Reviews for Love and everything that goes with it drea 2004-09-08 id # 864 along with 'roles reversed' i think i might like this one the best of all your writing thus far.....not that i didnt like the other ones...i did, but im liking the way this one started off way better.........anxiously looking forward to more Fan 2004-09-09 id # 865 LOVED IT! redwitch 2004-09-09 id # 866 Great start. Looking forward to the next part(s) very soon please. K. redwitch 2004-09-09 id # 868 And your like wriiting the next parts now aren't you??. This has the making of a good story. At least Willow now knows about Buffy. K. drea 2004-09-09 id # 869 coming along very nicely......very nicley ineed.........though your prophecy was a bit obvious.....when you gonna explain how Buffy got her soul????? mocha in hand anxiously waiting! Buffy Fan 2004-09-13 id # 872 I loved that Todd peed his pants. Update soon and please don't let Buffy kill. If you play by the rules of hopw their characters are acting at the moment, she wouldn't be welcome in the group again. redwitch 2004-09-13 id # 873 Keep it coming please. This is getting better an better. K. drea 2004-09-13 id # 874 such sweet agony you have us in.........so Angel can have sex here and not turn evil????? will the same be true for Buffy??? and are you gonna explain about how they got their souls??????? bhv 2004-09-14 id # 875 "Angel looked at Willow who had tears in her eyes to Faith who's own eyes were moist and headed after Buffy." --- huh? Punctuation, spelling, and grammar are our friends. Using a beta reader, or even asking friend (who can spell) to check your work, would turn your good ideas into even better stories. sailor80 2004-09-14 id # 876 Good rhythm. Like the stopping points, well-chosen to keep me coming back to see what will happen next. Keep going. drea 2004-09-14 id # 877 yah!!!!! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! you rock.....new mocha in hand.......still anxiously waiting!!!!!! totally loving it so far! Boo 2004-09-14 id # 878 am really enjoying this fic... please update soon redwitch 2004-09-15 id # 879 And your writing the the next parts now aren't you? Loving this fic. Keep at it. K. Buffyken 2004-09-15 id # 880 mmm finally smoochies good story! update soon Buffy Fan 2004-09-16 id # 882 This chapter confused the hell out of me. The eplanation that Buffy said no to made more sense than the one that she was actually feeling guilty over. sam 2004-09-16 id # 884 forget what Buffy fan said - it made perfect sense - update soon and when are you gonna tell how Buffy and Angel got their souls? Wondering how your gonna write that one - can't wait to read more from you - you really are an amazing writer again i say - update soon :) debbs 2004-09-16 id # 885 i agree with Sam - excellent story so far also can't wait to find out how they became soulled Vampires Loving the angst between Willow and Buffy keep up the good work bhv 2004-09-16 id # 886 I'm with Buffy Fan-confused. As for Sam and Debb, this link is for Reviews, not just praise. Any writer who can't take constructive criticism shouldn't be putting their stuff out there on the line. Any writer who only listens to lavish praise and to quote, "forgets" constructive criticism is just setting themselves up for a fall. And any reader who ignores typos, grammatical errors and unexplained plot holes or questions is giving the signal that they as readers don't deserve better and that the writer's good ideas don't deserve a better presentation. ' As stated previously, bwriter, you've got great ideas, and you're prolific as hell, but it's hard work (for some of us) to make it through all the spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors, not to mention the spinning POV shifts. Ignore them at your own risk. All just my humble opinion. chloe 2004-09-17 id # 887 maybe its just me but i totally got chapter six although saying that i assume that you will be going back to that conversation and digging more into Buffy and Lou's relationship? update soon kelly 2004-09-17 id # 888 it cleared it up for me and set the story back on track cant wait to read more kelly 2004-09-19 id # 889 and your going to be updating soon right? liking the story so far and can't wait for more stevie 2004-09-19 id # 890 i really like the direction this story is heading it redwitch 2004-09-19 id # 891 Whoa. The PTB foul up, never. You gotta keep this one coming. Great story. K. drea 2004-09-19 id # 892 intersting explanation for the re-souling of the 2 vamps.....very intersting indeed......getting a fresh mocha any minute....awaiting updates quite anxiously! redwitch 2004-09-20 id # 895 I remember the original one and I gotta say I liked this rewrite better. K redwitch 2004-09-20 id # 896 Oops wrong story. Sorry K. drea 2004-10-01 id # 923 welcome back!!! im definitely liking this story....its really great! BUT im gonna have to agree with what some of the others have said......you need a beta reader or you need to carefully edit your work before you post it......a lot of the errors can be distracting...........BUT like i said, im totally loving this story!! cant wait for more!!!!!!! Buffyken 2004-10-03 id # 929 hmm very interesting, buffy being a vamp makes it extra special to read chloe 2004-11-07 id # 955 loved the update, but write faster really loving this story Jen 2004-11-08 id # 956 I really liked the fact that you changed the calander dates like that Waiting for more to come Bwriter 2004-11-08 id # 958 I know that Willow's fathers name is not Iris in the show - I changed it - I'm basing this father on a friends dad who is called Iris Just Me 2004-11-08 id # 959 Great chapter and great story, please update as soon as you can Just Me 2004-11-23 id # 989 Great chapter, Willow's father deserved more than he got, but he got enough, can't wait for the next chapter. chloe 