Reviews for North and South...and West
tim 2006-03-06 id # 2764
love the start of this. I can't wait to see where you go with this.


RedMagic crimsonredmagic@hotmail.com 2006-03-06 id # 2765
Good Job so far. Look forward to reading more.


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-06 id # 2766
Love what I've read so far! Against this backdrop anything is possible!!! More please!


DawnBTVS harleyquinnmark@yahoo.com 2006-03-06 id # 2767
Awesome. I love historical fiction so this is getting me excited.


DawnBTVS harleyquinnmark@yahoo.com 2006-03-06 id # 2769
Aww...sweet ending. *liking this a lot*


drea 2006-03-06 id # 2770
cute so far.........looking forward to more


valens 2006-03-06 id # 2771
You have the weirdest premises for fics, Rin. And I'm such a sucker for the new and strange. Write faster? Please?


tim 2006-03-07 id # 2772
well those were sad chapters please continue


slayergirl23 2006-03-07 id # 2774
I must say, you seriously come up with some different ideas. I think it's great, and I am really enjoying. Please update soon.


Sousa 2006-03-07 id # 2782
That's sad as hell.You've only made my dislike of Xander grow as well.


Sousa 2006-03-07 id # 2786
I seriously hope this wedding is derailed cause I can't stand the thought of Xander even kissing Buff.And Willow needs to get her head out her ass!But,look at all these updates!Woo!


tim 2006-03-08 id # 2788
something tells me Willow won't be getting her happy. please continue soon.


drea 2006-03-08 id # 2791
very imaginative..........im a sucker for historical fics.......and this one is so good.....can't wait to see what happens next!


slayergirl23 2006-03-08 id # 2801
Yessss! Loved the update. I hope B/W will end up together and happy. Can't wait for more.


Sousa 2006-03-08 id # 2803
Willow is still so...Arg!~.~And Joyce is a bi-atch.


tim 2006-03-09 id # 2805
well that just sucks. please continue soon


KieranMcKellen 2006-03-09 id # 2807
WOW! Never thought about a concept like this before. I love It ! The North & The South Wiffy Style. Please more, please! - KMc


Chaseher 2006-03-09 id # 2808
I'm so in love with this story! It's so different from any B&W fic i've ever read that I have nothing to compare it to. Therefore, it's in a class by itself!


DawnBTVS harleyquinnmark@yahoo.com 2006-03-09 id # 2811
I'm loving this story, Rin. Keep up the fun work!


slayergirl23 2006-03-09 id # 2813
Love the update Rin. Keep up the wonderful writing. I can't wait for more.


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-09 id # 2824
Ok this is just too good for my little heart (which is beating really fast) to believe. I just know you'll throw a monkey wrench in their plans somehow. So umm do it quickly so we can get back to the happies!!!!! hehehehe


tim 2006-03-09 id # 2827
well this should be a fun wedding. please continue soon


bwriter feedbacktome@hotmail.com 2006-03-10 id # 2832
I have fallen in love with this story and cannot wait to see if finished


slayergirl23 2006-03-10 id # 2848
Woo hoo. That's a wonderful turn of events. I hope their plan goes off without any problems. Update soon please.


tim 2006-03-14 id # 2890
loving this, please continue soon


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-14 id # 2892
Wow, so not what I expected to happen, I love twisties! Me thinks Dr. Giles has a bit of a soft spot for the lady of the house. So Xanders out of the picture but what about Riley? Hmmmm More please!!!!!!


slayergirl23 2006-03-14 id # 2895
Great update Rin. I think I actually yelled at the computer when I read that Xander and Anya got married first. I just knew it was a set up for disaster. I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon.


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-14 id # 2907
That chapter title scared the crap out of me LOL! Whew married at last, i'm so happy for them! I really enjoyed reading this chapter. You have a very subtle way of explaining intense emotions and feelings. I like it a lot! There's more right?? Right!?!!?!?


tim 2006-03-15 id # 2908
looks like everybody is finally happy. hopefully Joyce will be fine. please continue soon


drea 2006-03-15 id # 2909
i've told you i like this stroy right??????? well I was kinda expecting something more from the actual "marriage" scene since there was such a build up to it.....i don't know, maybe it was just me...........but i really really like this story........and it sound like its coming to an end :-(


slayergirl23 2006-03-15 id # 2915
Finally! Thank you. Great update Rin. Can't wait for more.


