Reviews for Reveal zigpal 2007-03-11 id # 5099 Poor Willow can't tell Buffy how she feels for fear that she will lose her. rebelrsr 2007-03-11 id # 5100 What a great start. The Wiffy characterizations are perfect. I can't wait to see if Willow can find the courage to spill her secret. Ahn 2007-03-11 id # 5102 That was great. Can't wait to see what Willow ends up telling her. Update soon please! zigpal 2007-03-12 id # 5108 great update. Boy, Willow just about blew her secret with two words. Good thing Buffy is blonde then. can't wait to see how long it takes before Buffy pulls her own resolve face and asks Willow why she is acting weird. Ahn 2007-03-12 id # 5112 I wounder how long Willow can hold out? I don't think she's going to last much longer. Great update can't wait for more! Howard R 2007-03-13 id # 5118 I really like this. Just the right amount of angst for high school Willow. I'm guessing second season so, where's Angel in all this? zigpal 2007-03-13 id # 5124 great update. Wow, Buffy is dense. She can't be that oblivious that she doesn't realize that it is Willow that loves her, and if she avoids her, it is only going to make things worse. I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy gets to school. rebelrsr 2007-03-13 id # 5127 Poor Willow. She just can't seem to win. I wonder what will keep her from telling her secret next. Loving the story! Ahn 2007-03-13 id # 5129 It doesn't sound like Buffy will be happy that it's her that Willow's in love with. Of course it would kinda freak me if my friend was checking out someone elses honey because of her own feeling. Is Willow going to tell Buffy about Angel? I can't wait to see the next chapter! Howard R 2007-03-14 id # 5131 Uh-oh. I think Buffy got it. I mean, I think so but it was a bit fast and unclear at that point. A bit light on the description at that point. Excellent description otherwise, though. zigpal 2007-03-15 id # 5143 great update. Goody, now that they both know that they both know, this is going to be gut-wrenching watching these two dance around each other while knowing what is going to happen if Buffy and Angel do anything. continue soon please. Howard R 2007-03-15 id # 5144 Wow, this is good! I really like this one. I love that Buffy's answer isn't guaranteed. There's some real drama in this one. I like supportive!Xander. Too often he's portrayed as getting pissed that Willow likes the girl he likes. One beef I had with the last chapter but forgot to mention is, right at the beginning, Buffy called Willow and you said she dialed eleven numbers. An American local phone number is only seven digits. rebelrsr 2007-03-15 id # 5145 Can somebody please smack Buffy? I mean, Angel or Willow? Is there any doubt? Can't wait to see how you get rid of the King of Brood. Ahn 2007-03-15 id # 5146 Great update and I mean great update! It was just wow! Can't wait for more. I wouder what's going to happen now. I just can't beleave Willow told her everything like that. Update ASAP! I need more! rebelrsr 2007-03-17 id # 5157 I'm sure Mr.Gordo has more to say on this subject. Maybe he can get Buffy to actually talk to Will about her feelings instead of Angel. Great update. I'm just waiting for more. zigpal 2007-03-17 id # 5160 great update. Well at least Buffy is asking Angel his opinion and not avoiding the whole thing completely. I hope for all their sakes something happens soon before Willow and Buffy start to damage the relationship they already have. Howard R 2007-03-17 id # 5164 Well, the fact that she's confused gives us hope. At least it wasn't a flat rejection like Xander got in canon. This is a delightful journey. Thank you for taking us on it. Ahn 2007-03-17 id # 5165 I love this story! I can't wait to see wat happens! Please, Please update very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rin 2007-03-17 id # 5166 I love when Mr. Gordo gets a part in the stories...lol. Howard R 2007-03-23 id # 5214 Mr. Delgado. Cute! Is he Gordo sized? Bigger? I love that Buffy's still thinking about it. Ahn 2007-03-23 id # 5215 Great update! Looks like Buffy is starting to feel things around Willow. I wounder how long it'll take her to realize what she's feeling? I can't wait to see what happens next and then what happens when they finally do get together. Update soon, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kirky 2007-03-24 id # 5216 great story cant wait to see what