Reviews for Learning Curve
zigpal |
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2007-01-07 |
id # 4652 |
I wouldn't worry about taking the Faith/Tara stuff out all the way otherwise your story might not be readable. personally I think you could keep both slayers with their witches in the story, it will give the story depth, and it wouldn't totally be about Buffy/Willow. keep up the good work. |
sailor80 |
sailor680@yahoo.com |
2007-01-08 |
id # 4653 |
Great start. Lots of energy. What's next? |
LilOldMe |
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2007-01-08 |
id # 4655 |
great story keep it coming looking forward to w/b
update soon plz |
LilOldMe |
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2007-01-12 |
id # 4669 |
good update keep them coming please |
zigpal |
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2007-01-12 |
id # 4671 |
great update and Buffy's plan just screams bad idea, but can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work. |
sailor80 |
sailor680@yahoo.com |
2007-01-12 |
id # 4672 |
Nice update. Characterization and dialog are excellent, and I like how you are moving the plot along. More, please! |
Ahn |
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2007-01-12 |
id # 4673 |
I can't wait to find out what helps Buffy get happy. Is it going to be finding love with Willow. This was a great update. Update again soon. When's Willow and Tara going to end. I like Tara, Just not with Willow or Buffy! |
zenithar |
2007-01-15 |
id # 4683 |
Can't wait to see which direction you take the next chapter in. |
Ahn |
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2007-01-15 |
id # 4688 |
It's getting even better! I can't wait to see how the B/W relationships grows. Update again soon, Please! |
zigpal |
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2007-01-15 |
id # 4690 |
great update. hmm, I wonder who is going to take care of the wounded slayer, and it looks like the plan to defeat Adam has hit a snag. |
zenithar |
2007-01-16 |
id # 4691 |
Nice cliffhanger, cant wait to see what Willow and Xander find.
Update!! ^_^ |
LilOldMe |
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2007-01-16 |
id # 4692 |
great update cant wait for more |
sailor80 |
sailor680@yahoo.com |
2007-01-18 |
id # 4711 |
I'm loving this! Little twist here, little twist there...and I'm impatiently waiting for the next bit. |
zigpal |
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2007-01-18 |
id # 4712 |
great update. oh boy, the F word is probably going to start a nice fight between the friends. can't wait to see what happens. |
zenithar |
2007-01-18 |
id # 4713 |
Hmm, who will be the vessel? What sort of reaction will bringing Faith into the conversation cause? This and more must be answered!!
*sry for some reason i was feeling like one of those guys who announcer pple at the end of shows* Keep with the updates! |
LilOldMe |
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2007-01-19 |
id # 4716 |
great update
keep it coming please |
Ahn |
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2007-01-19 |
id # 4717 |
This story is coming along! I can't wait to see how Buffy and Willow final get together! Update again soon, Please! |
Ahn |
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2007-01-20 |
id # 4720 |
Great update. Update soon please! |
zigpal |
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2007-01-21 |
id # 4721 |
great update and it looks like the Scoobies have some choices to make that is once they make up with each other. |
LilOldMe |
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2007-01-24 |
id # 4747 |
great update
cant wait for next chapter |
zenithar |
2007-01-24 |
id # 4750 |
Nice job with Faith. Can't wait to see how you get Buffy with Willow and Faith with Tara.
And as usual keep updating! |
zigpal |
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2007-01-24 |
id # 4751 |
Buffy or Tara, hmm? great update and why do I have this feeling Joyce is going to put the Scoobs back together again. I can't wait to see what happens. |
Howard |
howardrussell2000@yahoo.com |
2007-01-25 |
id # 4759 |
A very good story. Thank you for writing it.
