Reviews for Blankets of White
| tim |
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2006-05-26 |
id # 3241 |
| oh yeah, these social retards are going to screw things up. great start |
| ? |
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2006-05-26 |
id # 3242 |
| Your dad and sister passed away and you worry about a fic? |
| Rin |
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2006-05-26 |
id # 3243 |
Sorry to hear about your family troubles. Hope all is well...
I believe your writing is improving with each installment you give us. I hope everything works out, and you don't make us wait TOO long... :) |
| wraith |
restlesswraith@yahoo.ca |
2006-05-27 |
id # 3244 |
| I am SO sorry to hear about your family. The sequel sounds great but don't rush nothing, I'm sure we'll hear more from you in time. Please accept my empathy and best wishes. |
| Rtwo |
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2006-05-28 |
id # 3245 |
First very sorry to hear about your losses...I lost my dad 4 months ago from complications due to an accident. Don't mind the person who made the remark about "you have deaths in your family and all you worry about is a fic.",,,,,,Whatever eases the pain and somehow find a little comfort in ....so be it writing a fic go for it. You have my deepest sympathies.
As far as your fic goes....Very Very interesting short but sweet.....I think you should bring Tara into this as well...perhaps they (Tara and Willow) could teach Buffy a few things but first I think the blonde slayer needs to be punished for parading her naked butt around Willow....maybe have Willow and Tara strip buffy naked and spank her cute ass!! |
| xander |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3509 |
| love it |
| brittany |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3510 |
| keep going |
| the first slayer |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3511 |
| more please |
| the first evil |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3512 |
| never stop |
| charmed ones |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3513 |
| can`t wait for more |
| the l word |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3514 |
| so so good |
| shane and carmen |
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2006-06-18 |
id # 3515 |
| great chapters |
| Rin |
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2006-07-30 |
id # 3973 |
| Remember to write more. Remember to write faster!! It made me wanna go back ALL the way to the beginning of the first story... |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-31 |
id # 3975 |
| damn, with all the orgasmic screaming nobody heard Buffy bash her already bloody head into the doorknob. hopefully, Tara is sort of aware of her surroundings so Buffy isn't in the hallway bleeding all night. boy, I would really hate to be Travers and his gang of social retards if he screws with Buffy in the state of mind she is in. continue soon please |
| Sousa |
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2006-07-31 |
id # 3977 |
| Okay,listen up,this has to be updated and soon.I liked the first and I think I'm gonna really like the second so please continue. |
| Will227 |
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2006-08-01 |
id # 3978 |
| Great storie plez update....I LOve this storie |
| cathy |
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2006-08-15 |
id # 4028 |
| I am liking this very much. It catches your interest right off. |
| Anon |
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2006-11-05 |
id # 4298 |
| wow...i really like this one...please keep it up! |
| Sousa |
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2006-11-28 |
id # 4400 |
| I'm glad you picked it back up,now I have to go back and re-read. |
| Sousa |
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2007-02-01 |
id # 4854 |
| Yeah,it's been awhile.I like how it's going so far and I hope there's more. |
| rebelrsr |
2007-02-01 |
id # 4855 |
| Glad to see you've returned. I loved the original and can't wait to see what you have in store for the Slayer and her Witch. Nefarious plots by the Council only make it better. |
| Rin |
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2007-02-01 |
id # 4856 |
Obviously, you've hit a snag in your storyline. By separating B/W, it's obvious you're not sure how to pull them slowly back together. That's not your fault, just a lack of creative juices flowing. It happens to the best of us. My suggestion is to elaborate more on the Council's sudden introduction to the story, as well as Faith's. Whatever you do, you can't let Buffy mess around with Faith, or it'll be hard to get the Willow you've written to get with Buffy. Sometimes, it works but your Willow characterization, it would be hard to make is successful. That's not a rip on your talent as a writer, quite the opposite really. You've written a character so well that your readers KNOW what can and can't happen to the others for the story to be great.
A good suggestion on getting them slowly back together would be using the Watcher's Council angle. I'm not sure what you have in mind but it's something that hasn't been done before, and would be refreshing to see! Use something meant for evil, and turn it into beauty. If you do that successfully, you'll have one hell of a 'getting back together' story. Maybe have memories leak into Willow's dreams from where your last story was 'erased' from time, so to speak...but only the good things, like her and Buffy naked together. That'd keep the B/W audience hopeful for an intimate reunion in the end, and constantly returning to the story.
Hmm...what else can I suggest? Maybe have the good dreams leaked (and make sure that Willow feels they're like lost memories, and not just dreams) b/c of some spell the Council has done to 'erase' the slayerness from Buffy? Since B has already erased time, the spell has a reverse effect, and makes her stronger, and her own 'erasing' start to bleed into reality (hence the Willow dreams). Then again, these are just some ideas to throw out there. You may have something completely different in mind. |
| zigpal |
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2007-02-01 |
id # 4860 |
| great add-on. looks like Faith has her work cut out for her with protecting Buffy from the fun Watchers. can't wait to see what happens. |
| Ahn |
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2007-02-01 |
id # 4861 |
| great update but please don't put buffy with anyother women. I only like her with Willow but I do like Faith/Tara or Faith/Dawn. Update again please! |
| Bryan |
robbinsbm@uindy.edu |
2007-11-07 |
id # 6769 |
| Please continue |
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