Reviews for Leaving Her
Rin |
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2006-01-12 |
id # 2354 |
Explain away!! I like how it' s developing so far...just...keep it up!!! |
tim |
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2006-01-12 |
id # 2357 |
love this beginning, maybe Buffy leaving will knock some sense into Willow. please continue |
Sousa |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2358 |
This is looking good,but Montana?Isn't that a bit far fetched,maybe to another Cali. city or even Nevada or Oregon but Mont.'s a bit far.But don't listen to me,just my input. |
Salix |
2006-01-13 |
id # 2359 |
I got a way better idea of where this story should go so it isn't going to be Montana, I still need to go in and fix that. So I'll go do that right now. |
Rin |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2360 |
Even though it's jumbled, and jumps from place to place, I don't mind as much b/c the story line is great...
You should definitely keep this story going, and as often as possible, update!! |
tim |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2361 |
boy this sounds like this story is going to be a downer for awhile. I'm liking it though. keep up the good work |
slayergirl23 |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2362 |
I'm enjoying this so far, and can't wait to see where it's going. Update soon please. |
Rin |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2364 |
Dammit!! This story is just coming along so great!!
I want to see them back together so bad...and I want Willow to prove she can do it!
I want Buffy to see that Willow can do it...but how? How, damn you??!?!?!?!?!?!?!! |
Rin |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2365 |
I haven't watched but a few episodes of the Gilmore Girls...so I have absolutely no idea...
...just as long as it's very, very, very temporary, and Willow comes trekking back, sweeps her off her feet, and all is well in the B/W verse...lol. |
Sousa |
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2006-01-13 |
id # 2367 |
In the fic verse I tend to be more pro Buffy but I find I'm disliking her for the way she's acting.And that's cool,keep going. |
tim |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2369 |
tara is a great choice because she will be able to see that Buffy isn't over Willow as much as she thinks she is. |
Rin |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2371 |
You say 'don't stone me to death' after I start throwing stones...argh!!!
I was so upset b/c I couldn't get IKOLY to work all day, and it finally did, and voila! An update on this story! I was jumping in my seat!
Now...we just have to stop stoning you to death long enough to get you to write another few updates...and soon...or else, we'll double the stones in size and weight! |
Salix |
2006-01-14 |
id # 2372 |
well, it's good to feel loved.
just be patient, they'll be together soon, but a lot of patience will be needed on the reader's part. and please, no more stones, I got enough of those from a very unhappy reader from another website that I'm posting this on. |
Rin |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2374 |
That was actually a very realistic response...kudos!!
I'm excited to see where she goes...keep it up!! I'll bug you until you do!!!!!! |
tim |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2376 |
well that was fun. I think Buffy going to have bigger problems with Emily now. poor Tara had to listen to the whole exchange. |
tim |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2378 |
poor Buffy, now she doesn't have the entire country to keep her from Willow. she is in trouble, goodie goodie |
Sousa |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2379 |
This is so well writin' that when Emily gets angry I get angry,and that's just foolish because I know they'll get back together.Buffy gonna have to grovel until the end of time for forgiveness when they do get back together. |
Rin |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2380 |
Oh...happy day...when lots of updates come my way...
This story is just coming along...and I'm so happy...
I'm going into work now, and when I get back home in 4 hours, I want to see what happens next!!!!!! LOL.
No pressure, or anything like that... |
Rin |
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2006-01-14 |
id # 2383 |
So...is that the end of 'Leaving her?' Are you gonna do a sequel called...'Getting Back with Her?' LOL.
B/c you totally should...I hate to see this story go byebye...especially since so much is left undone... |
Sousa |
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2006-01-15 |
id # 2385 |
That's it?That was quick!*Scene impression*Oh hey,just returning Emily's book.'Do you want a drink!?'Um,Coke.*glomps Willow*Happy Ending.This was good. |
Rin |
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2006-01-15 |
id # 2390 |
I can't believe that the way I'm sure Buffy and Willow (along with the gang) bred it into Emily not to go out after dark, and not pay attention to your surroundings, that she'd be a dumbass like that...
