Reviews for Leaving Her
Rin 2006-01-12 id # 2354
Explain away!! I like how it' s developing so far...just...keep it up!!!


tim 2006-01-12 id # 2357
love this beginning, maybe Buffy leaving will knock some sense into Willow. please continue


Sousa 2006-01-13 id # 2358
This is looking good,but Montana?Isn't that a bit far fetched,maybe to another Cali. city or even Nevada or Oregon but Mont.'s a bit far.But don't listen to me,just my input.


Salix 2006-01-13 id # 2359
I got a way better idea of where this story should go so it isn't going to be Montana, I still need to go in and fix that. So I'll go do that right now.


Rin 2006-01-13 id # 2360
Even though it's jumbled, and jumps from place to place, I don't mind as much b/c the story line is great...

You should definitely keep this story going, and as often as possible, update!!


tim 2006-01-13 id # 2361
boy this sounds like this story is going to be a downer for awhile. I'm liking it though. keep up the good work


slayergirl23 2006-01-13 id # 2362
I'm enjoying this so far, and can't wait to see where it's going. Update soon please.


Rin 2006-01-13 id # 2364
Dammit!! This story is just coming along so great!!

I want to see them back together so bad...and I want Willow to prove she can do it!

I want Buffy to see that Willow can do it...but how? How, damn you??!?!?!?!?!?!?!!


Rin 2006-01-13 id # 2365
I haven't watched but a few episodes of the Gilmore Girls...so I have absolutely no idea...

...just as long as it's very, very, very temporary, and Willow comes trekking back, sweeps her off her feet, and all is well in the B/W verse...lol.


Sousa 2006-01-13 id # 2367
In the fic verse I tend to be more pro Buffy but I find I'm disliking her for the way she's acting.And that's cool,keep going.


tim 2006-01-14 id # 2369
tara is a great choice because she will be able to see that Buffy isn't over Willow as much as she thinks she is.


Rin 2006-01-14 id # 2371
You say 'don't stone me to death' after I start throwing stones...argh!!!

I was so upset b/c I couldn't get IKOLY to work all day, and it finally did, and voila! An update on this story! I was jumping in my seat!

Now...we just have to stop stoning you to death long enough to get you to write another few updates...and soon...or else, we'll double the stones in size and weight!


Salix 2006-01-14 id # 2372
well, it's good to feel loved.

just be patient, they'll be together soon, but a lot of patience will be needed on the reader's part. and please, no more stones, I got enough of those from a very unhappy reader from another website that I'm posting this on.


Rin 2006-01-14 id # 2374
That was actually a very realistic response...kudos!!

I'm excited to see where she goes...keep it up!! I'll bug you until you do!!!!!!


tim 2006-01-14 id # 2376
well that was fun. I think Buffy going to have bigger problems with Emily now. poor Tara had to listen to the whole exchange.


tim 2006-01-14 id # 2378
poor Buffy, now she doesn't have the entire country to keep her from Willow. she is in trouble, goodie goodie


Sousa 2006-01-14 id # 2379
This is so well writin' that when Emily gets angry I get angry,and that's just foolish because I know they'll get back together.Buffy gonna have to grovel until the end of time for forgiveness when they do get back together.


Rin 2006-01-14 id # 2380
Oh...happy day...when lots of updates come my way...

This story is just coming along...and I'm so happy...

I'm going into work now, and when I get back home in 4 hours, I want to see what happens next!!!!!! LOL.
No pressure, or anything like that...


Rin 2006-01-14 id # 2383
So...is that the end of 'Leaving her?' Are you gonna do a sequel called...'Getting Back with Her?' LOL.

B/c you totally should...I hate to see this story go byebye...especially since so much is left undone...


Sousa 2006-01-15 id # 2385
That's it?That was quick!*Scene impression*Oh hey,just returning Emily's book.'Do you want a drink!?'Um,Coke.*glomps Willow*Happy Ending.This was good.


Rin 2006-01-15 id # 2390
I can't believe that the way I'm sure Buffy and Willow (along with the gang) bred it into Emily not to go out after dark, and not pay attention to your surroundings, that she'd be a dumbass like that...

I am glad you put the Tara top in there, though...brings about some tension, and possible 'whoisit' type of deal...


tim 2006-01-15 id # 2393
well that doesn't sound good, at least Em's moms won't be able to ground if she's hurt. update soon


Rin 2006-01-16 id # 2394
Okay, I'm a little confused...there's an experienced slayer that lives so far away...and is coming to them, or is in Sunnydale?

That part confused me. Are there two experienced slayers? One in Sunnydale, and then Faith??

LOL. Glad to see some updates...woot!


drea 2006-01-16 id # 2396
ok i wasn't sure about this one at first, but after reading it..........i think you're doing a great job, can't wait for more!


Salix 2006-01-16 id # 2397
Well that means a lot coming from you, considering you yelled at me in your review of 'New in Town'. I'm glad you like it, thanks for reviewing. Keep reading, more is on the way.


tim 2006-01-16 id # 2398
boy Spike's just asking for an ass-kicking.


Rin 2006-01-16 id # 2399
Spike, eh?? Hmm...didn't see that one coming at all...lol. Actually, yeah I did...lol. I like it, though...

Every time you update, I put more of my boulder stones away...lol.


Rin 2006-01-16 id # 2404
Must know...who...is behind...door number two...


Bad shot 2006-01-16 id # 2405
Tara maybe I don't know update soon


tim 2006-01-17 id # 2406
boy you know how to work the suspense. keep it up


Rin 2006-01-18 id # 2412
Where did you go.... =-(


Rin 2006-01-18 id # 2414
You'd better not abandon it!!! You can't leave the poor kid with Spike!!!


