Reviews for Graile - Chapter 1 - Welcome to Hemry Jane Doe 2004-09-26 id # 907 This first chapter rocks! (Now that you have fixed the formatting.) I think I read it the first time a few years ago and I loved it then and like it even more now! Really good work! drea 2004-09-27 id # 909 well ive read all 8 before i wanted to comment.......its a very interesting story...it obviously held my attention.....but it gets VERY confusing after a while b/c of all of the different stories Jack has told and never knowing what is realy true......even as the reader.....the earlier stories were easier to follow the latter ones became a tad bit murky and confusion continues to abound...........but hey, i'm willing to ride it out to the end for the simple fact that this is a very new approach to the fanfic line......good luck bhv 2004-09-27 id # 910 I read this before also but it was long enough ago that I can't tell what you've changed in this version. But I loved it the first time and I love it this time, too. Very nice