I am glad you put the Tara top in there, though...brings about some tension, and possible 'whoisit' type of deal... |
tim |
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2006-01-15 |
id # 2393 |
well that doesn't sound good, at least Em's moms won't be able to ground if she's hurt. update soon |
Rin |
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2006-01-16 |
id # 2394 |
Okay, I'm a little confused...there's an experienced slayer that lives so far away...and is coming to them, or is in Sunnydale?
That part confused me. Are there two experienced slayers? One in Sunnydale, and then Faith??
LOL. Glad to see some updates...woot! |
drea |
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2006-01-16 |
id # 2396 |
ok i wasn't sure about this one at first, but after reading it..........i think you're doing a great job, can't wait for more! |
Salix |
2006-01-16 |
id # 2397 |
Well that means a lot coming from you, considering you yelled at me in your review of 'New in Town'. I'm glad you like it, thanks for reviewing. Keep reading, more is on the way. |
tim |
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2006-01-16 |
id # 2398 |
boy Spike's just asking for an ass-kicking. |
Rin |
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2006-01-16 |
id # 2399 |
Spike, eh?? Hmm...didn't see that one coming at all...lol. Actually, yeah I did...lol. I like it, though...
Every time you update, I put more of my boulder stones away...lol. |
Rin |
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2006-01-16 |
id # 2404 |
Must know...who...is behind...door number two... |
Bad shot |
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2006-01-16 |
id # 2405 |
Tara maybe I don't know update soon |
tim |
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2006-01-17 |
id # 2406 |
boy you know how to work the suspense. keep it up |
Rin |
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2006-01-18 |
id # 2412 |
Where did you go.... =-( |
Rin |
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2006-01-18 |
id # 2414 |
You'd better not abandon it!!! You can't leave the poor kid with Spike!!! |
Rin |
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2006-01-23 |
id # 2434 |
Yes, yes...all is well...but not all is resolved. Will there be a 1:19 in the morning sequel, or are we looking at the end for good? |
tim |
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2006-01-23 |
id # 2437 |
great ending, glad to see Emily felt at the end |
Rin |
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2006-01-24 |
id # 2442 |
Much better in the non-rushed variety. It was a shame to see such a good plot structure end so quickly and non-structural. Does that make sense? This is much better...though I'm not sure how Willow found out that Buffy slept with another woman. She didn't have confirmation, did she? Just that Buffy had a larger shirt... |
tim |
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2006-01-25 |
id # 2445 |
that was a seriously disturbing description of what Buffy did to Spike, but glad to see everybody made it out in one piece. |
Rin |
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2006-01-25 |
id # 2446 |
Yay yay yay!!! I'm glad to see this story developing more!! I wonder what Faith's return will mean...and I still wanna know how Willow reacts to finding out Buffy slept with Tara!! |
tim |
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2006-01-25 |
id # 2447 |
loved the vampire staking contest. Glad to see Faith letting the girls have fun even while being the responsible adult. |
tim |
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2006-02-07 |
id # 2525 |
boy you're giving the girls a real hard time before giving them happiness, huh. |
Rin |
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2006-02-07 |
id # 2528 |
Hmm...this kid is more messed up than I was...lol. |
tim |
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2006-02-23 |
id # 2688 |
another great chapter, I'm glad to see that Emily is finally coming clean with her moms. |
Rin |
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2006-02-23 |
id # 2693 |
Finally got around to the update!! YAY!!!
Looks like things are becoming clearer in the house of Slayer. LOL. |
tim |
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2006-02-28 |
id # 2731 |
interesting, please continue |
Rin |
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2006-03-01 |
id # 2734 |
Hmm...you've got me (and the rest of us) curious now... |
s_b |
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2006-03-03 |
id # 2746 |
thanks for the updates!!
hope there's more to come soon (call me greedy) i want them back together!! |
Chase |
chaseherchiss@hotmail.com |
2006-03-03 |
id # 2747 |
The end of this post kinda scares me. I'm a lurker but i'll review to help keep you sane!!