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-17 id # 2945
Yeah two more updates!! I love the playfullness between Will and Buffy. It's the details in your writing that I have come to really enjoy. Joyce remarks about the softness of Wills hands and face, Buffy's flowery kiss! It's all a part of what makes your writing fun to read! More please!


drea 2006-03-17 id # 2947
aaawww.........the sweetness of this story is giving me a tooth ache.........but don't think i don't love it....you've done a great job! it's one of my favs!!!!!!!!


tim 2006-03-17 id # 2953
great updates, continue soon


bwriter 2006-03-18 id # 2956
cant wait to see what you have coming


slayergirl23 2006-03-18 id # 2957
Great writing Rin. I can't wait to see what yo have in mind.


phantom.ryder altair_rox_as@hotmail.com 2006-03-20 id # 2983
aww sweet sweet love!! they're so damn cute together! all giving and self-sacrificing! great warm fuzzies material! keep it up, it's great!


tim 2006-03-21 id # 2986
still lovong this. more please


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-03-21 id # 2990
This story just gets better and bettter and better! I love it! More please!


drea 2006-03-21 id # 2991
yyyaaaahhhhh!!!!!!!! the drama continues!!!! you keep gettin betta and betta!!!!


phantom altair_rox_as@hotmail.com 2006-03-22 id # 3008
lol singing Dawn! man a house already, our kiddies are growing up! (uh oh though, grandma seems pretty eager for a grandchild!) thanks for the update! :) keep it up please.


bwriter 2006-03-22 id # 3009
excellent as always


tim 2006-03-22 id # 3010
good to see Joyce finally take a liking to Will(ow). update soon


phantom altair_rox_as@hotmail.com 2006-03-23 id # 3019
*sits and waits for update* ... Man hurry up! my refresh button finger is getting tired! :P lol just kidding. .... no actually Im not, need update!! ... *sits and waits some more*


tim 2006-04-02 id # 3070
love Willow teasing Buffy over her jealosy. continue soon


tim 2006-04-08 id # 3089
another great one, continue soon


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-04-10 id # 3104
A baby is an awesome twist!! Will and Buffy are gonna have it all!! More please!!!


me_myself_u buffy_rulez2003@yahoo.ca 2006-04-29 id # 3162
Its SOOO good. Ive been waiting for updates!!! where are they!!! lol. Sorry i just LOVE this story :D


tim 2006-05-10 id # 3183
good to see that her sort of past with Tara didn't cause any problems. great update


Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-05-11 id # 3184
YAY!!!! Poor Tara. I've been where she was. More when you can please! (with chocolate on top!)


willowlover 2006-05-11 id # 3186
This is off the chain. It is a great idea. I would have never thought of that in a million years. They are so cute together.


LilOldMe 2006-10-18 id # 4207
This is a brilliant story something i dont think anyone would have thought about doing before, but you have done it well. I think with it been so long since it was last updated you have no intention of completing or carrying on with the story, although i would love to see more, hopefully you have just been busy an neglected this fanfic for a while, if that is the case please update soon.....


linzi 2006-11-07 id # 4323
great story

hope you update it soon


LilOldMe 2007-01-20 id # 4718
Great update glad to see that you finally started back up with this story
Update again soon please


Ahn 2007-01-20 id # 4719
I'm really liking this story! It's the first time I read it and it's great! Don't forget about it again. Update soon, Please!


Ahn 2007-01-21 id # 4722
Great update and fast also! Thanks! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update again soon, Please!


zigpal 2007-01-21 id # 4725
great update and I am glad to see you have continued this story. I can't wait to see how things go on the way to California.


LilOldMe 2007-01-22 id # 4728
Great update
glad you kept this story going
hope to read more soon


Auriam auriam85@hotmail.com 2007-01-22 id # 4729
Hello

i have to say you
THANK YOU
your storIES are the best !
i can't go away from my computer when you update ! ! !
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

Aur�lie


Jen 2007-01-22 id # 4730
Mmk, so when i got hooked on ikoly.com about 6 monthes ago. i thought i had read every story, but somehow i missed this one, i don't know how but I LOVE IT! its like Wiffyness with a twist. its so creative and genius. like i said. i LOVE it. please continue to update and believe me if it gets up into the 60s with chapters. i won't complain.

thanks. Jen


Ahn 2007-01-22 id # 4733
I can't wait to see how everything goes in Willow's home town! Keep the updates coming!


zigpal 2007-01-22 id # 4736
great updates and I loved that you kept Anya true to form.


kirky 2007-01-23 id # 4737
good story realy like this fic even though your keeping tara in it lol
update soon


LilOldMe 2007-01-23 id # 4738
Great update keep them coming


Ahn 2007-01-23 id # 4741
I can't wait to see how it all turns out at Buffy's familys house! Update soon, Please.


zigpal 2007-01-23 id # 4743
oh goody a duel and yes I have a feeling that Buffy might just kill someone if something happens to Willow. heres hoping Giles knows what he is doing. great update


LilOldMe 2007-01-24 id # 4746
great cant wait for the next chapter, hope it comes soon
update please


Auriam 2007-01-24 id # 4749
goodie more more more !!!! please


zigpal 2007-01-25 id # 4758
great update. nice use of Tara being shot and Willow killing Warren. I love the action of this story and can't wait to see what comes next.