2004-11-23 id # 990 another excellant chapter, I really can not wait for more in this story acathla queenpandora1079@hotmail.com 2004-12-17 id # 1022 YAY!!!! An update!!!! Can't wait for more keep going!!!!!!!!!!! Acathla ann 2005-01-21 id # 1100 soooooooooooo can't wait for the next part now glad to see you haven't let this story go dead faithfully waiting the next piece Just Me 2005-01-21 id # 1101 SHort chapter, but a great one, which makes the shortness okay with me. ann 2005-02-03 id # 1129 great update I hope you update soon because I am really enjoying this story Just me 2005-02-05 id # 1137 Love the chapter, and i really hope that was spike that turned to dust, update SOON please. Buffy Fan 2005-02-06 id # 1139 That's not fair!!! Just Me 2005-02-07 id # 1144 That has to be one of the most evil cliff hangers EVER, how could you leave it there, oh please update soon, PLEASE. Rin 2005-02-07 id # 1151 You get kudos for having the proverbial balls to leave the story where you do cliffhanger wise. Keeps me coming back for more, and I hope that you keep it up because I want to know what happens!! Just Me 2005-02-09 id # 1156 Great chapter, very inventive way to explain things, glad there is more to come. Buffy Fan 2005-02-09 id # 1158 What kind of better explanation would there be? That was perfect. Buffy Fan 2005-02-16 id # 1176 I am very familiar with the way people write fight scenes. The people who deserve to win them end up losing them. Buffy needs to say something in the next chapter to SHUT XANDER FUCKING HARRIS UP!!!!!!!!!! After that she walks away and everyone lowers their head knowing she is right. Think about Spike talking to Buffy and Angel in Lovers Walk with the Loves Bitch scene and you'll know what I mean. s_b 2005-02-16 id # 1179 nice update. great story:) keep on going! by the way what about your other storys like aftermath and college- i can't wait to read the next chapter! Fan 2005-02-16 id # 1182 Great!!! Buffy Fan 2005-02-16 id # 1183 As long as he didn't get angry like every fanfic makes him do I am all right! Lover of Buffy 2005-02-18 id # 1186 This is a great story. And I am only on the first chapter! Buffy Fan 2005-03-02 id # 1209 Don't make the end of Chapter 19 (Iris planning a trip yada yada yada) the main part of the story. Get away from that as fast as possible. Chloe 2005-03-03 id # 1212 interesting thing you have going there with willow's father. wondering how thats going to play out as you seem to do the unexpected in your stories I liked the sweetness of part 20 and i hope to read more soon s_b 2005-06-25 id # 1544 just this morning i reread aftermath and college and wondered where you went:) glad to see you're back with updates! Rain 2005-06-25 id # 1547 You have to keep the promise of more chapters in the near future because I have been waiting forever for more chapters for any of your stories.Anywho,the update was great.Keep going. Rain Rin 2005-06-28 id # 1559 Hmm...I haven't revisited this story in some time but I'm glad that I did. I'm always glad to see an update from you, and this is no different. drea 2005-07-01 id # 1562 i really like this story, i think its my favorite so far...though i did like the one w/Willow as the slayer.........great work...keep it up!!!!! Rin 2005-07-01 id # 1563 I love your stories, and I'm always glad to see an update. I will keep repeating this nonstop, just to warn you. I love how you work Buffy's demon. I've seen it done similarly in other places but you have the demon and Buffy contrasts worked out to completion, and it makes the fic that much stronger. I'm not so sure about the Dad, though; I want to bitchslap him myself. I like Willow's line: 'Call me when you grow up"...at least I'm presuming that's her line, since it wasn't really indicated in text. It worked more for her, though than him...so I took the assumption, and hoped I wasn't an ass. KieranMc buffy1979@cfl.rr.com 2005-07-04 id # 1567 It Just Keeps getting better and better. The Iris thing confuses me sometimes I forget who he is . I automatically think Ira as willow's dad. Anyhow it's fantastic. I like the interaction between Buffy and Angel. It Totally works. -KMc nuggi 2005-08-24 id # 1672 more more more your stories are all cool just one thing with is bgging me and that is that we need more updates mansonbaby13 mnsonfallower@hotmail.com 2005-10-21 id # 1754 this story is great.....hopefully you will update soon? annon 2005-12-30 id # 2178 Great ending because it leaves it open for more, happy to see this one finished - now what about all the others? ;) bad shot 2005-12-30 id # 2179 just saw your update and you need to make a sequel to it. It is just really good. Lilly 2005-12-30 id # 2180 Excellent story. Although it took 18 months to end, it kept my interest and made me happy each time I saw a new chapter appear. You did a good job with the story line and the characters [esp. B & W, F & A]. Hope that you will some day give us a sequel. Sousa 2005-12-30 id # 2181 It's like watching my baby graduate form High School or College!I'm getting vaclept... And yes,I admit,I was impatient but how can you blame me!?Your such a great writer,you make me latch on to every word and I feel as if I'm experiencing everything with the characters! I love all your stories and can't wait for more updates. Impatiently yours, Sousa Rin 2005-12-30 id # 2182 Another finished story? Be still my heart (though not really)...I think it is a good holiday season. =) July 2006-04-29 id # 3163 Hi! I just wanna tell you that I love your stories. This is the second time i'm reading "Love and everything...", and I love it. I'm waiting to see how your other stories end so... Please!!! Keep writing!!! LunarMiko 2008-04-05 id # 7431 Very nice story. Buffy as a vamp put a nice twist to things. My favorite, of course, is Buffy and Willow are mates. Cute!