Reviews for Starting Line Dresden 2006-05-31 id # 3264 this story has alot of promise and i like your writing style makes it easy to read be sure to keep this comming! superbio Fantastico zigpal 2006-05-31 id # 3265 great start, hope you continue soon. this has nice potential. Sousa 2006-06-01 id # 3266 I can't believe I'm actually going to call a fic this,this story's cute ^.^.I can't wait for more. Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-06-01 id # 3269 Love this so far! I like the style, and pacing also! Looking forward to reading more! Howard Russell 2006-06-09 id # 3367 I really like this beginning. I like the slow seduction better than them falling into each other's arms when they first meet. I take it that Buffy isn't the slayer. Not that I'm opposed to an all-human AU, just that you didn't say for sure. Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-06-12 id # 3426 The sexual tension/frustration level for this story is killing me...but I absolutley love it!!! I love the fact that your stories are so easy to visualize! You write with such attention to detail that my imagination doesn't have to work overly hard! More soon please! zigpal 2006-06-12 id # 3428 good lord, there is enough angst here to kill a horse. maybe Xander can see that Willow and Buffy are both miserable and will politely step aside. great update Sousa 2006-06-12 id # 3429 What a selfish bastard!Grr,cotton headed ninny mugger!And don't get me started on cowardly Willow!>. IceColdFire 2006-06-13 id # 3451 More!!! Love it!!! Salix 2006-06-14 id # 3472 Wow, this is really good. Please update really soon. Sousa 2006-06-27 id # 3649 I guess I shouldn't be surprised that Xander shaped people can go mess around but Willow even thinks about a hot girl that Xander thinks is hot,which is everyone,then whoa!That's a no go.And great,now there's broody-forehead ridge guy,boo! willowlover 2006-06-27 id # 3650 Keep it coming. You've got my attention. zigpal 2006-06-27 id # 3651 yea, the just friends policy is working real well for both of them. xander 2006-06-27 id # 3652 love it please let buffy go with willow the first slayer 2006-06-27 id # 3653 keep going the first evil 2006-06-27 id # 3654 more more chapters brittany 2006-06-27 id # 3655 add more the l word 2006-06-27 id # 3656 super good charmed ones 2006-06-27 id # 3657 great chapters shane and carmen 2006-06-27 id # 3658 can`t wait for more Chase chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2006-06-28 id # 3677 I really like when Fred and Willow are paired together. They do make quite the cute couple. Still, Buffy & Willow are better suited me thinks! More B/W Smoochie action soon please..pretty please!! Sousa 2006-06-28 id # 3678 RIN!!!You can't just stop there!!!I have to know more!MORE!ARG!~.~' zigpal 2006-06-28 id # 3679 now look what Xander did, he threw the whole Buffy/Willow into a one-upping jealousy game. I hope he's happy. xander 2006-06-29 id # 3680 love it the first slayer 2006-06-29 id # 3681 keep going the first evil 2006-06-29 id # 3682 more chapters the l word 2006-06-29 id # 3683 update soon brittany 2006-06-29 id # 3684 willow/buffy better and i hate fred with willow.more please charmed ones 2006-06-29 id # 3685 super good shane and carmen 2006-06-29 id # 3686 can`t wait for more Sousa 2006-06-29 id # 3687 Much better.^.^But now I'm even more angry at Xander,if that's even possible.Angel's turning out to be an okay guy...so far.And what's with Willow practically forgetting Buffy and ignorring her? zigpal 2006-07-03 id # 3699 sounds to me like it is about to get more complicated. I'm glad to see Buffy came back. xander 2006-07-03 id # 3700 love it the first evil 2006-07-03 id # 3701 super good the first slayer 2006-07-03 id # 3702 wanting more brittany 2006-07-03 id # 3703 getting good the l word 2006-07-03 id # 3704 can`t wait for more chapters shane and carmen 2006-07-03 id # 3705 add more charmed ones 2006-07-03 id # 3706 update Sousa 2006-07-07 id # 3738 This is making ME depressed!~.