KieranMc		2005-11-01	id # 1782
Wow, This story was really intense. The flow is fantastic. It gels together so well, Your writing style improves with every story. Please keep them coming. I'd like to see where this one will go, please continue. -KMc

Lilly	LilPB428@aol.com	2005-11-01	id # 1783
Really enjoyed this story. You showed us quite a different side of Willow. Liked the way you told the story from the point of view of each girl. You did an excellent job with such a short story. Would love to see where the two go from here. Please continue the story or write a sequel. Can just imagine Buffy taking Willow home to her nin [Joyce].