Reviews for Graile - Chapter 3 - Sunnydale or Bust
mike |
wizathogwarts@yahoo.com |
2004-09-26 |
id # 905 |
I tried to read this but I had to stop without apologies but with regret. While this is a well written story the Buffy/Willow aspect is a sidebar to the Jack Covingtonton testesterone.
The way the story is progressing is really a pulpit for male dominance while allowing the women to feel independant. If this story does at some point transition is where my regret lies because I'll never be albe to read through the bullshit to where what I'm interested in occurs. But hey, that's my preference and I thought I would share it since I don't believe that the first three chapters of this story warrant it being posted on a Buffy/Willow site.
Playing lip service to the relationship of Buffy and Willow is your perogative, but Buffy/Willow readers prefer Buffy/Willow, not the male perspective on how these women should be looked after.
Again, if this story evolves into something more akin to Buffy/Willow, my regrest, but I'm unable to read through the morass of male fantasies to get there. |
mike |
wizathogwarts@yahoo.com |
2004-09-26 |
id # 906 |
p.s.
Just another example of how you're not with the program, Buffy Anne Summers is her legal name. Her name never was and never will be Elizabeth. But for authentic Buffy/Willow fics written by sincere writers who were mistaken, we overlook this transgression. |
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