~What is Willow going to do!? zigpal 2006-07-07 id # 3758 well, that is an interesting tidbit. looks like Willow has some serious thinking to do. fantagismo 2006-07-08 id # 3759 Cracking story, to be honest. the tension between the two is palpable... xander 2006-07-08 id # 3778 love it the first slayer 2006-07-08 id # 3779 keep going the first evil 2006-07-08 id # 3780 keep it coming brittany 2006-07-08 id # 3781 don`t stop the l word 2006-07-08 id # 3782 super good shane and carmen 2006-07-08 id # 3783 can`t wait for more charmed ones 2006-07-08 id # 3784 update more and more chapters Sousa 2006-07-16 id # 3892 Why is it that I want to chase down that jerk Xander,rip off his balls then force feed them to himself?Oh!I know why... soedroen 2006-08-01 id # 3979 is it the ending?? Anon 2006-08-10 id # 4022 superbio Fantastico - but me wanty update me wanty update gertrude perkins 2007-08-09 id # 6100 this is an amazing fic - would love to see more. so i gotta ask is this fic officialy dead now or can we expect more somday soon Ahn 2007-09-30 id # 6525 Great story to update and great update! I can't wait for more! Thanks! Uub 2007-09-30 id # 6526 Whoohoo! you updated the one i voted for WhooHoo! great update :-D Anon 2007-10-01 id # 6537 Is Willow going to tell Fred about the kiss with Buffy? Looks like it's going to get harder for the girls to live in the same room without little incadents happening. Please update again soon! bslayed 2007-10-03 id # 6551 Great update! It's going to be really big when those girls finally do get together. I can't wait. How long can Willow keep her feelings for Buffy underwrapes. Can't wait for the next update. Ahn 2007-10-05 id # 6562 Great update! The flukes just keep on happening. I can't wait to see who catches them. Update soon, please! Uub 2007-10-05 id # 6563 well that update was simply bichin - excellent work keep it up... cos if you dont *shakes fist* bslayed 2007-10-05 id # 6568 Thanks for the great update! I'm excite to see what you do next and will be waiting as patiently as I can. Of course patients is something I never really learn. Update soon! Ahn 2007-10-07 id # 6569 I wounder who was at the door? I hope you update again soon. Didge didge4@btinternet.com 2007-10-07 id # 6571 Ok I promised to review even though I didn't win the vote. What can I say? You're definitely on form with the drawing out of the angst & what are you going to do to poor Fred? (I like her too especially the way you write her) We'll just have to hope that you don't go on another of your long dry periods & leave us all hanging over the precipice of this story. In other words, keep the updates coming. Please!!!! Anon 2007-10-07 id # 6577 Ok so who knocked? Was it Fred? Also at the end of the chapter it seemed like Buffy and Willow had closure on there romantic feelings. So noting all that I can't wait to see what you write next! i hope you keep the updates coming! Anon 2007-10-07 id # 6578 Ok so who knocked? Was it Fred? Also at the end of the chapter it seemed like Buffy and Willow had closure on there romantic feelings. So noting all that I can't wait to see what you write next! i hope you keep the updates coming! Howard R 2007-10-07 id # 6581 You know, I really want to hurt Xander for causing all this. Cuprit 2007-10-07 id # 6582 Fred is sweet girl but Willow just needs to get rid of her so her (Willow) and Buffy can be happy. Good Job. Whedonist 2007-10-08 id # 6588 While I didn't vote (yes I know shame on me 'cuz I'd like to see the CSI one updated), I had forgotten about this story of yours and had to go from the beginning and do a quick read through to catch up. So thanks for the update Rin. Stellar job as per usual. Ahn 2007-10-09 id # 6602 So are they finally going to start working towards something or are there going to be more problems? I don't think Riley will handle it well if Buffy Breaks up with him for Willow. Can't wait for your next update. Ahn 2007-10-09 id # 6603 2 Updates in one day, that's great. Thanks and still can't wait for more! Uub 2007-10-10 id # 6604 wow updating Really fast now - kick ass!!! keep em coming!! BOOYAAAHHH!!!! Howard R 2007-10-10 id # 6606 This is so sad. And I want Xamnder to suffer for making these two suffer for so many years. Makes me wish for a bit of time travel magic. Whedonist 2007-10-11 id # 6616 All I have to say is please, oh pretty please, don't let Xander do something stupid..he's known for it, in fact, I think it's a birth right for him, but, he usually messses it up instead of making it better...well that and =0( for Buffy and Willow. Ahn 2007-10-11 id # 6623 Another great update! Thanks and keep them coming! Howard R 2007-10-12 id # 6625 The thing that gets me is this story could have been told within the framework of the series. The relationships and timings are almost a perfect match, just replace Fred with Oz. japmap japmap@yahoo.com 2007-10-12 id # 6626 Finally!!! It was getting almost too painful, though it has certainly built up the anticipation. The inertia and lack of confidence are consistent w/what we would expect from HS Willow, though. Can't wait for Wiffy datey goodness... Ahn 2007-10-18 id # 6661 So is Riley going to go crazy about Buffy now being with Willow? Keep the updates coming! Howard R 2007-10-19 id # 6672 Finally! Buffillowara Buffillowara@gmail.com 