Reviews for The Simple Black Dress
| Jez |
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2006-10-24 |
id # 4233 |
| good start will be a good story Please continue and update soon |
| zigpal |
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2006-10-24 |
id # 4238 |
| yeah a new story, I can't wait to see what you do with this one. |
| Sousa |
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2006-10-24 |
id # 4239 |
| Yay,another story!Can't wait. |
| Tyler |
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2006-10-26 |
id # 4248 |
| cant wait to see what happens |
| Kirky |
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2006-10-27 |
id # 4252 |
| Good start update soon please |
| zigpal |
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2006-10-28 |
id # 4263 |
| great update, and I think the black dress isn't all that simple. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Tyler |
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2006-10-28 |
id # 4264 |
hoo goodie an update!
cant wait to see what happens |
| Linzi |
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2006-10-30 |
id # 4272 |
| good story |
| Mic |
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2006-11-01 |
id # 4283 |
| Good, Update soon |
| Kirky |
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2006-11-03 |
id # 4291 |
Great an update really good
update again soon please |
| Tyler |
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2006-11-03 |
id # 4292 |
wooh great another update luv it
keep it coming please |
| zigpal |
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2006-11-03 |
id # 4293 |
| seems like the black dress isn't so simple. can't wait to see what its story is. |
| Linzi |
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2006-11-05 |
id # 4299 |
| Good Update keep it coming |
| Sousa |
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2006-11-05 |
id # 4306 |
| Holy crap!Even *I* felt bad when Willow screamed that.This looks great,like one of those old Alvin Schwartz stories. |
| zigpal |
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2006-11-11 |
id # 4341 |
| looks like maybe they should have stayed indoors if they wanted to make out. looks like things are about to get interesting. great update |
| Kirky |
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2006-11-15 |
id # 4350 |
Great update
cant wait for next update |
| zigpal |
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2006-11-17 |
id # 4364 |
| Daphne comes off a little hinky, plus she almost called Morgan her aunt. can't wait to see what comes of things. great update |
| zigpal |
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2006-11-24 |
id # 4376 |
| well, that was definitely weird. looks like Buffy is going to have to figure out what the problem is without Willow's help. great update |
| Sousa |
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2006-11-24 |
id # 4377 |
| Ooh.This is getting really good.I love the suspense,more please. |
| Rin |
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2006-11-30 |
id # 4407 |
| You seem to play into the romance, yes...but it doesn't overpower the entire story. Your "action" sequences revolve around the romantic aspects of both girls. The things that are happening to them tamper with their relationship, so it only makes sense to work with the romance instead of trying to downplay it. It works for your stories, and probably is what makes the stories as a whole work. |
| Jen |
lezzie_eeyore_fan@yahoo.com |
2006-11-30 |
id # 4408 |
| I whole heartedly agree, now, more Wiffy-dom!!! |
| Auriam |
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2006-11-30 |
id # 4411 |
Hi !
first i have to tell you sorry for my english cause it's not my first language (i'm french)
I'm new in this site and i you are the frist autor i read so far, i really like your stories; you have a lot of imagination and pretty good idea; i would just tell that sometime it's like as if something missing, maybe more description of the personnality and the feeling of the characteres ?
It's very good keep doing ! |
| Sousa |
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2006-11-30 |
id # 4413 |
*Don't let my nick fool you*Honestly,this story,The Simple Black Dress is great!It reminds me of one of those intense ,thought provoking,thrillers.And no,it's not TOO romantic even though I love romance AND action,it's very well balanced.Actually,all your stories have that underline suspense which keeps most readers hanging on,that DUN Dun Dun! moment.I say keep doing the thing you're doing now cause it works,but if you think it's too ramantic and you don't like it then change some things but if you DO like it then don't let what others think mess you up.
You go girl (lol). |
| cathy nort |
2006-12-03 |
id # 4432 |
| thanks to Rin, Auriam, Jen and Sousa for taking the time to answer my questions. I appreciate VERY MUCH your thoughts. And advice. |
| Sousa |
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2006-12-03 |
id # 4433 |
| Someone got up on the wrong side of the rock this morning.And the plot thickens,more please. |
| Sousa |
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2006-12-03 |
id # 4434 |
| Oh,and you're welcome,glad to help. |
| zigpal |
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2006-12-03 |
id # 4435 |
| well that's not very neighborly. looks like there is starting to be some distance between the girls, and I'm thinking if Buffy would just talk to Willow maybe things might be so bad. great update |
| zigpal |
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2006-12-11 |
id # 4469 |
| yeah, like that is going to stop Buffy from going to check out the barn. great update |
| Sousa |
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2006-12-11 |
id # 4470 |
| GAH!!It's like you're dangling string in front of a kitten,a little frustrated kitten.I have to know what happens! |
| zigpal |
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2006-12-18 |
id # 4528 |
| uh-oh, looks like Willow might be walking into some trouble without her Buffy backup. can't wait to find out what Morgan and Daphne's plans for Willow is. |
| Rin |
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2006-12-18 |
id # 4529 |
I knew those two were up to no good...