I really like this story. I didn't think I would like it because typically stories with kids in them (teenagers especially) tend to take too much focus off of the main characters. However, you have a really nice balance going on, and I find myself thinking Emily really is a good mix between the two of them personality wise!
The update before this last one left me crying this morning when I read it. I felt so horribly bad for Buffy, because i've been there personally. Before I embraced my saphic self, the guy I was dating and not dating, then dating again, then not dating slept with my best friend and she ended up pregnant. There is no worse feeling than to put your trust and faith in someone and have them slap you in the face with it.
Your story is very nicely written, but it would be cool if there was more Willow. She seems like an afterthought up and until these last two chapters. Which is fine, but i'm all about the Willowygoodness! :)
Chase |
tim |
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2006-03-03 |
id # 2748 |
loved the new updates. can't wait to see how much groveling Buffy is going to do. please continue. |
Rin |
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2006-03-03 |
id # 2749 |
Damn...lol. That was harsh...
I can see Buffy getting mad, and rushing off like that. I can see her kicking Willow out...but to not even give her the benefit of the doubt?? Especially with the way they've lived their lives...
I predicted the pregnancy right...but still am curious who gave the dove to begin with...and why, for that matter. Also, I wanna see how Willow proves that she's innocent...well, in terms of not cheating...lol. |
Rin |
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2006-03-03 |
id # 2750 |
Woohoo!!! I love you right now. Three updates...
Awww...I love this story. Glad that Faith had enough sense to just say no. LOL. |
bad shot |
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2006-03-03 |
id # 2751 |
I love it. Really want to see were you go with it. Interested to see what Willow has been doing since Buffy kicked her out. |
Sami |
thejellybeancook@yahoo.com |
2006-03-08 |
id # 2787 |
Hey, this story is great...Please please please write more?? I just now got time to read the new chapters, but now I'm all enthralled and whatnot...so uh yeah, please write more? :D -Sami |
bad shot |
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2006-03-12 |
id # 2864 |
I still like this. I want you to update soon. Not too long. Definetly not boring. |
bwriter |
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2006-03-12 |
id # 2865 |
so... whens the next update then? |
s_b |
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2006-03-12 |
id # 2866 |
i really love this story and missed the updates! may we please have some more?:) |
tim |
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2006-03-12 |
id # 2869 |
hopefully Buffy and Willow can get back together to care of one another. please continue soon |
Rin |
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2006-03-12 |
id # 2873 |
Too long?? No...I like epics...lol. You're just starting to explore a new path between the two, so you should definitely (if nothing else) finish that storyline. I'm not bored...by far, I'm not bored. You could tell you were tired, though (from the writing this time...I get the same way...lol)...but no big deal. =) |
Anon |
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2007-06-19 |
id # 5704 |
I really like this story and would like you to update it but if not thanks for writing it! I enjoyed it alot. Of course now I'll be left woundering what happened forever and ever! |
Ahn |
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2007-06-29 |
id # 5777 |
I just reread this story like last week so it's great that you updated it! I can't wait to see how you end this story! Update again soon! |
kirky |
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2007-06-30 |
id # 5780 |
great chapter glad this story as been picked up again
cant wait for next chapter, update again soon please :) |
zigpal |
2007-06-30 |
id # 5785 |
great update. It's about time Buffy gets things right, and you gotta love her positive attitude with her and Willow's happiness. I can't wait to see Emily's reaction to her other mom being home now. |
Sousa |
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2007-06-30 |
id # 5791 |
This has been on this site since 2006 and I never noticed!?I loved this story!There has got to be a sequel or something,this has easily become one of my favorites. |
Sousa |
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2007-06-30 |
id # 5792 |
Scratch that above,I DID know about this :) .It's just been gone from my attention for so long that it was like reading a whole new story.Glad it was picked up again. |
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