Reviews for Finding Her Way Home Ahn 2007-01-31 id # 4840 I can't wait to see what you do with this story!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! zigpal 2007-01-31 id # 4841 I'm interested in seeing what you do with this. kirky 2007-02-01 id # 4843 Glas to see it posted cant wait to see how you write the next chapter update soon please Linzi 2007-02-01 id # 4844 great cant wait for the next chapter gnome 2007-02-01 id # 4846 i really can't wait to see what you come up with. good luck ;) Tyler 2007-02-01 id # 4852 good luck LilOldMe 2007-02-01 id # 4853 Great Cant wait to see what you do to this fic. acs see2go4me@yahoo.com 2007-02-05 id # 4886 Interesting idea. The first part seemed kind of rushed (the 'lets get that idea out before I forget it' kind of thing.) though not badly - but the second part works a lot better. Is this a collaboration or is only the first part going to be written by someone else? zenithar 2007-02-05 id # 4888 Nice job with the second chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with the story. gnome 2007-02-05 id # 4890 wow. i totally love your chapter. really enjoyed willow with her family conversations. please update soon :D Ahn 2007-02-05 id # 4891 I love where your headed with this I can't wait for more. So please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cleo cleo_rose26@yahoo.com 2007-02-05 id # 4892 Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next!! zigpal 2007-02-05 id # 4894 great start for you, and I can't wait to see what Buffy does with her new information. can't wait to see what is to come. Howard Russell 2007-02-06 id # 4900 A good continuation. Will be good to see where this goes now. Kirky 2007-02-06 id # 4901 Great chapter love what you've done so far looking forward to reading more LilOldMe 2007-02-06 id # 4902 love where you heading with this story. cant wait for next chapter sailor80 sailor680@yahoo.com 2007-02-06 id # 4905 Way to hit the ground running. Looking forward to the next chapter. WillFanatic 2007-02-07 id # 4908 Wow i like what you've done to the story so far update soon please IncWill 2007-02-07 id # 4909 love it Zander 2007-02-07 id # 4910 Looking forward to finding out what happens next dont wont no w/t action though at all wont b/w update soon please zenithar 2007-02-10 id # 4931 Funny recap of Dopplegangland and nice update. Wonder if Willow is going to see anything with her sudden magic explosion. Ahn 2007-02-10 id # 4932 Your doing great with this story. I'm glad you decided to contiune it. Can't wait to see how you bring B/W together! Keep the updates coming, I can't wait for more! Sousa 2007-02-11 id # 4933 I'm really liking this but it isn't updated fast enough!Can't wait for next chapter. zigpal 2007-02-11 id # 4934 great update. the ending was very surprising, and I can't wait to see how it turns out and how Willow's family will handle her disappearance. can't wait to find out. Kirky 2007-02-12 id # 4938 Great chapter looking forward to the next zenithar 2007-02-16 id # 4970 Interesting ideas on how magic works. Everything really fits together, even makes sense of how cannon went. Can't wait to see what's next. Ahn 2007-02-16 id # 4972 Your doing a great job with this story. I can't wait for your next update! zigpal 2007-02-16 id # 4975 great update. I'm thinking the call to Giles is going to be an interesting conversation. can't wait to see what happens next for Willow and Buffy. Quinn browngrrl_twentysix@yahoo.com 2007-02-17 id # 4979 I really like the direction that you are going with this story. It is extremely entertaining. I had also wondered if the author of the first chapter was going to finsh this, and her other stories. So I think after this one, if it's okay, you should finish up the other stories. zenithar 2007-02-21 id # 5004 If the parents are trying to get on Will's good side they're not doing a good job of it. You did an awsome job with emotionaly drained Buffy, wonder how things over there are going to turn out. Ahn 2007-02-21 id # 5009 That was great. I can't wait to see how the training goes. Are Willow's new parents going to let Giles and the Coven help Willow also? Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please! zigpal 2007-02-21 id # 5012 great update. lets hope Giles come back with good news and it looks like Willow is in some trouble. can't wait to see what happens zigpal 2007-02-25 id # 5026 great update. Now there is a refreshing idea, a prophesy about Willow. It looks like Willow may not know her real parents all that well, but it seems that she doesn't want to hurt them. zenithar 2007-02-26 id # 5029 The way you explain the magic stuff is awsome. Nice touch with the prophecy, wonder whats all involved with it. As usual keep updating, you're doing really great work. Ahn 2007-03-02 id # 5048 How I missed this update I'll never know. It's great though! I wounder if the powerful witch is Willow's new found mom? Can't wait for more. Please, Please update soon! zigpal 2007-03-04 id # 5061 great update. looks like there is a bunch of 'fun' happening to both our girls. can't wait to see what the moms and Giles do to help out our favorite girls. Ahn 2007-03-05 id # 5063 Great update! I can't wait to see what happens next. I wounder what there going to find out about the prophecy. When is Buffy going to meet Willow's new family not to mention a retired slayer. Please Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kirky 2007-03-05 id # 5065 Great update loving this story cant wait for more Linzi 2007-03-05 id # 5066 WOW good update cant wait to find out what happens next Update again soon please zigpal 2007-03-06 id # 5078 great update. lets hope Willow's moms can help their daughter, and hopefully Giles finds something to help her as well. zenithar 2007-03-07 id # 5082 Awsome detailed info. It's always cool to find authors that actually explain the whys and hows of their worlds. Keep up with the story. zigpal 2007-03-10 id # 5093 great update. If it wasn't bad enough, Buffy finds out that they took Angel's soul out. Buffy's life just keeps getting more 'fun'. Ahn 2007-03-10 id # 5095 I wounder what she thinks Faith can help with? At least Willow is leting her Mom's help her. I can't wait for your next update. Please do it soon! zenithar 2007-03-11 id # 5104 nice job with the forshadowing. Cant wait to see how you plan on getting all the characters in place before the big bad rolls in. zenithar 2007-03-13 id # 5117 Once again awsome job with visualizing the magic rituals and stuff. I'm interested in what the witches find in Willow's head. zigpal 2007-03-13 id # 5123 great update. lets hope by the time Giles gets to town, he knows more about the prophesy, and damn, it looks like Buffy might have to fight for 'her' Willow. can't wait to see what happens. Ahn 2007-03-13 id # 5128 I hope Tara doesn't get in the way of Buffy and Willow getting together. I'm not a fan of Tara. I think the only person I like her with is Faith. Anyways no Tara/Willow. Next I can't wait to see what they find in Willow's mind. Hopefully nothing to bad happens so they can get some answers. Update soon please! LilOldMe 2007-03-14 id # 5135 Great cant wait to find out what happens next looking forward to some B/W scenes or B/W and family etc Update soon please Kirky 2007-03-14 id # 5136 WOW its been a while great progress im loving this story and i cant wait to read more keep it coming zenithar 2007-03-17 id # 5156 You're getting Buffy perfect. Cant wait to see where you go next. Update!! zigpal 2007-03-17 id # 5158 great update. It's about time Buffy finally asks for aome help. I can't wait to see what happens in LA, and how things progress with Willow and her new family. Ahn 2007-03-17 id # 5162 Great update! I wounder what all Willow's mom saw in Willow's mind? When is Willow going to see how she feels about Buffy. Besides that one time that she tthought about her and that was just in a freinds type way. Maybe Tara and Faith will get together when she goes to L.A. Can't wait for the next update! Please soon! Sousa 2007-03-18 id # 5171 Great update but the space between Buffy and Willow is driving me crazy!Can't wait for more. zigpal 2007-03-21 id # 5192 great update. Well, it looks like Tara is doing was she was told, but I have a feeling that Buffy is going to do a act before think move. And just exactly who left the message, hmm. Tara? Giles? someone else? can't wait to find out. kirky 2007-03-21 id # 5195 Fantastic update look forward to reading the