Reviews for Angels Fall First
Rin 2005-05-14 id # 1418
Another good part of the story. I think it's funny how you use the cliff hangers, and that's a great storytelling tactic if done properly, which you have done in both of these stories. I hope to see the next part soon!


sheena 2005-05-15 id # 1422
you are mean for leaving me hanging like that could you update soon


Bob Head frank_8281@yahoo.com 2005-05-16 id # 1428
You know, this is a really good story, though a tad confusing. Also a little depressing. Wake Will up soon please. Thanks, B.


slayergirl23 2005-05-16 id # 1432
Awesome update! It was very emotional. I was so happy during the movie part, but a part of me knew that Willow wasn't awake yet. I hope she wakes up soon. I can't wait for more.


raven raven_willow@hotmail.co.uk 2005-10-29 id # 1775
more more more please this is awsome


helen hez2004@hotmail.com 2005-12-08 id # 1993
u have got to keep going with this! i'm hooked, so more soon please!