Reviews for The real high school sweethearts ITF 2004-11-13 id # 968 I strongly suggest that you get a beta reader. The grammar errors throughout the story are quite distracting. Your summary alone has a spelling error and a grammar error in it. This does not make people want to read your story. drea 2004-11-13 id # 969 interesting storyline, i look forward to seeing where you go with it.......HOWEVER, you need either a beta reader or you need to edit the story yourself before posting...lots of typos and grammar issues detracted from the story...... bwriter feedbacktome@hotmail.com 2004-11-14 id # 970 liking this story so far and hope to read more soon Buffyken 2004-11-17 id # 978 wow! very well written, cool rewrite Buffyken 2004-11-18 id # 981 ok� there're some errors in but i meant the story is well written i love to read fic's who involve lines of the real show, from time to time so don't give up because of the first 2 reviewers said some "bad stuff" about those errors, just read it very carefull yourself (or beta-reader) and correct good luck KieranMc buffy1979@cfl.rr.com 2005-07-13 id # 1582 Great concept. Though the pov is weird. Can't tell if it's willow, or third person cause it keeps shifting. please post more. -KMc