happens next rebelrsr 2007-03-24 id # 5217 Buffy needs to make up her mind. She's making me dizzy; there's no telling how confused Willow feels. I can't wait to see how you finally get the girls together. zigpal 2007-03-24 id # 5218 great update. Yeah I'm thinking Xander is a good idea. Maybe he can get these two out of their funk and at least get them being a little more friendly, continue soon. Ahn 2007-04-09 id # 5306 I like where this story is headed I hope you update it soon! Anon 2007-04-21 id # 5366 I hope you still plan on updating this story! Please soooooon! zigpal 2007-05-06 id # 5428 great update. Well, we have mopey Buffy which is never a good thing, and Giles seems to have forgotten the thing called fun. Oh yeah that's right, he never found it. Ahn 2007-05-06 id # 5430 So glad you updated! Did Willow win Buffy anything??? Looks like Buffy's doing alot of thinking. Giles and Jenny going for tea and/or coffee. I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! kirky 2007-05-07 id # 5431 good chapter, looking forward to seeing how Will and Buffy get together update soon please Howard R 2007-05-17 id # 5492 First off, congrats on your internship! This is turning out wonderfully! I love conflicted-Buffy and flirty-Willow. You lost me on the foreign languages scam comment. Are there meanings to Gordo, Delgado, or Gros that I'm missing? I tried Google but I learned nothing. Ahn 2007-05-17 id # 5494 I read this last night and I think it's going great. I can't wait to see what happens at the alnight study session with Buffy's mom gone! Maybe a little experimenting on Buffy's part??? I really can't wait for more. So please, please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! zigpal 2007-05-17 id # 5495 great update. Hmm, all night cram session could lead to interesting circumstances. can't wait to find out. DawnBTVS 2007-05-17 id # 5496 To Howard: Gros is French for Fat and Gordo is Spanish for Fat. Delgado is Spanish for Delicate/Fine (I messed up the "skinny" intention there... whoopsie) thus the "scam" comment. Ahn 2007-05-19 id # 5506 Fast update! Thanks! Is Buffy going to show up for class? When she finally does show how mad is Willow going to be? It looks like Angle is going to push Buffy right into Willow's arms! I wounder how he'll react if it works? I can't wait for more! kirky 2007-05-19 id # 5509 good update looking forward to seeing what happens next. rebelrsr 2007-05-19 id # 5511 Excellent chapter. I loved your characterization; they were very true to canon, despite the change in love interests. My favorite part was when Willow had to keep herself from checking out Buffy's charms and then talked with Mr. Gordo. i could see it all so clearly. Can't wait for the next update. Howard R 2007-05-20 id # 5517 I love this fic! The angst is so canon and it's what really sells this one for me. It seems to fit the series so well. Howard R 2007-05-25 id # 5569 Not to be a nag, but I just realized something. Willow learned--on the internet, somehow--about Angel's curse. That plot element seems to have been dropped from recent chapters. And it's still a great and unused anti-Angel arguement point. kirky 2007-05-26 id # 5577 great update, aaw over protective Buffy update again soon please Howard R 2007-05-26 id # 5578 And protective-Buffy rears her pretty head! Cool! Amy's good at blaming others; I can see her wanting to punish Willow for Buffy threatening her. zigpal 2007-05-26 id # 5579 great update. Yikes, I wouldn't want to be in Amy's shoes if something happens to Willow. Ahn 2007-05-28 id # 5594 I can't wait to see what happens with Willow! Maybe this will help Buffy figure out what she needs to about Willow! Can't wait for the next update! zigpal 2007-05-30 id # 5599 great update. Well, at least the bad stuff is out of the way. Now, they have to figure out how to come through it. gnome 2007-05-30 id # 5600 Stupid Buffy, its not Wllows fault that Angel has that problem. Willow never even tried breaking them up. Buffy needs a good hit to her head. Good luck with that. Can't wait to read the next update! Ahn 2007-05-30 id # 5601 So is Buffy going to confront Angel on the fact that he new also? I can't wait to see what happens after Willow is back to herself. Looks like the girls are going to have to have a talk. Update soon, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kirky 2007-05-31 id # 5602 great chapter