I like that there will be Faith/Tara. Most of here in the Wiffy community actually do like Tara and want her to be happy. We hear the cries of the "two slayers, two witches" crowd and we say "Yeah, Buffy/Willow and Faith/Tara." So don't worry about cutting those parts out. |
Ahn |
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2007-01-26 |
id # 4769 |
I like this story but would lov to hear just as much about B/W as F/T. Keep the updates coming! |
zigpal |
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2007-01-27 |
id # 4777 |
great update and oh goody, this talk doesn't look like it is going to be a great one. can't wait to see what Joyce has to say. |
zenithar |
2007-01-27 |
id # 4778 |
Wow your updating quickly. Keep it up. I'm wondering when the rest of
the scooby's are going to understand that they will need Faith in some way. |
LilOldMe |
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2007-01-28 |
id # 4780 |
love this story
keep it coming update soon |
Ahn |
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2007-01-28 |
id # 4793 |
Great story but I want more Buffy, Willow and the gang! Update soon though because I have a feeling things are about to get more intense. |
zenithar |
2007-01-31 |
id # 4824 |
That was just an evil way to end the chapter.
Keep with the updates! |
zigpal |
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2007-01-31 |
id # 4825 |
great update. if it who I think it is, soomebody else is about to get a talking to. can't wait to see. |
Ahn |
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2007-01-31 |
id # 4831 |
I wounder who's at the door? Update soon! |
Ahn |
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2007-02-03 |
id # 4868 |
Great update! Keep it coming! |
LilOldMe |
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2007-02-04 |
id # 4870 |
great update, hope to read more soon |
zigpal |
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2007-02-04 |
id # 4878 |
great update. I have a feeling that Joyce is going to be calling the shots, at least until the spell needs completed. can't wait to see Tara's reaction to what she finds when she comes back. |
Howard Russell |
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2007-02-05 |
id # 4895 |
Don't worry about going too slow. Just don't stop! I prefer a fic that builds a relationship over a PWP that just drops them in bed together. I love how this is going. |
zenithar |
2007-02-09 |
id # 4916 |
Yay! More wiffyness. And even a Faira moment. ^^ Very nicely done on both counts.
Keep with the updates! |
zigpal |
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2007-02-09 |
id # 4917 |
wow that is scary, the Summers' women on the same page. now lets hope they can get everyone to work together with little bloodshed. another great update, keep it up. |
Kirky |
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2007-02-10 |
id # 4924 |
Great cant leave it hanging like that for so update soon please |
Ahn |
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2007-02-10 |
id # 4927 |
Great update. Now we just need to get on with the B/W loving! Can't wait for the next update. |
zenithar |
2007-02-16 |
id # 4969 |
You got Buffy perfect in this chapter. Might even be my favorite chapter of yours.
Wonder how Willow's going to react to haveing Buffy move into kiss her.
As usual keep updating! |
Ahn |
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2007-02-16 |
id # 4971 |
Great update. Looks like maybe our girls might finally kiss. Can't wait for your next update! |
zigpal |
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2007-02-16 |
id # 4973 |
great update. looks like the slayers are taking the lead on getting their witches, but if it plays out the same, Willow will put a stop to it before it gets to far. |
zenithar |
2007-02-21 |
id # 5003 |
Very nice job on the wiffy, can't wait to see what the doctor will do. :P
The way you ended things was just cruel, Tara's crying and Faith is completly oblivious to the cause. good job. |
Rin |
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2007-02-21 |
id # 5006 |
That's what Faith gets for thinking she could bathe...stinky slayer...
Ohh...I wonder if it's the doctor that caught our girls... |
Ahn |
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2007-02-21 |
id # 5007 |
I wounder who's standing at the door. That was great! can't wait for your next update! |
zigpal |
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2007-02-21 |
id # 5011 |
great update. looks like both slayers are in trouble, but Faith is more likely to get yelled at while Buffy is probably looking at some teasing. |
zigpal |
2007-02-25 |
id # 5025 |
great update. Wow, I figured Joyce would go after Buffy with the teasing, but apparently, Willow was taking it worse than Buffy, and poor Faith, she gets a dressing down for not thinking, and then is told that there is another talk coming. |
zenithar |
2007-02-26 |
id # 5028 |
The whole Buffy/Willow scene really was pricless. You did a great job with the chapter.