next chapter hope its soon update ASAP please Ahn 2007-03-21 id # 5199 So is the message from Giles or Buffy or maybe even someone else in the council?????? I love where your going with this can't wait for more!!!!!! IncWill 2007-03-22 id # 5202 Great update looking forward to reading what happens next Zander 2007-03-22 id # 5203 GrEaT update cant wait for the next one hope its soon zenithar 2007-03-22 id # 5207 Nice touch with the Faith comment at Willie's and as usual great depiction of the magic stuff. Quickly update!! Howard 2007-03-23 id # 5209 I don't mind that the Wiffy hasn't come yet. You've got a really interesting story going here. Don't cut it short just to get to the smoochies. Ahn 2007-03-26 id # 5228 That was great! What's going to happen to Buffy and is Willow's mom going to let them see each other. What is Buffy going to think when she finds out that one of Willow's mom is a retired slayer. Update very very soon, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Howard R 2007-03-27 id # 5230 Holy Crap! But I think that proved her mother's point rather emphatically. Love how this is shaping up! Thank you for writing this. Kirky 2007-03-27 id # 5231 Great update keep it coming looking forward to reading more zenithar 2007-03-27 id # 5233 Wow, longing bleeding into hatred, truly awesome pictures you've painted with this chapter. Hope Buffy'll be alright, but seeing as a huge wave a angry magic is about to hit her chances of her staying alright arent too high. zigpal 2007-03-27 id # 5236 great update. uh-oh, Buffy might be in some trouble. I'm thinking Buffy is going to meet more than just Willow after this. Sousa 2007-03-27 id # 5243 Oh man!!A HUGE cliffhanger!You can't do that to zoned in people like me,now I'll have to try that patience thing everyone's been going on about... Tyler 2007-03-31 id # 5256 Great story so far cant wait to see what happens next dont leave us all hanging update soon please :) zigpal 2007-04-03 id # 5273 great update. Oh good, an apocalypse coming and the slayer is breaking down, and not to poo-poo the party, but shouldn't somebody do something about the sixteen year old that has the house to herself, can anyone say kegger. Ahn 2007-04-03 id # 5277 This story is really great! I like that you got the 2 slayers talking even if Buffy still doesn't know yet. Is she going to tell Willow's mom that she's in love with Willow???? Update soon, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!! LilOldMe 2007-04-04 id # 5281 Great update cant wait to see what ekse you have planned for this story. Update again soon Kirky 2007-04-04 id # 5282 Gr8 update, cant wait for next chapter, looking forward to more family scenes and little will storys etc Update again soon please :) sailor680 2007-04-04 id # 5286 Can't wait to see how you pull everyone back from the edge. zenithar 2007-04-09 id # 5296 Seems like B's really good at beating other Slayers. Good job with portaying a broken Buffy, cant wait to see where else you go with this. zigpal 2007-04-09 id # 5301 great update. Joyce was a great mom, but she never pushed Buffy, but I'm thinking Willow's ex-slayer Mom is going to put her foot down and make Buffy do things without question. Ahn 2007-04-09 id # 5304 WOW!!!! i wounder what Willow thinks about that? I hope we find out what the prophecy is soon. I can't wait for the next update! So Please update soon! Kirky 2007-04-10 id # 5308 Great chapter, maybe they'll make her stay and then dawn will have to be sent up, then ther will be more family scenes update again soon please :} acs see2go4me@yahoo.com 2007-04-12 id # 5321 You're taking this in an interesting direction. Hopefully you'll explain the whole multiple slayer thing in your AU at some point in a way that makes sense (I'm enjoying the story but I think you've come really close to overdoing it by giving Willow a sister who could be a slayer OR a witch. Even giving her a mother who is a slayer seems a bit much. If her mother had been a potential slayer instead of a full blown slayer it would work a lot better. I'm assuming your AU has a complex slayer/watcher back story to explain it all. Hmm... it might actually work better if you DIDN'T have a character try to explain the whole slayer/potential thing to Willow in as much detail as you did. Simplify it a bit...). I've already said this but I AM enjoying this story, even with the 'too many/overly complex slayers' thing. I think your depictions of Buffy, Willow, and Dawn and their interactions with the other characters work really well in this story. Not too sure about Tara. She feels more like a plot device than a crucial part of the story at times. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Lots of questions -- things to think about ---- How is Willow going to react to Buffy's declaration of love (to Willow's family, not to Willow - oops.)? Her family? Is Buffy going to get a grip? What's going to happen with Tara (Is there a Tara/Faith thing in the works?). Hmm... :-) Kirky 2007-04-17 id # 5340 Great update looking forward to the next chapter Update again soon please? zigpal 2007-04-17 id # 5342 great update. Hopefully, these two don't get too cozy since the fam is outside and Jennifer can see what is going on, but it looks like there is going to be fun had when they finally do get alone. chaseher chaseherchiss@hotmail.com 2007-04-17 id # 5344 Gotta say, love your take on this story. I read the original posting a long time ago and wondered if it would ever be finished. This challenge was a great idea. More when you can please! Chase Ahn 2007-04-17 id # 5347 That was great! I can't wait to find out what's all going on with Willow now. Also what's going to happen now that Willow knows how Buffy feels about her?? Update ASAP please!!! zigpal 2007-04-24 id # 5378 great update. Talk about a buzzkill nothing like Wiffy kissage broken up by Mom in Buffy's head. Can't wait to see how things turn out when Wiffy gets alone, and how Dawn is going to react to her new house guests. Kirky 2007-04-24 id # 5379 Great update looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully some family scenes like willow findind more out about her self and family etc and just the general family stuff Update soon please :) Rin 2007-04-24 id # 5381 I can't decide if it was more funny or more...hott. LOL. I got goose pimples reading that sexy scene, then couldn't stop chuckling reading the part of the mom still in her head. Good times, good times... Ahn 2007-04-24 id # 5382 Very good update! I can't wait to see how Buffy and Willow connect! Update soon! zigpal 2007-05-01 id # 5413 great update. I guess Buffy is ready for that up close and personal witch/slayer bonding now, and what she is going to think when she finds out her fellow slayer is interested in her little sister. Ahn 2007-05-01 id # 5416 It looks like things are starting to heat up with Buffy and Willow! I hope Buffy is smart enough to not let her insecurties get in the way with Willow. I wounder who Faith is going to get with????? It looks like Dawn but Tara wouldn't be a bad choice either. Or maybe somebody new for Tara like Willows neighbor. Can't wait for the next update! zigpal 2007-05-08 id # 5437 great update. It seems both Summers girls are in for some fun, but Dawn's isn't a good kind of fun. Ahn 2007-05-08 id # 5438 Great update! I hope Buffy returns the teasing and what's Buffy's reaction going to be about what happened at her house while she and Willow were reconnecting???????????? Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!! kirky 2007-05-09 id # 5445 Great update looking forward to the next chapter update soon please :) Ahn 2007-05-18 id # 5499 Wow they got married! That really must have been great sex! Is Faith ok? When's Giles going to get there? Is Tara, Dawn and Faith going to Willow's new home? I can't wait for more! zigpal 2007-05-18 id # 5500 great update. I wonder if the Moms knew this was going to happen, and Buffy might want to watch herself, or Mistress Willow will set her right. And hopefully The trio in Summers' house night is over, so they can make some assemblance of what the heck is going on. gnome 2007-05-18 id # 5501 Poor Dawnie, having to see her mother come back just to be ripped away again. Good chapter though, really enjoyed it. Can't wait to see how 'married' life goes for our two girls. Sousa 2007-05-18 id # 5502 Married!?Gotta have more info here!Great update kirky 2007-05-19 id # 5508 WOW great chapter love it. update again soon cant