LilOldMe 2007-01-26 id # 4760
Great i like this story as soon as you think you know whats gonna happy something else happens.
it keeps you hanging.
update soon please


gnome 2007-01-26 id # 4761
i absolutely love this story and have since i first began reading it. its great and always has something going on, no boring or slow spots like some other stories. please update soon :)


Ahn 2007-01-26 id # 4772
WOW, I never saw that coming! I hope Riley doesn't cause anymore trouble. Update again soon, PLEASE!


Ahn 2007-01-28 id # 4790
Great update! Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.


zigpal 2007-01-28 id # 4792
loved this chapter, good to see our ladies get some time together after having such a trying time lately.


LilOldMe 2007-01-29 id # 4796
great update
keep it coming


Auriam 2007-01-29 id # 4799
just wow
this chap are gulps !


zigpal 2007-01-30 id # 4809
great update. just when things were settling down something else happens. can't wait to see what happens after this.


Ahn 2007-01-30 id # 4811
Great update!
Update again soon, Please!


Chase chaseherchiss@comcast.net 2007-01-30 id # 4813
Ohhh so many updates to read!!! I really am enjoying the direction you have taken this story. This story is so different from anything else out there right now. I like the tone you have set for Willow and the conflicted feelings she is having about all the lying she and Buffy are having to do in order to keep her secret. I also like the introduction of Amy to the story. Her thinking that General Rosenberg is cheating on his wife adds a story within a story feel to it. More please!! Chase


gnome 2007-01-30 id # 4814
man i totally love this fanfic. im always checking to see if a new one is up. keep up the good work dude :D


LilOldMe 2007-01-31 id # 4816
Great update cant wait for more


cathy cnorth1975@yahoo.com 2007-01-31 id # 4821
I'm a sucker for anything that shows the love and passion Willow and Buffy have for each other. Plus. I'm a bit of a Civil War buff (Shelby Foote anyone). This is soooooooo perfect. I'm just catching up to the middle chapters. What a grand experience.


Ahn 2007-02-01 id # 4858
Great update I can't wait to see how things go with Dawn there after what she went through. Update soon!


zigpal 2007-02-01 id # 4859
great update. Amy seems to be getting more and more nosy. I have a bad feeling that she might become a problem.


Auriam 2007-02-02 id # 4862
Oups i forgot to make a review for the last chap !
I'm sorry
As usual it's very good !
I love the way you write !
About the story
i don't know what to think about Amy she seems nice but there are something misssing.
We will see soon maybe ....
Good update !
Need more please !
Aur�lie


Ahn 2007-02-14 id # 4952
I'm so glad you updated. It was great! Can't wait for the next update.


zigpal 2007-02-14 id # 4957
great update. Now we get the reasoning behind Amy's weirdness, and she is bound to screw ao much up if she keeps up her antics. can't wait to see what happens next.


cathy cnorth1975@yahoo.com 2007-02-15 id # 4961
Boy, this so good. And everyone has a part. And *sign* Willow and Buffy.


Auriam auriam85@hotmail.com 2007-02-15 id # 4965
Great, justy one word great !
it's updates are totaly breath taking !
I can feel the drama coming
please not too soon please !
:)
Aur�lie


Kirky 2007-02-15 id # 4966
Great update, looking forward to the next
keep it coming


zigpal 2007-02-23 id # 5020
great update. heres hoping Amy minds her business on the way home or there may be a bigger secret found out.


Auriam 2007-02-24 id # 5021
Gret update as always !
Good this Amy ! She has to let them alone !
What will she does if she find the gith from Xander or find that Will is Willow
i so don't want to know !
please update soon !


Ahn 2007-02-24 id # 5022
Great update. I wounder if Amy is ever going to figure out about Willow? Can't wait to see what happens next!


Auriam 2007-02-25 id # 5024
Wow great update !
slepping totaly nake ? Someone gonna see Will?
Oh my i can't wait to see what coming soon !