And soon you'll have the entire gang together, wonder if it'll end up being a screaming match. |
Howard Russell |
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2007-03-01 |
id # 5043 |
Yay! More chapters!
I really love the way they got together. Very sweet and well done. Can't wait to read more. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-02 |
id # 5049 |
That was a great update! I can't wait to see what happens next. It was priceless the way Joyce handled walking in on Buffy and Willow. Update soon! |
zigpal |
2007-03-04 |
id # 5062 |
great update. It seems the family is all together, lets hope all goes well, at least until Adam is taken care of. |
zenithar |
2007-03-05 |
id # 5064 |
Nice, you've really got things flowing nicely. And cool job with giving Faith and Tara each other petnames.
Keep with the updates! |
Ahn |
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2007-03-05 |
id # 5069 |
That was a greaat chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please! |
zigpal |
2007-03-06 |
id # 5079 |
great update. next stop Summers residence, can't wait to see what happens next. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-07 |
id # 5080 |
I'm so glad you updated so fast. That was great. I think Willow and Buffy really need to talk! I also liked how you had Willow anger and by the end willing to do the spell to hide Faith. Hopefully she isn't planing on turning her into a frog, Buffy's not up to the fighting Adam thing. Please keep updating like this. Thanks |
zenithar |
2007-03-07 |
id # 5081 |
Nice job with how you're repairing all the friendships. Can't wait to see how things go down in the initiative. |
zigpal |
2007-03-10 |
id # 5094 |
great update. It is always the quiet ones, looks like Faith has her hands full, so to speak and Nurse Willow. Hmm, there could be outfits. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-10 |
id # 5096 |
That was a great update but I can't wait to see more of the Buffy Willow shipping. Update soon please! |
Howard R |
2007-03-10 |
id # 5097 |
Now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Don't sweat the Fara. Red Alerts like that are only needed if you're pairing Buffy or Willow with someone else. Then you'd need a justification warning saying that your story needs it to get to the Wiffy goodness. But characters other than Buffy and Willow? No warning needed. Most of us want Tara happy when Willow goes to her true love. |
zenithar |
2007-03-11 |
id # 5105 |
Great job with the character interaction. Intersting having Tara take the lead when it comes to Faith, and the Nurse Willow comment - cant wait.
Update quickly |
Howard R |
2007-03-13 |
id # 5115 |
Woohoo! Wiffy smut! YAY!
I like that Willow still has issues. It seems very in character of her. You're doing great with this fic. |
zenithar |
2007-03-13 |
id # 5116 |
Nice job with Nurse Willow :P Your always getting better at keeping everyone in character, so keep up the good work.
Cant wait to see what happens next |
zigpal |
2007-03-13 |
id # 5122 |
great update. Yeah right, Willow just makes Buffy think she is in charge, but she and Tara know who has the real power in their relationships. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-13 |
id # 5125 |
Ok so what bugs Willow more Tara with someone else or that Tara is with Faith. So I wounder what happened with Buffy and Willow. LOL! Can't wait for more updates! |
zenithar |
2007-03-16 |
id # 5147 |
Somehow I dont think they planned on having guns looking them in the face.
Awsome cliffy though. Can't wait to see where you'll take it. |
zigpal |
2007-03-16 |
id # 5148 |
great update. well poo, looks like our friends have to do some explaining before kicking Adam's ass. |
Howard R |
2007-03-16 |
id # 5150 |
At first, I wondered at the rappeling pairing. But you were right, those two needed to talk. And that was the best way to recapture the spirit of the original scene.
