Reviews for Impressionable Sorrows
KieranMc |
buffy1979@cfl.rr.com |
2005-08-08 |
id # 1639 |
Wow, really good. Nice to have a different take on the whole situation. I like the new Faith. -KMc |
paradocs |
2005-08-08 |
id # 1645 |
Hello,
I really enjoyed 'Reactions and Admissions' (was that your first B/W story?), and I am -- so far -- enjoying this. The evolution of Faith is great; I like Faith and it's nice to see her get a second chance.
I don't know if these suggestions would be helpful but here they are anyway --
Don't rush Faiths acceptance and forgiveness; Angels ability to forgive and offer assistance is appropriate considering his own violent past.
Don't rush rush the romance --
It would be interesting to see how or if Faith can adapt to the prospect of something longer lasting than one night, but so many stories have the characters falling in love so quickly that the anticipation is lost.
Again, these are only suggestions -- things that I've noticed having read way too much B/W fanfic.
I really like this -- it's well written and has an interesting perspective. I'm waiting patiently for the next update and am happily anticipating where you will lead characters and us.
Thank you,
Paradocs |
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