Auriam 2007-02-26 id # 5031
Jenny knows ! ! ! !
I knew it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great update indeed keep going
Erin go go Erin !


zigpal 2007-02-26 id # 5032
great updates. It looks like everyone is seeing that Amy is going to be a problem. I hope the girls talk to Jenny about their fears before anything happens.


Ahn 2007-03-02 id # 5051
Great update! They were lucky it was Jenny that came in there room. I wounder what's going to happen with Amy? Update soon please!


zigpal 2007-05-08 id # 5443
great update. It is good to see Dawn finally connect with her son, and as long as they are happy, I'm sure Buffy will be proud of Willow no matter what she does.


Ahn 2007-05-08 id # 5444
Glad you updated this. I enjoy all your stories! I wounder what Willow will decide to do? Is Dawn going to connect with her son? Can't wait for the next update!


kirky 2007-05-09 id # 5446
GREAT glad you updated this story its so different from the rest love it.
update again soon please :)


Auriam 2007-05-09 id # 5447
UPDATE UPDATE WOOO HOOOO
be right back reading now !


Auriam 2007-05-09 id # 5448
great i love this chap i wonder what happen next update soon please !


Ahn 2007-05-09 id # 5449
Thanks for the fast update! I wounder what is bugging Buffy about moving? Can't wait to see how her and Willow's talk goes.


zigpal 2007-05-10 id # 5450
great update. Well, it looks like Buffy and Will have some things to talk about, and hopefully, they get resolved. Plus, the move will take Amy out of the equation.


gnome 2007-05-13 id # 5463
I absolutely LOVE this story! I really hope you continue and keep writing! I'm 100% addicted!!


zigpal 2007-05-13 id # 5464
great update. Poor Will, if she isn't being teased by Dawn, she is being bragged about by Buffy. I can't wait to see how the move goes.


Auriam 2007-05-13 id # 5465
wow great as always waiting for anther chap
i love your write
Auriam


zigpal 2007-05-13 id # 5467
great update. I hope Willow starts to take better care of herself for at least Buffy and Samuel's benefit, and I hope Ms. Calendar is okay.


Kirky 2007-05-14 id # 5469
Great update love it keep it up.
Update again soon please :)


zigpal 2007-05-14 id # 5475
great update. Yikes, everytime things looks bad, they get better. Let's hope it doesn't happen too often.


gnome 2007-05-14 id # 5476
can't wait to see how the summer goes! i know i'm happy its here!


Ahn 2007-05-15 id # 5483
This story is still great! Can't wait to see more!


lakeside 2007-05-16 id # 5489
i like this story even the part were they were having the war


Howard R 2007-05-18 id # 5498
Wow! I almost didn't read this because of the time period of your uber was set in. I'm so glad I took the chance though. This is really well done. I really like they way you tied in the canon people and events. Kudos for a job well done!

I'm so scared of what will happen when Amy returns to the story. I know she can't be done causing problems yet.

Geography error:
Boston is much farther from South Carolina and SunnyDale than Washington D.C. is. Boston is about 450 miles north of D.C. (It's north and east of D.C so it's farther from Sunnydale, too.)

Vocabulary error:
Weary means tired, wary means cautious.


auriam 2007-05-19 id # 5516
Update again soon please


Ahn 2007-05-22 id # 5553
Poor Willow doesn't get any tonight. Maybe Buffy will make it up to her in the morning!!!!


gnome 2007-05-22 id # 5554
hehehe, Willow drunk is hilarious. I just want you to know I absolutely LOVE this story and everything you've done with it! Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you're feelin better!


zigpal 2007-05-22 id # 5555
great update. Looks like there are some things starting to pop up between our favorite duo. I hope they work through them before they get worse.


kirky 2007-05-23 id # 5556
great update Update again soon please :)
And how old is Samuel and Rj now?


Howard R 2007-05-23 id # 5559
Still darn fun!

I'm surprised. Three chapters in Boston and still no Faith. I figured bringing her into the story was why you moved the couple there.


Ahn 2007-05-24 id # 5566
Great update! Can't wait for more!


gnome 2007-05-25 id # 5568
Uh oh, bad Faith. Very bad girl! No Willow action is allowed Oh please, oh please don't let Faith get Willow in trouble!!


Kirky 2007-05-25 id # 5570
Good chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next and if th next couple of chapters will involve Buffys family
update again soon please


LilOldMe 2007-05-25 id # 5571
good update, a big no no to faith causing trouble for the two


Howard R 2007-05-25 id # 5572
Okay, you brought in Faith but not in any way I would have predicted. There goes your theory. I figured she'd get to flirt with Buffy some while Willow was away before the Finch thing happened.

