Reviews for After The Fall
zigpal 2006-12-13 id # 4490
I love this story. I can't wait to see how things turn out when they break apart.


gnome 2006-12-14 id # 4492
Great start! Really enjoyed it! Review soon please :D


red 2006-12-14 id # 4493
Very well written...however, I prefer Kennedy sadistic and getting pummeled by Buffy. *lol* Well done, nevertheless...would love a little Faith /Gman...


Sousa 2006-12-14 id # 4508
OMG,HOT!!!*pulls out fan*I love Kennedy so please don't do too much harm!This is looking great.


cathy north knockout 2006-12-15 id # 4516
Hand the fan over Sousa when you're finished. This puts me in a doozy of a mood. Everything is good about chapter 1


LilOldMe 2006-12-17 id # 4520
good start cant wait to find out what happens next
update soon please


Sousa 2006-12-20 id # 4539
I love you!Finally,someone who has my same thoughts.No beating of the Kennedy unless she asks for it and now Giles-ness *eww*.Can't wait for more.


zigpal 2006-12-20 id # 4540
poor Faith, can't do anything about Dawn's blackmail picture without possibly getting an ass kicking from Buffy, but it nice to see that she has changed. great update


kirky 2006-12-21 id # 4541
good story but when do you get to the b/w parts
update again soon


zigpal 2006-12-21 id # 4547
well since the Scoobs are splitting up and rearranging, maybe Giles can find himself a girl. I like the start of the splits being over something seemingly innocent. can't wait to see what happens next.


kirky 2006-12-22 id # 4548
gdgd update cant wait for more


tazandhooch 2006-12-22 id # 4554
Hi - I like this - the pace is good and the inclusion of all the characters is smart - in the show all the characters evolved and good fiction continues this. Look forward to the next part.


zigpal 2006-12-23 id # 4565
looks like we have the beginnings of the partner swap, and it would look like Faith is trying to help Xander cope. great update, can't wait to see what happens next


Lost 2006-12-23 id # 4567
This is one of my favorite stories! Upadate again soon...? Pwease? - L.


Anon 2006-12-25 id # 4580
Can't wait to hear more about buffy/willow together but I like the build up. Keep it coming!


zigpal 2006-12-26 id # 4581
great update, I liked the background on Faith explaining why she acted the way she did, and it looks like Dawn wants herself a slayer. wonder if Buffy is going to dream about a certain redhead. can't wait to find out.


zigpal 2006-12-28 id # 4598
hey as long as Buffy gets her Willow, I don't care how you get there. personally, I liked the Xander/Faith chapter, so if anybody gives you lip just tell I liked it. great update. countdown to partner swap commenced.


Rin 2006-12-29 id # 4600
Oh, yeah...an update, and one step closer to the Buffy/Willow lovefest, and this big 'finally get together' scene we're hearing so much about...


sailor80 sailor680@yahoo.com 2006-12-29 id # 4601
No apologies, you're doing great. Keep at it.


Anon 2006-12-31 id # 4611
I like the build up but can't wait for the b/w part and to see what happens with everyine else. Keep it coming!


rebelrsr 2007-01-01 id # 4613
Really enjoying the story. I know it's a B/W site, but good writing is always preferable to gratuitous sex :) I am a closet Faithaholic, so more Faith is wicked cool.


rebelrsr 2007-02-11 id # 4935
Great update. I really liked the way you're maneuvering Buffy, Willow, Kennedy, and Dawn. I might like Wiffy, but it's disappointing when supposed loves lose interest in a page or two. Looking forward to the big shake up.


zigpal 2007-02-11 id # 4936
great update. I like that the Scoobies are making amends with Faith, and the sort of uncomfortableness of the foursome is kind of funny because they all are trying not to let on that they actually want someone else. I can't wait to see what happens when Dawn models clothes for Kennedy.


Ahn 2007-02-11 id # 4937
I'm so glad you didn't forget about this story. This chapter was great and long. I like how things are going but I can't wait for the W/B and K/D stuff to start happen. Mostly the B/W because there hasn't been much on them. I can't wait for the next update. So Please hurry!!!!!!!!


Rin 2007-02-12 id # 4941
I'm interested to see this big B/W get together scene that you've got brewing...so of course you should keep building it!!


Anon 2007-06-19 id # 5710
Great story! I hope you decided to update it again. I want to see how you bring Buffy and Willow together and what everybody does now that there not the only ones fighting evil or is some kinda big evil going to come that they have to fight???????


Anon 2007-07-31 id # 6037
I just found this story. It's great and I hope you update it again.


Jessie x_nirrti_x@yahoo.com 2008-01-29 id # 7161
Is there going to be more because I love what you've written so far?!