Reviews for Confessions from the Bus
James Williams |
uj18@onemain.com |
2005-12-29 |
id # 2158 |
This was Really really really good! Angsty but hopeful. It struck the perfect balance. I love the Idea of a fresh start. Yes there's baggage but now that they're TALKING again its nothing that has to get in their way. I hope you continue this. I'd perdonally love to see a series. One small spelling quibble that you should be made aware of so in fture it won't distract your readers. The word is m-a-y-b-e, MAYBE, Not trying to nag I swear. I justknow little things like that can pull a reader out of the story. And your writings to good. I don't want people loosing focus on your story telling. And get sidtracked by little shit. Anyway I really enjoyed this. And I hope you continue. |
wicked |
slayer1252001@yahoo.com |
2005-12-29 |
id # 2159 |
I really liked this one and I think you made the emotions very believable. Good job :) |
KieranMc |
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2005-12-29 |
id # 2161 |
Buffy vulnerable and decimated the way she would be after everything that happened ,very good. Usually it's Buffy that has to prove her love to Willow, It's a nice change of pace. I'd like to see where this goes. -KMc |
Rin |
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2005-12-29 |
id # 2162 |
This is actually my fav story from you so far. =) |
Scott |
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2005-12-29 |
id # 2163 |
This is an AMAZING story and I want to see how they end up.
The emotion in this is so...I wish I could write like this. :p
Though noticed a few spelling errors too...it was still great though. The maybe thing kinda annoyed me but it's really small cosmetically.
More, more, more! |
Tim |
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2005-12-29 |
id # 2164 |
this is a really good story. it is also plausible that Buffy could have felt that way after the fight. I think you should continue this story. |
drea |
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2005-12-29 |
id # 2165 |
i really liked this fic...it was good closure regarding the whole "kicking Buffy out".......i'd really like to read more...please continue :-) |
Lee |
2005-12-30 |
id # 2174 |
First of all that was great second of all i vote sequal. :-D
love; Lee |
slayergirl23 |
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2005-12-30 |
id # 2175 |
I really enjoyed this fic. I think your writing is great, and you put a lot of emotion into it. I would love to read more. |
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