Reviews for The hook up KieranMc 2005-12-03 id # 1935 Huh? I'm sorry but I am having a hard time following the story. It jumps around a lot and doesn't make much sense. In the nicest way possible to say this I suggest a major re-write and a beta. -KMc Pizza boy www.cheer@twcny.rr.com 2005-12-03 id # 1936 I was reallly good aron 2005-12-04 id # 1942 it was a little hard to follow, but good story! Lee 2005-12-04 id # 1947 Thanks for the Great Story, I liked it very much. tommy 2005-12-04 id # 1948 Hard to follow good start though. Was this your first fic, you shoul really keep writing tiff 2005-12-04 id # 1950 It was good Steph 2005-12-05 id # 1961 It was good megan 2005-12-31 id # 2184 I liked the story alot Freddy 2006-03-05 id # 2759 Good story Freddy 2006-03-05 id # 2760 Good story