Reviews for Season One
| zigpal |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3900 |
| I like the start of this. I think Lauren might be asking for a slayer ass kicking if she is going to be screwing with Buffy and Willow. can't wait to see where this goes. |
| xander |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3902 |
| so so good |
| the first slayer |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3903 |
| super good |
| the first evil |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3904 |
| can`t wait for more |
| brittany |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3905 |
| keep going |
| the l word |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3906 |
| great chapters |
| charmed ones |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3907 |
| update |
| shane and carmen |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3908 |
| never ever stop |
| Sousa |
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2006-07-19 |
id # 3923 |
| Oh,I love reworks that have them as a couple from the get go!I can't wait to see what happens. |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-20 |
id # 3925 |
| yes please continue to write. I like this different version of season 1 with all new twists and turns. update whenever you like just as long as you don't abandon a story with oodles of possibilites. huggling, I like it. I might have to use it some time if that is okay with you. |
| Will227 |
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2006-07-20 |
id # 3926 |
| I really like this storie...and that sounds like a good goal but, i know i won't be mad if u take a lil longer to write because we al know that stories don't come out of the sky...they take time!!!!!! |
| Sousa |
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2006-07-20 |
id # 3928 |
| If you don't continue this story,I'll crush a defensless flower!So you'd best be gettin' writin'.>. |
| willowlover |
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2006-07-20 |
id # 3930 |
| This is really good. Keep it coming please. |
| Sousa |
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2006-07-21 |
id # 3932 |
| Wow,an update all ready!Impressive.I love getting down to the nitty gritty fast. |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-21 |
id # 3933 |
| well this should be good considering that the Council are a bunch of jerks who treat slayers like replaceable pawns in their game. |
| Rin |
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2006-07-21 |
id # 3934 |
| Well, then...keep it coming!!! |
| Will227 |
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2006-07-21 |
id # 3935 |
| This storie is geting better everyday i can't wait to see were it ends up |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-22 |
id # 3939 |
| boy Travers is really slow if he doesn't realize that the mate he picked for Buffy is evil. I am still a little wary of Tara and Amy not knowing what they are up to. |
| Sousa |
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2006-07-22 |
id # 3940 |
| Yes,too short and such an interesting chapter.You shall perish!J/k,take your time,well not too much time cause then I would get cranky and you don't want to make me cranky,bad things happen... |
| Will227 |
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2006-07-22 |
id # 3941 |
heyyy if u like that goal then keep it...but as long as these chapters r this good i don't really care how long it takes u to write them as long as it's not like a chapter ever year or something like that!
Great update i love this storie |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-23 |
id # 3946 |
| maybe there is something Willow can do to calm Buffy down. |
| Will227 |
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2006-07-24 |
id # 3949 |
this storie is amazing...i love reading it!
I can't wait for more |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-24 |
id # 3950 |
| well it's not like Buffy hasn't averted apocalypes before without council help, and it's not she hasn't defied the council before either. great update, continue soon |
| zigpal |
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2006-07-25 |
id # 3964 |
| boy, Travers really wants every square inch of his ass kicked, and if Buffy and Willow would have actually made it to the restroom, they wouldn't have to be embarassed. great updates, continue soon |
| cathy |
cnorth1975@yahoo.com |
2006-07-26 |
id # 3965 |
| This is so intriguing. I see you have included just about everyone in this story. And done it very well. |
| Rin |
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2006-07-28 |
id # 3966 |
| You've spoiled me...with all those updates so fast. Now, I wonder where the rest is at? LOL. |
| Anon |
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2006-08-02 |
id # 3981 |
| Coolios. I just moved down to Dallas. It's HOT in texas... damn.... *turns on yet another fan* |
| Sousa |
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2006-08-03 |
id # 3983 |
| I want to see what happens.And,yeah,the weather is pretty wicked here in Fort Worth as well.Need that rain huh? |
| Rin |
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2006-08-04 |
id # 3990 |
| Well, well...good to see another update!! =) |
| Rin |
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2006-08-06 |
id # 4007 |
| I can beta for you if you need...and yes, you should continue the story. |
| Sousa |
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2006-08-06 |
id # 4008 |
| Why!?Why did you make it so short!I was excited,now I'll have to wait.~.~ |
| Sousa |
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2006-08-08 |
id # 4015 |
| I can't wait to see what happens. |
| Sousa |
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2006-08-09 |
id # 4019 |
| I loved the Wiffy-ness!!It was so cute!More of that please. |
| AbstractRainbow |
jaydn_crescent@yahoo.com |
2006-08-11 |
id # 4023 |
It's too hot. I hate it being hot. At least it's not humid. *pouts*
Anyway, great story. Congrats on the puppy, I love dogs. I have one too, Midnight, but he's kinda old now. My aunt trains dogs professionally... but I trained Midnight. He's really sweet. I helped to train this bull terrier up in Jersey when i lived there too... but in Dallas now. Oh well. *smaks self for babbling* Keep up the good work. Laters. |
| Sousa |
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2006-08-13 |
id # 4024 |
| What's up with the sort of moment with Oz!?I hope that isn't something that's gonna cause a problem. |
| zigpal |
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2006-08-27 |
id # 4068 |
| yeah, this will help Willow and her worries with Giles now missing. |
| zigpal |
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2006-09-11 |
id # 4109 |
| let's hope the calvary arrives before Buffy has to kill Giles or vice versa. please hurry with an update, our favorite watcher/ slayer duo are in trouble. |
| cathy |
knockout |
2006-09-12 |
id # 4111 |
| I just read chapter 22 and I like sappy. I don't think you ever have to apolgize for that. Naturally I want Buffy and Willow to kiss and touch but if you are in love it doesn't always have to end in'ya know'. You are doing an excellent job and .......well.......I am looking forward to the next chapter. I DO see it is up but I read and absorb this one first. |
| red |
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2006-09-17 |
id # 4117 |
| Faith as Giles' daughter.....PRICELESS!!!!! |
| Ahn |
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2007-02-06 |
id # 4907 |
| So you know. I'd like to see how this ends. update soon! |
| Anon |
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2007-06-24 |
id # 5737 |
| This story is totally great! You left it with a great cliff hanger! Please, Please, and more Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Rin |
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2008-01-08 |
id # 7069 |
| I love updates! YAY! |
| Anon |
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2008-01-08 |
id # 7071 |
| It's great to see an update on this story. It's killing me to know who's trying to get Buffy. Also what that girl that was mated to Buffy is up to. Can't wait for the next update. i hope it's soon. |
| Shadowcub |
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2008-01-09 |
id # 7072 |
They should not have gone to the Bronze, they should have went to bed, and as much as I like Oz, usually
away from Willow, the Slayer is gonna have to stomp all over him. |
| Anon |
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2008-02-12 |
id # 7212 |
| I wounder what they'll tell the police. update soon! |
| Auriam |
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2008-02-18 |
id # 7234 |
hello
really good writer indeed !
I love this story too !
Please keep writing i can't wait to read more =) |
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