wait to find out what happens next :) Kirky 2007-05-25 id # 5574 great update looking forward to seeing how you work this, maybe willow will have to go down into the hellmouth alone in order to deffeat the 1st could be intresting update again soon please :) zigpal 2007-05-25 id # 5576 great update. It looks like Willow might have her work cut out for her with making sure Buffy is being open with her, and it also looks like Dawn is seriously protective of Faith. Things should be fun when the Summers sisters get back together. Ahn 2007-05-28 id # 5593 Great update! Can't wait for more! Anon 2007-06-04 id # 5628 I can't wait to see how everyone else reacts to Buffy and Willow being together. I hope Tara can deal with just being friends with Willow but they are better as just friends. What's going to happen when Willow's new family meets the scoobie gang and isn't Xander woundering about his car yet? Is Buffy going to keep running from Willow because of her fears? Update soon! zigpal 2007-06-05 id # 5633 great update. Well what do you know, put Buffy in her comfort zone, and she is perfectly normal, and with Willow's help, she be in an all around comfort zone. I cna't wait to see what happens when Willow's 'new' family meets her 'old' family, and how protective of Willow Buffy gets. Ahn 2007-06-05 id # 5634 So what's Buffy going to do when she first sees Giles? If Buffy confornts Giles the rest of the gang is going to find out about Buffy and Willow how's Tara going to take it? How's Willow's moms going to handle what's going on? Maybe Willow's mom can give Buffy and Faith some fighting pointers. Please, Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kirky 2007-06-06 id # 5642 great chapter cant wait for them all back together lol would like it if it had more of Wills family in it. i mean they just found here there going to be in it more update again soon please Ahn 2007-06-12 id # 5665 Kennedy better stay away from Willow. I guess nobody has a problem with Buffy and Willow being together. I can't wait to hear what Giles has to say about everything. I think Buffy and Willow might need to work outsome of the tension from the day they've had! Can't wait for more. Update soon Please!!!! zigpal 2007-06-12 id # 5666 great update. Hehe, looks like sparring is going to be fun. Buffy is going to have fun with Kennedy something tells me. And it looks like Giles better get the answers wants first or there could be a problem. sailor80 2007-06-12 id # 5667 I'm really enjoying this. You should've let Buffy pop Kennedy, though. (Maybe later?) Sousa 2007-06-12 id # 5668 I loved this update!But I hope Kennedy isn't totally shunned just because she was raised a certain way(spoiled),give her a chance...not w/ Willow of course.I like Kennedy and I hope she has a bit of happiness too. kirky 2007-06-13 id # 5669 Great update, cant wait to find out what happens in the next chapter Hopefully there will be some D/F action i like that pairing almost as much as W/B Update again soon please -acs- see2go4me@yahoo.com 2007-06-16 id # 5680 Your story really shines when you have Buffy and Willow interacting (without the family) and the parts where Faith, Tara, and Dawn interact are also good. Sadly, this seems a lot more natural and believable (once we get past the issues I have with Willow's family) way to do a Season 6/7 re-envisioning than the canon story did. Or maybe it's because you aren't dragging it out as a way of torturing the characters like the Buffy writers did. Not really sure about Kennedy's behavior. She seems a lot more aggressive than in canon, at least on first meeting Willow. But at least you aren't making her evil (I hope :-)) Ahn 2007-06-19 id # 5708 The council was really messed up in there heads. Hopefully Willow can help Buffy work off some of this stress before her head explodes! Great update! zigpal 2007-06-19 id # 5712 great update. Yikes, it is looking like Buffy is close to 'Glory taking Dawn' snapping. Willow might want to keep a short leash on her girl to make sure she doesn't go there again. Kirky 2007-06-21 id # 5714 WOW great chapter, glad the gangs all together looking forward to more Ahn 2007-06-26 id # 5748 I hope Angle has some answers for the Scooby gang. What's going on with