2007-10-19 id # 6673 seriously reading this fic pre-date i couldn't stop thinking about this Dido song that almost made me want this to be a song fic (i hate song fic but not fic's based off songs) oh yea the Dido song is called "Who makes you feel" http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/dido/whomakesyoufeel.html But listen and think when I say it Oh but listen and think when I say it Who makes you feel the way that I make you feel Who loves you and knows you the way I do Who touches you and holds you quite like I do Who makes you feel like I make you feel Howard R 2007-10-22 id # 6691 I don't know. Seems kind of mean for Joyce to separate them knowing that they live together in the dorms. Buffy isn't in high school anymore. Especially when Willow is the one Joyce approves of. What's 'harnering'? Rin 2007-10-22 id # 6692 They only used to live in the dorms together, now they don't, and they weren't dating when they did live together. It's a mom thing... Ahn 2007-10-22 id # 6694 looks like Buffy better watch out for Riley. I wounder what Willow got Buffy? Update soon. IceCold 2007-10-23 id # 6700 God, I love this story! I can't get enough. Work was starting to get in the way of reading this! -_- Keep up the good work! :) Anon 2007-10-28 id # 6720 Looks like Willow can't get enough of Buffy! Great update and can't wait for more. Howard R 2007-10-28 id # 6721 Sweet make-up. Glad you didn't stretch that out into a cliffhanger. The almost-fight seemed pretty in character. Though it seemed odd that it went that far south without Xander's 'help.' "she was glad to see that Willow wasn't spending every waking hour with that Harris boy anymore. It was good that she'd found some female friends." Where was she during the *years* Willow was dating Fred? P.S. It's been a while since chapter four. You might want to change the summary. Howard R 2007-10-28 id # 6722 P.P.S. Still wondering what 'harnering' means. It only gets seven Google hits and, once you eliminate the obvious misspellings and the foreign language pun, you're left with a single proper name. (And honestly? What family name has only one single appearance on the entire Internet? Makes me think that's a misspelling too. I mean, between myself, my father, and my grandfather, in the meeting attendance rosters and school graduation records kept online I get almost two dozen hits. And this last name is listed in a single academic journal...once? Ever? Not buying it.) Rin 2007-10-28 id # 6723 Howard - I write these things at 1 in the morning, when I'm already knackered from the door, and about to fall asleep. It's the only time I have to write them, and I want the story out there, so there are going to be LOTS of mistakes, which when I have free time I might fix but not right now. I actually meant 'harboring'...the only thing I can think is that I'm using a Harner book for a class, and was probably doing that earlier that day. LOL. Sorry for the misdeed. Ahn 2007-10-28 id # 6724 Great update! I hope to see more soon. Zinerva 2007-10-29 id # 6725 This piece was too angst ridden for my taste, but I still kept reading, which means you did a pretty good job handling the angsty moments because I usually just stop reading angst fics that drag on and the characters are doing it to themselves. This one dragged on in a way that made me keep reading, hoping they'd find a way to be happy together. You were rather successful at at holding my attention. I like the way you characterized Buffy and Willow. Willow was a little ooc after her breakup with Fred, as she was never that good in hiding her pain and it's cause, but it fit the story. Buffy felt like Buffy, just without superpowers. Nicely done. Ahn 2007-11-03 id # 6745 Good job on this story. I liked the end and it's open if you ever wanted to do a sequal. If your going to update another story I vote for CSI. That's another great one of yours. Howard R 2007-11-04 id # 6746 Sweet. I'm glad they worked it all out in the end. A little disappointing that they didn't beat Xander to death with a shovel. C'est la vie. Didge didge4@btinternet.com 2007-11-04 id # 6747 Nice ending but couldn't you have at least stretched it to Xander's wedding or are you saving that for the future? Don't forget you've still got a few more stories to update so can I put an early vote in for CSI? Please, pretty please. (I'll go down on my knees if it helps) Whedonist 2007-11-04 id # 6749 Nice finish up Rin. Also, I would just like to say that I'm on board with Ahn and Didge for the next update. I know time is seriously of the lack, but when you can spare a few the CSI one would be awful nifty to start to read again. W