Rin 2006-01-23 id # 2434
Yes, yes...all is well...but not all is resolved. Will there be a 1:19 in the morning sequel, or are we looking at the end for good?


tim 2006-01-23 id # 2437
great ending, glad to see Emily felt at the end


Rin 2006-01-24 id # 2442
Much better in the non-rushed variety. It was a shame to see such a good plot structure end so quickly and non-structural. Does that make sense? This is much better...though I'm not sure how Willow found out that Buffy slept with another woman. She didn't have confirmation, did she? Just that Buffy had a larger shirt...


tim 2006-01-25 id # 2445
that was a seriously disturbing description of what Buffy did to Spike, but glad to see everybody made it out in one piece.


Rin 2006-01-25 id # 2446
Yay yay yay!!! I'm glad to see this story developing more!! I wonder what Faith's return will mean...and I still wanna know how Willow reacts to finding out Buffy slept with Tara!!


tim 2006-01-25 id # 2447
loved the vampire staking contest. Glad to see Faith letting the girls have fun even while being the responsible adult.


tim 2006-02-07 id # 2525
boy you're giving the girls a real hard time before giving them happiness, huh.


Rin 2006-02-07 id # 2528
Hmm...this kid is more messed up than I was...lol.


tim 2006-02-23 id # 2688
another great chapter, I'm glad to see that Emily is finally coming clean with her moms.


Rin 2006-02-23 id # 2693
Finally got around to the update!! YAY!!!

Looks like things are becoming clearer in the house of Slayer. LOL.


tim 2006-02-28 id # 2731
interesting, please continue


Rin 2006-03-01 id # 2734
Hmm...you've got me (and the rest of us) curious now...


s_b 2006-03-03 id # 2746
thanks for the updates!!
hope there's more to come soon (call me greedy) i want them back together!!


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-03 id # 2747
The end of this post kinda scares me. I'm a lurker but i'll review to help keep you sane!!

I really like this story. I didn't think I would like it because typically stories with kids in them (teenagers especially) tend to take too much focus off of the main characters. However, you have a really nice balance going on, and I find myself thinking Emily really is a good mix between the two of them personality wise!

The update before this last one left me crying this morning when I read it. I felt so horribly bad for Buffy, because i've been there personally. Before I embraced my saphic self, the guy I was dating and not dating, then dating again, then not dating slept with my best friend and she ended up pregnant. There is no worse feeling than to put your trust and faith in someone and have them slap you in the face with it.

Your story is very nicely written, but it would be cool if there was more Willow. She seems like an afterthought up and until these last two chapters. Which is fine, but i'm all about the Willowygoodness! :)

Chase


tim 2006-03-03 id # 2748
loved the new updates. can't wait to see how much groveling Buffy is going to do. please continue.


Rin 2006-03-03 id # 2749
Damn...lol. That was harsh...

I can see Buffy getting mad, and rushing off like that. I can see her kicking Willow out...but to not even give her the benefit of the doubt?? Especially with the way they've lived their lives...

I predicted the pregnancy right...but still am curious who gave the dove to begin with...and why, for that matter. Also, I wanna see how Willow proves that she's innocent...well, in terms of not cheating...lol.


Rin 2006-03-03 id # 2750
Woohoo!!! I love you right now. Three updates...

Awww...I love this story. Glad that Faith had enough sense to just say no. LOL.


bad shot 2006-03-03 id # 2751
I love it. Really want to see were you go with it. Interested to see what Willow has been doing since Buffy kicked her out.


Sami thejellybeancook@yahoo.com 2006-03-08 id # 2787
Hey, this story is great...Please please please write more?? I just now got time to read the new chapters, but now I'm all enthralled and whatnot...so uh yeah, please write more? :D -Sami


bad shot 2006-03-12 id # 2864
I still like this. I want you to update soon. Not too long. Definetly not boring.


bwriter 2006-03-12 id # 2865
so... whens the next update then?


s_b 2006-03-12 id # 2866
i really love this story and missed the updates! may we please have some more?:)


tim 2006-03-12 id # 2869
hopefully Buffy and Willow can get back together to care of one another. please continue soon


Rin 2006-03-12 id # 2873
Too long?? No...I like epics...lol. You're just starting to explore a new path between the two, so you should definitely (if nothing else) finish that storyline. I'm not bored...by far, I'm not bored. You could tell you were tired, though (from the writing this time...I get the same way...lol)...but no big deal. =)


Anon 2007-06-19 id # 5704
I really like this story and would like you to update it but if not thanks for writing it! I enjoyed it alot. Of course now I'll be left woundering what happened forever and ever!


Ahn 2007-06-29 id # 5777
I just reread this story like last week so it's great that you updated it! I can't wait to see how you end this story! Update again soon!


kirky 2007-06-30 id # 5780
great chapter glad this story as been picked up again
cant wait for next chapter, update again soon please :)


zigpal 2007-06-30 id # 5785
great update. It's about time Buffy gets things right, and you gotta love her positive attitude with her and Willow's happiness. I can't wait to see Emily's reaction to her other mom being home now.


Sousa 2007-06-30 id # 5791
This has been on this site since 2006 and I never noticed!?I loved this story!There has got to be a sequel or something,this has easily become one of my favorites.


Sousa 2007-06-30 id # 5792
Scratch that above,I DID know about this :) .It's just been gone from my attention for so long that it was like reading a whole new story.Glad it was picked up again.