Buffy and this headaches? Nobodies really said anything about Buffy and Willow being married yet. Update soon! zigpal 2007-06-26 id # 5749 great update. Oh great if things weren't bad enough, now we have a seriously broken Buffy which leaves Willow with a big job of fixing her new wife. Kirky 2007-06-27 id # 5750 great chapter, realy looking forward to reading more Jordan blindside88_77@hotmail.com 2007-06-27 id # 5753 You just had to leave me hanging. Other then that it was one again another awesome chapter. Keep up the good work and i hope to see another update soon. Whedonist 2007-06-28 id # 5759 Can someone kick Giles for his lack knowledge? I mean if the incidents from high school didn't teach him something then surely the British Inquisition during Glory would have clued the man in that the Council kinda sucks. A lot. But then they got blewed up so *yay* I did a happy dance. At any rate, thank you for the update. totally diggin' the story. Update soon please...I get kinda bored at work. Ahn 2007-07-03 id # 5820 I like what your doing with this story. I hope Faith stays on the good side. She seems like the Faith from season 7 and that was a good one. I also like that it looks like Dawn and Faith might get together. Can't wait to see what Willow asks of Faith! Update soon! zigpal 2007-07-03 id # 5823 great update. Looks like Faith starts her redemption by leading the Scoobies while Willow heals Buffy. Something tells me this time Willow won't have an easy time. kirky 2007-07-05 id # 5830 Great chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next Update again soon please :) zigpal 2007-07-10 id # 5899 great update. I hope Willow can get through to Buffy, mainly to save Faith from having a panic attack, but with Dawn beside her maybe she'll be fine. Hmm, Dawn was doing a little magic mojo at the house and Faith is a slayer. I wonder what Buffy is going to say about her sister married to her one-time enemy. can't wait to see what happens next. Ahn 2007-07-10 id # 5904 Your doing a great job on this story! I wait every week for the next update and am never disappointed with it. It always leaves me waiting for more. On that note great update and i can't wait for the next one! Whedonist 2007-07-10 id # 5905 Dawnie and Faith...always thought that was an interesting pairing. Not that I mind it fits in some ways. So Buff's out of the picture or is she sitting on the benches for a time out? And how's Willow going to get her better before the shit hiteth the faneth? At any rate I'm sure you have a brilliant way out of the current mess...update soon I need to know. OH BTW kick ass chapter. Like the maturity level our Faith showed. kirky 2007-07-12 id # 5908 Great chapter i realy like the faith/dawnie interaction i hope they can some how be together cause she is magical in a way cant wait for Buffy to wake up Update soon please :} Anon 2007-07-19 id # 5970 I hope Buffy gets better soon! I'm sure Faith will be fine with Dawns help but we still need Buffy and Willow in the game. I can't wait for the next great update! zigpal 2007-07-24 id # 6005 great update. I guess Dawn has something to threaten Buffy with if she gives her crap about her choice in girlfriends, and nice to see Buffy back into the land of the awake, but I'm sure she has some things still to work out, not counting the slayer dream. Ahn 2007-07-24 id # 6006 I hope your muse finds her way back! This is a great update and I can't wait to find out what buffy and willow's slayer dream means. Also how's Buffy doing? Has there link opened back up? I really can't wait for the next update! Shadowcub 2007-08-01 id # 6045 Let the muse do her own thing, in case she gives you the finger, lovin the updates!!!! zigpal 2007-08-07 id # 6081 great update. I can't wait for Jennifer's respone to Faith's admission. And let's hope Wiffy gets through their stuff, so they can let the rest know about the Slayer Dream. Also, somebody needs to beat the living crap out the ungrateful Kennedy. Ahn 2007-08-07 id # 6083 Great update! I hope Willow can help Buffy with all that would be in her head. What's Faith want from Jennifer? Looks like is going to be a Faith and Dawnie romance here also. Is Tara going to get with Kennedy? I haven't seen those two together