoo.co.uk 2007-12-12 id # 6959 hey, dat was cool. de plot was incredible. but is dat de end? or u writing de next chapter and when if u do?