Still, she's our unconventional Faith. Anything can still happen with her.

I wonder which Buffy-verse character Mr. Law is. Or is he an OC?


zigpal 2007-05-25 id # 5573
great update. "just family' sounds good in theory as long as it stays that way. Nice twist with the addition of Faith, I can't wait to see the trouble she causes.


zigpal 2007-05-28 id # 5582
great update. Uh-oh, now it looks like Faith may be Willow's downfall if she decides to get a little questioning.


kirky 2007-05-28 id # 5585
Great update, hope faith doesnt come between them both
update soon please


Howard R 2007-05-28 id # 5586
I really wasn't expecting that. Given canon, I was expecting Buffy to be her target. And it would have been interesting for Wil to see an open lesbian so unlike herself.


Ahn 2007-05-28 id # 5597
Is Faith going to make problems for Willow and Buffy or is she going to figure out that Willow's a girl? I can't wait for more!


gnome 2007-06-08 id # 5653
Dude you rock!!! Can't wait to see what you have in store with Faith in the house!


Ahn 2007-06-08 id # 5654
Glad you updated one of your stories! Your great at the Buffy/Willow. Can wait to see how things go with Faith living with Buffy and Willow! Is she going to figure out Willow's a girl and are Buffy and Willow still going to be able to move like they planed? Update soon, Please!


Howard R 2007-06-09 id # 5655
Maggie Walsh! ROFLMAO! Beautiful! Just beautiful.

So now Faith is going to be a long-term problem. Dangerous. If she gets too forward and grabby, she may discover something she can blackmail them with. Or worse, blame Willow for 'tricking' her and lash out violently. I fear this will end in tears.


zigpal 2007-06-09 id # 5658
great update. Hmm, Faith as the new house servant, that should lead to fun things.


Kirky 2007-06-09 id # 5659
Great chapter cant find out what happens nex i hope Faith and Liam dont come between the two
Update soon please :)


zigpal 2007-06-16 id # 5686
great update. I can't wait to see how things progress now that Buffy is home, and how Faith changes things.


Ahn 2007-06-16 id # 5687
I've been reading all your other stories and been craving more. Great update! Maybe William and Faith will get together. Can't wait to see what happens next!


Kirky 2007-06-17 id # 5688
OOOoohh goody some more, great chapter cant wait for more.
update again soon please


Howard R 2007-06-17 id # 5689
Is it just me or is the fact that there was no one at the door when a carriage pulled up and unloaded a little ominous?


Whedonist 2007-06-18 id # 5700
Excellent. Gotta say love the story. I feel thing s are going to be...much more entertainey soon. Thank you for the update


zigpal 2007-06-18 id # 5701
great update. I can't wait to see what coming home brings especially after your AN. It adds even more intrigue to your story.


Ahn 2007-06-19 id # 5705
Great family reunion! Update more soon!


kirky 2007-06-21 id # 5713
great update i love the fact that there all back together
update again soon please


Ahn 2007-07-06 id # 5854
So glad to see an update! It's great. Can't wait for more!


Howard R 2007-07-07 id # 5856
Coming nicely. Would've liked to have seen more conflict about raising Samuel without myths, grandparents vs. parents. I did like seeing a more archaic Xmas. Well done.


zigpal 2007-07-07 id # 5858
great update. Christmas lovins, the best present ever. Loving the family togetherness.


Whedonist 2007-07-08 id # 5865
Sweet! I'm still intrigued about how the whole Faith thing is going to play out. Not addressed in the update, but you do have motive behind most of your madness ;0) so ah update soon so I can find out what's up.


kirky 2007-07-09 id # 5883
great, cant wait for more


Ahn 2007-07-13 id # 5916
Looks like things are about to get interesting! I hope Riley doesn't go to crazy! Update soon.


gnome 2007-07-13 id # 5917
Oh no! BAD! Very bad! Please update soon! I HAVE to know what happens to Faith and can only hope that Riley gets what's coming to him!


zigpal 2007-07-14 id # 5918
great update. I think Mr. Finn might be biting off more than he can chew with Faith. I think he might be the one in trouble by the time the night is over.


Whedonist 2007-07-15 id # 5923
Very cool...short, but beggers can't be choosers.


Birdie Wdrtybrd@yahoo.com 2008-04-17 id # 7482
i really enjoy this story its one that really cought my attention and i keep wondering what will hapen next