looking forward to more Howard R 2007-06-03 id # 5617 Okay, my Y chomosome is showing but I really don't understand why Buffy is upset. "Even though you knew, you were still willing to break me and Angel up?" Um, duh. If happy-Angel means deadly-Angelus, yes, break up Buffy and Angel at all costs. I really don't understand Buffy's ire. "Even though you knew it would save lives, you were willing to do it anyway?" Seems like a no-brainer to me. Heroic types are usually *for* saving lives. zigpal 2007-06-04 id # 5622 great update. I can't wait to see what horrors come to Buffy at the dance because it is bound to happen. Ahn 2007-06-04 id # 5624 Great update! Can't wait for more! Howard R 2007-06-05 id # 5637 Thanks! I think I understand a bit better now. zigpal 2007-06-08 id # 5651 great update. I can't wait to see how many 'dear lords' come out of Giles' mouth when he finds out about training Xander. Ahn 2007-06-08 id # 5652 Can't wait to see how Xander does in his training with Giles! Ok, I'm a little slow because I can't figure out what's going on between Willow and Buffy. I know what Willow wants but what's Buffy want? Is it Willow or Angel? It look like the green eyed monster came out when Amy was talking to Willow. I just can't figure out if Willow and Buffy are just friends right now or working on more between them. Can't wait for the next update! Howard R 2007-06-09 id # 5657 This is so deliciously vague. Will she or won't she? Thirteen chapters in and we *still* don't know for sure! I love this! Ahn 2007-06-21 id # 5715 I understand things now, I think! Great update. Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens on halloween. Howard R 2007-06-21 id # 5716 This is a thing of beauty. It really fits the romantic tone of early Buffy. She and Angel started much the same with tentative steps and very slow progress. I think this is the most realistic second season Wiffy fic I've ever read. It could have been filmed this way. But the film star is Audrey Hepburn, not Aubrey. zigpal 2007-06-21 id # 5718 great update. As much as he seemed to not want to do it, Giles enjoyed making with the pummeling/teaching of Xander. Kirky 2007-06-22 id # 5720 Great chapter, would love it if Willow suprised them all and was a great fighter she needs a little bit of luck on her side i think so maybe this will be it Update again soon please :) LilOldMe 2007-06-22 id # 5721 Great story the progress between Willow and Buffy i think is just spot on its believeable just wish willow would get a break bhv lesleygoo_browncoat@yahoo.com 2007-06-24 id # 5732 This is a wonderful fic. First one I've read all the way through in a long time. I especially like the realistic, low-key dialog and the way you don't telegraph what's about to happen or over-explain it, rather just let the action flow. My only criticism, and it's highly subjective, is that you when you do hit the angst/drama, you move on so quickly, like it was a speed bump. However, that also adds to the realism, so it's not a big deal. also praise to you (and beta?) for caring enough about your work and your readers to thoroughly proof and edit, use correct grammar and spell check. Anon 2007-07-05 id # 5838 I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope you update on this story soon! I just can't get enough of it. Howard R 2007-07-07 id # 5859 I'm thinking that Amy needs to rethink her relationship with Willow. The slayer's maybe-girlfriend should be treated with kid gloves. Though, this does fit with what we know of Amy. Not the smartest girl when it comes to magic or messing with the Scooby Gang. Ahn 2007-07-07 id # 5860 It looks like Amy might have the hots for Willow. Buffy better watch out or she may lose her chance with Willow. I hope Willow doesn't fall into the black magic. I can't wait to see what happens next! zigpal 2007-07-07 id # 5861 great update. Damn, Giles is begging for a slayer retaliation for what he did to Willow during training. Whedonist 2007-07-08 id # 5866 So what's the deal with Giles? Also, just wanted to say that I'm thoroughly enjoying this story and I'm a bad bad person for not having told you so prior to this. So update again...soon...maybe by the end of this week, yeah? =0) Rin 2007-07-13 id # 5913 YAY!! Updates!! And they actually said 'we're together'...how cute. Ahn 2007-07-13 id # 5914 So glad you updated your story I was in need of an update! This was great. It