Reviews for Encounter
nowheretoroam |
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2004-07-23 |
id # 753 |
agh man it was good origianly then you do this and improve it which is good but then you leave it off there and leave us hanging thats just plain mean, so get the next parts up shapish |
Howard R |
howardrussell2000@yahoo.com |
2004-07-23 |
id # 754 |
A phenomenal rewrite. You scrapped just the right parts and replaced them with gold. I'm really looking forward to the continuation of this. Much better than the previous version. I prefer the slow build-up of the relationship over a quick roll in the hay. Thanks for introducing Joy, she's adorable. |
Julia |
Juliagirl84@yahoo.com |
2004-07-23 |
id # 755 |
You did a great job re-writing it. I've enjoyed this one a lot more. Please post the next part soon. |
redwitch |
redwitch@willowwiccan.net |
2004-07-23 |
id # 756 |
Excellent rewrite Norwalker.
Looking forward the next part now.
K. |
acs |
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2004-07-23 |
id # 757 |
Your writing gets better with each story. And this version/rewrite is a lot better/more interesting than the original. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
-Andy- |
bhv |
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2004-07-23 |
id # 759 |
That was one *amazing* rewrite! I'm completely hooked now. |
drea |
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2004-07-23 |
id # 760 |
i must say.....this version of your story is much better written.......it definitely flows better and the story line is more plausible....definitely much better....and dare i add a better story than your first posting(?).....i look forward to reading the rest! |
ciara |
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2004-07-23 |
id # 761 |
omg this is a million times better than it was, please continue. this story really came together better with the added detail. i liked the interaction with joy and will too. excellent! |
willowluvr |
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2004-07-23 |
id # 762 |
great story but in part 2 you said buffy killed A man in self defense by snapping his neck and when she was telling her story to willow you said she killed 2 men with a gun. i'm confused. |
ivy |
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2004-07-24 |
id # 763 |
Interesting changes you made in the story. I hope Willow can help Buffy. |
Norwalker |
2004-07-24 |
id # 764 |
Gold star goes to Willowluvr for catching that inconsistency. Went back and edited it. Consistent now, I believe. Thanks for letting me know..
Norwalker |
drea |
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2004-07-29 |
id # 770 |
uuhh have we gotten to the "lovemaking between members of the same sex" part....or have i missed it????? c'mon you're a wicked tease....can we have some smooches please????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
slayergirl23 |
cwelka@localnet.com |
2004-07-30 |
id # 771 |
Love it! Absolutely love it! Keep writing. I'm already super impatient for the next part. |
Amy |
sweetmiserynd@comcast.net |
2004-08-05 |
id # 792 |
You must continue this story!!! You cannot end it like that! |
redwitch |
redwitch@willowwiccan.net |
2004-08-14 |
id # 817 |
Loved the ending.
Now I got nothing to look forward to reading.
K. |
slayergirl23 |
cwelka@localnet.com |
2004-08-15 |
id # 818 |
Loved the fic 100%. It rocked. I believe that I actually shed a tear when Buffy was talking to Joy, and Willow was listening outside the door. When they finally kissed and all that good stuff, I yelled "woo hoo" really loud. Amazing fic. |
drea |
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2004-08-15 |
id # 819 |
ok the smoochies was HHHOOOOTTTTT!!!!!!!!!.....but a good ending to this "encounter"....good work here....i look forward to reading more of your writings! |
Amy |
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2004-08-15 |
id # 821 |
SEQUEL!!!!!!!! |
Fabouly |
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2005-08-04 |
id # 1634 |
Wow... loved your story! Lots of angsty moments, but happy end anyway! very good written! |
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