...good to see the story progressing. |
| Sousa |
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2006-12-20 |
id # 4538 |
| *Peaks from behind hand*Can I look now?OMG!I want more!! |
| zigpal |
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2006-12-23 |
id # 4557 |
| looks like our girls are going to reconnect unless something else screws this up. it looks like Willow is starting to realize something is wrong. great update |
| Sousa |
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2006-12-23 |
id # 4559 |
| You write Buffy and Willow together very well.And you make a mean suspense story so please keep going. |
| zigpal |
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2007-01-06 |
id # 4641 |
| great update, I hope Buffy starts to figure out what is going on with Morgan and Daphne and why it involoves Willow. |
| Ahn |
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2007-01-06 |
id # 4642 |
| This story is great! I can't wait to find out what Morgan's up to. Update again soon! |
| Kirky |
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2007-01-06 |
id # 4643 |
| great update keep it comimg please |
| Sousa |
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2007-01-06 |
id # 4645 |
| All bow down before the master!This doesn't just pass,it exceeds beyond any goal.Even though it was short it still packed a punch and I can't wait for more.This story has easily reached the top of my list. |
| gnome |
2007-01-06 |
id # 4648 |
| i just wanted to tell you i absolutely love this story. i can't wait to see how buffy deals with everything going on. keep up the good work. you're doing great !!!!! |
| rebelrsr |
2007-01-06 |
id # 4650 |
| Weird family freinds, a mystery, and love in the afternoon. What more can you ask for? Great story. |
| rebelrsr |
2007-01-22 |
id # 4731 |
| I've been wondering what was in that barn. I guess now I know -- creepy! Great update. Can't wait to see what other things Buffy and Willow discover on their vacation. |
| Sousa |
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2007-01-22 |
id # 4732 |
| Eee!Now I kinda see what the game is.Good update. |
| Ahn |
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2007-01-22 |
id # 4734 |
| Wow what and update! I hope Buffy figures things out before something happens with Willow. I can't wait to find out what else she finds. Update soon, Please! |
| zigpal |
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2007-01-22 |
id # 4735 |
| great update and can't Buffy go anywhere without finding a body. |
| Rin |
2007-01-30 |
id # 4807 |
| Buffy better save our girl, or I'll be mad, mad, mad! |
| zigpal |
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2007-01-30 |
id # 4808 |
| great update. I see the crazy plan has revealed itself. lets hope Willow can break the hold on the dress of Buffy is in some trouble. |
| Ahn |
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2007-01-30 |
id # 4812 |
| I can't wait to see how Buffy get herself and Willow out of this! Update soon,PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! |
| Sousa |
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2007-02-04 |
id # 4873 |
| I know I post a lot of feedback but that just shows you how great this story is!This latest chapter was like a scene from 'Speed' or something.Time's running out. |
| Ahn |
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2007-02-04 |
id # 4874 |
| That was great but I need more like now! I've got to find out what happens next. Please, Update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| cathy north |
cnorth1975@yahoo.com |
2007-02-04 |
id # 4876 |
I sooooo appreciate feedbacks. I thought I was immune to hearing what others thought about what I wrote. But I'm not. I love hearing, thumbs up or down, that ......well just thanks.
Cathy |
| zigpal |
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2007-02-04 |
id # 4880 |
| dun dun dun. it looks dire for our ladies. hopefully, Buffy can get loose and save her girl. great update. |
| zigpal |
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2007-02-09 |
id # 4918 |
| great update. oh please, like Buffy is going to fall for that especially after what they just tried to do. I think Willow might want to keep an eye on her girl to make sure she doesn't go to far, but I let her go at it. can't wait to see what happens. |
| Sousa |
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2007-02-09 |
id # 4920 |
| Woo!That's how you kick an old lady's butt!Love it! |
| LilOldMe |
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2007-02-10 |
id # 4923 |
great chapter
looking forward to more |
| Ahn |
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2007-02-10 |
id # 4928 |
| Great update can't wait for more! Update ASAP! |
| Rin |
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2007-02-14 |
id # 4942 |
| Bow chicka bow wow...great story...as per the norm! Are you thinking of continuing this line, or are you through now?? After all, people still don't know about their relationship...and there's so many more adventures you could put them through!! |
| cathy |
knockout |
2007-02-14 |
id # 4944 |
Rin...........
No This story is as far as it's going. I have one that is almost complete. Their relationship, Willow's and Buffy's. is challenged. BUt love is love. I hope you take the time to read it. |
| Ahn |
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2007-02-14 |
id # 4945 |
| great ending. I can't wait to see your next story. I hope it's soon!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Sousa |
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2007-02-14 |
id # 4947 |
| And so is the conlusion of your latest work of literature.I really enjoyed it and I can't wait for your next great story. |
| zigpal |
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2007-02-14 |
id # 4954 |
| great ending to another great ending. looks like the girls are going to have some 'bible study'. |
| Linzi |
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2007-02-15 |
id # 4959 |
| Great loved this story. |
| Kirky |
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2007-02-15 |
id # 4960 |
| great end to a great story |
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