Reviews for Back to the Middle drea 2004-08-16 id # 825 totally cute........really enjoying the cuteness if this story.....cant wait for the rest Bob Head frank_8281@yahoo.com 2004-08-16 id # 826 Ignore Anon, You don't need a beta. You're doing a hell of lot better job at catching your own mistakes than a lot of folks I've seen post here. I like it, it seems like the the way Season 7 could have gone. Keep it going. B. Alyssa 2004-08-17 id # 827 I am thoroughly enjoying this story! Good work! But why the B/?...Why can't it be both! Hee hee, I like both. Then again I don't like to see characters getting hurt...So that may be part of it. I'm looking forward to more updates! Jin Hayte jinhayte@hotmail.com 2004-08-18 id # 829 I agree with Anon. some things, like 'tonight' and 'would of' instead of 'would have' are really distracting. get a beta - everybody wins and Bob Head, wtf are you on? someone says something negative (and in this example; correct) and you say 'ignore it'? wow, good advice. it's not like having it beta-read would MAKE THE STORY BETTER. Stewie, as it is now, the story is decent at best. you've got the characterization down for the most part, which is good. the above mentioned things worsens the quality, and I'll say it again: get a beta reader. vykor 2004-09-02 id # 854 Interesting story so far. You captured the voice of characters pretty well, which is the most important in this sort of writing. I'd love to see this story continue. Bob Head frank_8281@yahoo.com 2004-09-03 id # 856 Yay you! Much better! Now get to the smoochies! B.