yet. Please update soon! Whedonist 2007-08-07 id # 6086 Hot damn, another excellent update. Keep it up... Whedonist 2007-08-20 id # 6191 Nice update. Thank you. zigpal 2007-08-20 id # 6192 great update. Looks like Wiffy lovins are close, and the Fawn is developing nicely. Although, I can't wait until Buffy finds out about Dawn's new girlfriend. Ahn 2007-08-20 id # 6195 Looks like the girls are going to do some reconnecting. Also Dawn might just really be the one to help Faith through everything. I hope Jennifer doesn't freak to bad. Great update and can't wait for lots more! zigpal 2007-09-04 id # 6268 great update. How soon does she forget? Doesn't Faith remember Dawn's fireball? I wouldn't want to be in her shoes when Dawn decides to call Faith on her crap. Ahn 2007-09-04 id # 6273 Great update! Please keep it coming! Howard R 2007-10-02 id # 6542 Great Chapter! Let's hope Buffy doesn't kill Faith right away. Ahn 2007-10-02 id # 6546 So glad to see an update on this story. Keep it coming. zigpal 2007-10-05 id # 6566 great update. Well what do you know, Anya knows about things other than her and Xander's orgasms, good on here. And this should be a fun meeting between Wiffy and sorta Fawn. Ahn 2007-10-16 id # 6652 I would have thought that Willow would handle the Faith and Dawn thing a little better. I hope that Willow doesn't mess up what's keeping Faith together. Keep the updates coming. japmap japmap@yahoo.com 2007-10-16 id # 6653 Good chapter! Really have enjoyed this story; in fact, I've been rereading it. Exciting and complex plot, great characterizations of B and W and your original characters, and wonderful love story. Also, I love strong Willow and vulnerable Faith trying so hard. BTW, I was a little surpised that neither Faith nor Tara has gone for Drew yet, being another Willow has to have some attraction, though I think Dawn is a better match for Faith... Can't wait for more excitement. zigpal 2007-10-17 id # 6654 great update. Nice work Faith, you go in to give them an update, and you end up with two pissed off witches, and when she finds out, a serious pissed off Slayer. Kirky 2007-10-18 id # 6657 Great chapter hope to read more soon hope willow and buffy stay together and that faith and dawn get together Updaet again soon please :) Shadowcub 2007-10-30 id # 6726 I feel like jumping, great update, I really liked it, in all of this I had forgotten that Faith should have had her own witch out there, and does this mean the BRAT is a witch? Really hoping for a longer story. Ahn 2007-10-30 id # 6727 Thanks for the great update! I can't wait til Buffy realizes that Dawn and Faith are linked. Update soon! zigpal 2007-11-01 id # 6732 great update. Damn, Faith isn't catching any breaks. Looks like Wiffy's first business should be to fix Dawn and Faith, so everyone is okay going into the fight. kirky 2007-11-02 id # 6736 Great update cant wait for the next chapter, hope you update again soon please :) Slaymaster 2007-11-13 id # 6812 Love the wolf pack idea! Keep up the good work, and please continue giving us updates! Ahn 2007-11-13 id # 6813 I like the primal slayer thing you got going. keep the updates coming. zigpal 2007-11-13 id # 6815 great update. Here's hoping there is a second bedroom is the Den O Love, or Faith and Dawn are mating in the training shed *g*. Ghost666 blindside88_77@hotmail.com 2007-11-14 id # 6816 I absolutely loved that chapter, very well done, can't wait until another one is posted. Keep up the awesome work. Kirky 2007-11-15 id # 6820 I like the changes cant wait to find out whats going to happen next Hope you update again soon please :) Ahn 2007-11-26 id # 6894 I guess the other room would be for Buffy and Willow so they can do there own connecting. Your doing a great job on this story. I still wait unpatiently for every update! Can't wait for the next one. Kirky 2007-11-27 id # 6896 Great chapter looking forward to reading the next chapter. Hope you update again soon cant wait to see the gangs reaction to dawn and faith been together lol i realy like D/F and B/W :) zigpal 2007-11-27 id # 6897 great update. Boy, Faith wants another Summers smackdown, but this time from Dawn. I guess we know who is going to be wearing the pants in this family. *g* Ahn 2007-12-10 id # 6950 Your still doing a great job on this story. I hope Buffy can make it through the drama of the first being there. Can't wait for more! Shadowcub 2007-12-11 id # 6954 TELL ME when it's over, I'm traumatized!