Reviews for Mending
| Rin |
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2005-12-03 |
id # 1939 |
| Okay...this is kinda interesting...I'd like to see where you're going w/ it... |
| KieranMc |
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2005-12-04 |
id # 1946 |
| Interesting, I like it, Can't wait to see what happens next. More Please.-KMc |
| Rin |
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2005-12-04 |
id # 1954 |
| Okay...I'm confused...a little bit of hairdye and people don't recognize her as Buffy? |
| drea |
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2005-12-06 |
id # 1968 |
| intriguing though this story is........suggestions coming up:a little context would be helpful: a timeline, even an AU timeline might do the trick; and instead of using characters (*********** or !!!!!!!!!!!!) to break up space, why not just use SPACING, a paragraph break would make this story more reader friendly :-) |
| Lilly |
LilPB428@aol.com |
2005-12-06 |
id # 1969 |
Quite interesting. I'm figuring besides the hair dye - maybe some makeup and well as the injuries helped hide B's identity. Can't wait for more. What happened between B & W to cause her to leave?
Where did she go? What will happen when they see each other? How are they going to give the First and Caleb what they deserve? Will B & W get together? Who will Kennedy end up with? Maybe Faith?
Good luck with your Math.
But more soon please. |
| Rin |
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2005-12-07 |
id # 1987 |
| Hmm...wonder just HOW bad... |
| Rin |
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2005-12-09 |
id # 2000 |
| I'm so confused...but that's nothing new. LOL. =) |
| KieranMc |
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2005-12-09 |
id # 2001 |
| Interesting. It's still a little jumpy, but it's coming together. -KMc |
| willowlover |
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2005-12-09 |
id # 2002 |
| This is great. |
| Lilly |
LilPB428@aol.com |
2005-12-10 |
id # 2004 |
| Really like how the story is going. W&B's eventual meeting is very good. So Faith won her bet with Xander - not surprising. Enjoying the story very much - but if you could be, maybe, a little more careful with the actual writing. Sometimes the sentences are confusing and interrupt the flow of the story. Looking forward to you next update. |
| wicked |
2005-12-14 |
id # 2027 |
| Nice job on this story :) I like it. |
| Rin |
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2005-12-14 |
id # 2036 |
| Okay...I'm confused...did she actually drink the beer, or just lug it around in her coat pocket for decorative purposes??? |
| KieranMc |
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2005-12-14 |
id # 2038 |
| So Buffy's a boozehound? Okay, Well good chapter.-KMc |
| KieranMc |
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2005-12-16 |
id # 2043 |
| Confused ? Yes very much so. Waiting for the pieces to fall together.-KMc |
| Rin |
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2005-12-16 |
id # 2044 |
| As always...I'm flippin' confused!! Told you it was nothing new! LOL. |
| Bob Head |
frank_8281@yahoo.com |
2005-12-17 |
id # 2046 |
| Confused? there's the understatement of the decade. Still, it's pretty good. |
| Lilly |
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2005-12-22 |
id # 2096 |
| I am still a bit confused but it still seems interesting. Buffy apparently still has a drinking problem, and Willow pretended to be Evil Willow or, was it maybe the First to get into Buffy's mind. What about the Ritual and why did that and what Willow saw in Buffy's mind about Tara make Buffy pass out again? Did she really die and come back after Willow threw her out? Update soon. |
| Nicole |
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2007-09-30 |
id # 6530 |
| Really like how the story is going. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon |
| Bryan |
robbinsbm@uindy.edu |
2007-11-05 |
id # 6758 |
| Please continue |
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