Reviews for Old One Reborn
| Iceflame |
assassin72530@yahoo.com |
2006-04-02 |
id # 3073 |
| Interesting beginning, definately the kind of thing I was hoping for with my Challenge, namely something different!!! I'll be watching! |
| BuffyFan |
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2006-04-05 |
id # 3079 |
| I watched this episode last night and every single time I have to skip the two chapters involving Buffy getting turned against and kicked out. It always pisses me off in the next episode that the Scooby Gang, especially Willow, Xander and Giles try to justify their actions. In my opinion, if they don't want to do Buffy's plan fine, but kicking Buffy out was a way of saying to The First that it was alright to kill her and I like that someone realizes that because not many people write that. |
| Sousa |
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2006-04-05 |
id # 3083 |
| Whoa,I didn't notice,but it's a threesome?I wonder with who else.This one actually has a good start so far. |
| tim |
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2006-04-05 |
id # 3084 |
| wow, looks like Giles and the wannabes screwed up. can't wait for the next one. update soon |
| tim |
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2006-04-09 |
id # 3102 |
| looks like the third member of the gang is about to join the fun. update soon |
| RedMagic |
crimsonredmagic@hotmail.com |
2006-04-10 |
id # 3103 |
W/B/C!! Thats damn near perfect.
Loving the story so far but if I could give you one piece of advice, may I suggest getting a beta reader to fix the grammer mistakes.
Other then that please keep this coming. |
| tim |
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2006-04-26 |
id # 3148 |
| looks like the gang is feeling like a bunch of schmucks. wait til they get a look at Buffy's new gang. update soon |
| acs |
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2006-05-06 |
id # 3176 |
Okay... not sure why you are getting such positive reviews... this is basically unreadable.
- bad grammar
- bad spelling
- bad sentence structure
- bad story structure
- etc...
Having an idea is only the beginning. You really need to find a beta and a copy of a grammar book -- and a copy of 'Strunk and White' or something similar. |
| David |
Dagda06117032@yahoo.com |
2006-09-27 |
id # 4131 |
| Love it are you going to update it? |
| Anon |
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2007-05-12 |
id # 5458 |
| beta readers 4tw |
| Shadowcub |
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2007-10-31 |
id # 6731 |
| Glad to see a update keep your head down. |
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