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . zigpal 2007-12-11 id # 6957 great update. Well, it's business as usual for Buffy while Dawn learns to change plans when things go awry. Kirky 2007-12-15 id # 6980 Great chapter, realy looking forward to reading more again so so please PMS :) Ahn 2008-01-07 id # 7062 Great update. Keep them coming. beau 2008-01-08 id # 7065 nice update. Faith is going to pay for her running away, and it may be by more than one person. Shadowcub 2008-01-08 id # 7067 Now the Key will be shooting off at the mouth more than usual, loving the updatesssssssssssss!! kirky 2008-01-10 id # 7082 great chapter, hope to read more soon, please pms :) Ahn 2008-01-22 id # 7134 Glad to see an update. Ahn 2008-02-05 id # 7194 Great to see an update. Keep it coming kirky 2008-02-06 id # 7197 great chapter please pms :) Kirky 2008-02-15 id # 7218 Great chapter please pms :) Ahn 2008-02-20 id # 7239 thanks for the update! kirky 2008-02-22 id # 7244 great chapter looking forward to reading more again soon :) Anon 2008-02-22 id # 7247 Awesome story. Please continue to update. I can't wait for more. shadowcub 2008-03-03 id # 7279 I don't understand any of this, Buffy quitting slaying, there's always gonna be something freaky happening to her, and Faith who would trust her with a q-tip? She almost ended the world, if Buffy is the worlds biggest bitch past or present, she still sacrificed herself which is more than I'm sorry I almost got you killed, slept with your boyfriend and generally f'd you over. Now trust me Dark Slayer can say. And Buffy is her head screwed on right worrying about the un-dead, 80% of her problems began and ended with those vampire ex's of hers and now she concentrating more on them than Willow. Spike and Angel both killed too many people to get this worked up over, it seems she only gets this upset over them. Dawn she deserves Faith and Faith definatly deserves Dawn who I hoped would die seasons before this one. A great story, but I wonder at the tone. zigpal 2008-03-03 id # 7280 HEY SHADOWCAT, I have an interesting idea. If the pairings bother you that much, stop reading it. I may be a beta for this story, but I also love this story. We don't need to hear your prattle about things you don't like in the story while also liking the story. How is that even possible? Ahn 2008-03-05 id # 7286 Can't what to see what happens with Angle and crew there now. Anon 2008-03-09 id # 7292 cool story kirky 2008-03-13 id # 7309 Great chapter please please please pms hope will & buffy will be ok :) kirky 2008-03-13 id # 7310 Great chapter please please please pms hope will & buffy will be ok :) Ahn 2008-03-17 id # 7340 I'll be interested to see what Angel's reaction is to Buffy/Willow. Also how Willow's moms handle a vampire being on the good side. Rin 2008-03-17 id # 7341 I'm excited for the update! Can't wait to hear and see Angel's reaction...will Faith get a chance to tell him before he picks up Willow's scent on Buffy and vice versa?? LOL. Whedonist 2008-03-18 id # 7345 40 some odd chapters later and you still have me looking forward to updates...Awesome job. This was an interesting challange from the start and you've took, ran and did well with it. Thanks for that. Keep at it, W Anon 2008-03-18 id # 7347 great chapter continue to update kirky 2008-03-28 id # 7391 Great chapter please please please update again soon im dying to read more again soon Anon 2008-03-31 id # 7405 Great chapter Please update soon! petbeau 2008-04-01 id # 7406 Hehe, things should be picking up now with Angel and the gang in town shouldn't Kennedy be hitting on the new meat. Shadowcub lesiaf@bellsouth.net 2008-04-13 id # 7477 What is Buffy's problem if I were Willow I'd ask if she really wanted to be with her, still bitter over a vampire who took advantage of her when she was what 15/16? All Buffy is doing is showing everyone how little she cares about Willow. Anon 2008-04-14 id # 7478 Great chapter. I can't wait for more! Shadowcub 2008-04-28 id # 7538 Fight, fight!!!!