"Now we go find Adam and explain that you don't get to beat up on my girlfriend without the Scoobies returning the favor." Um, so the Scoobies are going to beat up Adam's girlfriend? |
Ahn |
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2007-03-16 |
id # 5152 |
Great update. I don't know if I'd be so easy to forgive but what the hell. I can't wait for more! |
zigpal |
2007-03-21 |
id # 5193 |
great update. Boy, the witches could be in trouble after this is over because I'm thinking, battle like this is going to cause some serious H & H with the Slayers. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-21 |
id # 5200 |
Great update! Can't wait for more! |
zenithar |
2007-03-22 |
id # 5206 |
Nice job with the colonel interation stuff. Can't wait to see how the fight goes down between Faith and Adam. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-26 |
id # 5227 |
Great update. Can't wait for more! |
zenithar |
2007-03-27 |
id # 5232 |
Awesome job with the fight scenes. Now, we have to wait and see how you wrap the end of the season.
Are you going to have the four who did the spell do the weird dream thing? If you do you might want to have when Faith faces the first slayer get Buffy to show up and save/help her. |
zigpal |
2007-03-27 |
id # 5235 |
great update. Now comes the fun part of making it out alive because Faith is going to have some serious double H going on. |
Ahn |
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2007-04-03 |
id # 5271 |
Great update! Keep it coming! |
zigpal |
2007-04-03 |
id # 5272 |
great update. hehe, Buffy is teasing Faith, and Joyce is too. Hmm, wonder who could make her feel better. |
zenithar |
2007-04-09 |
id # 5295 |
haha, everyones picking on Faith. Good job with keeping things moving. |
zigpal |
2007-04-09 |
id # 5300 |
great update. Wow, Buffy wants a little witch action before Faith does. What is the world coming to? |
Ahn |
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2007-04-09 |
id # 5303 |
Great update. Now that Adam and Riley are taken care of I wounder how things will go between Buffy, Willow, Tara and Faith? Looks like it ight be a night silled with Buffy/ Willow and Tara/ Faith lovin! Update soon! |
zigpal |
2007-04-17 |
id # 5341 |
great update. Hmm, while Buffy and Willow are playing orgasm tag, Faith better watch her comments or she find herself meeting Mistress Tara, and I'm sure she will 'fix' Faith's problem. |
Ahn |
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2007-04-17 |
id # 5346 |
Can't wait to see where you take this story now. Update soon! |
zigpal |
2007-04-24 |
id # 5377 |
great update. I hope Faith is smart enough to ask for help if her dreamquest starts to get too hard for her to handle. |
Ahn |
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2007-04-24 |
id # 5383 |
Great update. Can't wait for more! |
zigpal |
2007-05-01 |
id # 5412 |
great update. Well, one down, and... Lets hope Faith keeps her wits with her because I'm thinking the 'fun' is just beginning. |
Ahn |
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2007-05-01 |
id # 5417 |
I wounder what Willow will pick to help Faith on??? Can't wait for more! |
zigpal |
2007-05-08 |
id # 5436 |
great update. That should be the way everyone wishes people good luck. I wonder how much ass-kicking Tara is going to need to do to Faith during her turn. |
Ahn |
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2007-05-08 |
id # 5441 |
I wounder what memory Tara will be in? Can't wait for the next update! |
Anon |
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2007-05-16 |
id # 5488 |
good story. |
Ahn |
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2007-05-16 |
id # 5490 |
Looks like things might get even more crazyer! Can't wait! |
zigpal |
2007-05-16 |
id # 5491 |
great update. Well, this doesn't look good for our heroine. Let's hope the Scoobs jump in help Faith before she and Tara lost for good. |
Whedonist |
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2007-05-22 |
id # 5548 |
Are we thinking sequel? It's be awful nifty. Great Story. Thanx! |
zigpal |
2007-05-22 |
id # 5549 |
Excellent ending. Damn, I guess they told Professor Z, poor guy. I'm thinking Faith didn't expect a family and girlfriend after she woke up from her coma, but it looks like she'll take them. Great job. |
Ahn |
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2007-05-22 |
id # 5550 |
I hope they don't come after Faith again. Now for some Buffy/Willow time. I can't wait to see how things work out! |
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