looks like the girls are starting to talk more and Buffy is looking interested in Willow. Can't wait to see the next update and if Buffy gets her longer dance! Poor girls didn't have a great ending to there first date. Howard R 2007-07-13 id # 5915 Excellent! Too bad their dance got jinxed. The Rosenberg/Summers dinner should be 'fun.' zigpal 2007-07-14 id # 5919 great update. You got that right. He is liable to blame the whole mess on Buffy, getting her in serious trouble with her mom. Anon 2007-07-14 id # 5920 I can't wait to see how the two family get together goes! Also how there next date goes and if they get a longer dance like Buffy wants. I want to know what's going through Buffy's head about what she thinks of Willow now. Ahn 2007-07-26 id # 6011 So is Buffy and Willow like soul mates? With how Willow makes Buffy feel it kinda sounded like it. I hope Willow does go all physcho witch. Amy so deserved what she got. I can't wait to see how things go at the spa and if Buffy can resist that primal feeling with Willow in a bikini. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! Howard R 2007-07-26 id # 6012 Wow, this is good! I love how the hellmouthy storyline blends with the relationship storyline. Very true to the series by doing that. zigpal 2007-07-26 id # 6013 great update. A day at the spa with Buffy and their moms. Nothing bad can happen there, right. I wonder if something was playing with Amy to get to Willow. I'm sure Giles and Jenny will get to the bottom of it. Rin 2007-07-26 id # 6014 Woohoo!!!! A spa trip...I'm jealous... bslayed 2007-08-03 id # 6057 I want to go to the spa! I can't wait to see how things go when they go. I don't want Willow to go all crazy witch on us but the drama it would make might be fun. All I know for sure is I can't wait for more! Anon 2007-08-05 id # 6065 Hmm....Spa time sounds great. I wounder what will happen there when you get these 4 women together???? Update soon please! I can't wait to see what happens! Rin 2007-08-06 id # 6072 I'm dying to know what happens at the spa, and all the naughty trouble they get into... zigpal 2007-08-06 id # 6078 great update. WOOHOO, Wiffy sleepovers. I wonder if the girls think Joyce is brain dead to what they were doing. Howard R 2007-08-07 id # 6079 Very sweet! Buffy's responding very nicely. If they're going to play games with getting caught, they should really talk about telling their parents. Ahn 2007-08-07 id # 6082 Great update. Are the girls going to be able to keep there hands off each other while Willow stays there? Update soon please! Ahn 2007-08-12 id # 6129 I can't believe the girl's made it through a night with nothing happening between them! Not even any smoochies. Did Buffy's mom figure out that the girl's are dating? How's Buffy going to train Willow? Is Faith going to be a good guy or a bad guy? Please update soon! zigpal 2007-08-13 id # 6132 great update. Oh swell, I can't to see the girls come home to their moms talking about thme, and nice play with Quentin, Faith, and Kendra. I can't wait to see how things turn out. rebelrsr 2007-08-13 id # 6133 Wow! I was happy and relaxed (well, as much as I could be with Faith and Buffy in the same room), and then Joyce happend. What was she thinking? Only bad things occur when Willow's mom is on the scene. I can't wait to see what the moms come up with. Howard R 2007-08-13 id # 6142 Uh oh! Things are getting more and more complicated. Minor note: she's Buffy Anne Summers. Cuprit 2007-08-13 id # 6146 It's like Quentin practices the art of pissing people off. That phone call between Joyce and Shelia has me interested. Wonder what's going on there. Update soon. Good Job. Ahn 2007-08-19 id # 6182 Buffy's mom handled all that better then i thought she would have. I hope Willow's parents handle it just as good. The bad guys made the news. Looks like Buffy an Willow are in for it now. Update soon! Howard R 2007-08-19 id # 6184 All this before the slayer secret has been revealed to Joyce, too! Yikes! Hopefully Ira won't blow a fuse. zigpal 2007-08-19 id # 6188 great update. Well, that is two parents down, only two to go. Plus, Buffy's night time duty has hit the news. This should be 'fun' on all fronts. Kirky 2007-08-22 id # 6202 Been away for awhile great coming back to so many chapters i like the way this story is heading hope to see more in he near future Update again soon please :) zigpal 2007-08-27 id # 6227 great update. Poor Buffy, newly risen vamp didn't know her. Wonder who can make her feel better? Ahn 2007-08-27 id # 6228 I hope things go good for Willow with her parents or Buffy might just flip. Was that there first kiss? I can't wait to get to see when they really get with the lovin. Update soon please! Howard R 2007-08-28 id # 6229 Scary dream. I bought it at first too. Clingy Buffy is sweet. Willow rejecting Oz in Amends is a stretch; Oz rejecting Willow after Lovers Walk is not. And a handy way to free up Willow for a good chunk of season three--until Buffy snatches her up. Unless you want to make Willow already know she's gay in Amends, then it's no stretch at all. Rin 2007-08-28 id # 6230 Kissage!!! 21 chapters it took for their first kissage!! And it was good times...oh, yeah... rebelrsr 2007-08-29 id # 6231 Excellent chapter. Wow. It had everything. I was nearly in tears over the "I'm moving to Maine," thing; cheering from the sidelines for movie night; and rolling on the floor over the pacifist vamp. More, please? I really want to know how Sheila feels about her daughter dating Bunny. Whedonist 2007-09-02 id # 6242 Excellent...'nuf said. Ahn 2007-09-05 id # 6282 Thanks for the update! I'll try and wait patiently for the next one! zigpal 2007-09-05 id # 6286 great update. Well, that could have went worse, but it looks like they just want Willow to be happy, but that probably means Buffy will be coming over to dinner sometime. Valyssia 2007-09-08 id # 6316 Very cute. Enjoyable read...I look forward to more as you have time. - Val Anon 2007-09-15 id # 6392 This story is terrific. The girls are together but not really at the sametime. Are they going to start taking it to the next step now that there parents know about them? Update soon! Bslay 2007-09-23 id # 6447 This story totally has me needing more. Please update again soon, I'm in need of more of this story! Ahn 2007-09-24 id # 6470 This is sure to be interesting with those 3 slayers and willow. Update soon! Howard R 2007-09-24 id # 6471 Sweet! I really love that *Buffy* told Kendra. Way to go, Buff! Howard R 2007-09-25 id # 6479 Is Faith a slayer? Kendra is (or was in canon) so I'm wondering why Faith is there and if she's a slayer already and if so, how? zigpal 2007-09-25 id # 6483 great update. Shopping with Slayers, Willow needs hazard pay. Ahn 2007-10-17 id # 6655 Great update! Howard R 2007-10-18 id # 6656 I really love this story. And I'm really curious about what Faith is. zigpal 2007-10-18 id # 6659 great update. It looks like the Faith non-liking is in full effect with Willow, and I can't wait to see how the Kendra/Faith saga turns out. Rin 2007-10-18 id # 6660 YAY! I always want to know what happens...you need to skip school, and write more often. LOL. No, not really...but updates are super sweet. Whedonist 2007-10-21 id # 6686 Love the way this is working out...although I would not be opposed to having Wills turn Travers in to a rat...hell it would be an improvement at this point or at any point really. =0D zigpal 2007-11-04 id # 6750 great update. Okay, that answers some questions, but leaves us with more. I can't wait to see where this goes now. Bslayed 2007-11-04 id # 6751 I really do enjoy this story and look forward to the updates. It was great! Can't wait for more. Anon 2007-11-19 id # 6853 So how does all this with Willow effect her and Buffy's blooming relationship? I know with Kendra and Faith showing up slowed the two from moving farther but will Will's magic but them to a stop? Please update soon, I really can't wait for more!!!! Ahn 2007-11-22 id # 6874 Great update! Can't wait to see how things progress with Buffy and Willow with the magic stuff, Faith and everything else getting in the way. Update soon, please! Rin 2007-11-27 id # 6895 I was just thinking how much I wanted an update on this story. Good luck with your schoolwork!! Ahn 2007-12-21 id # 6994 Good to see an update. Look forward to seeing how the girls deal with Willow's magic. Update soon! Anon 2007-12-22 id # 6996 Are the girls going to be able to work through this? Update very soon! Rin 2007-12-25 id # 6999 YAY!!!! Updates! bslayed 2007-12-25 id # 7002 Just what I needed to relax after the family on Christmas. Great update. looks like Buffy and Willow are having issues. Can't wait to see what happens if Buffy gets Willow to stay with her for the holiday's. Update soon! Howard R 2008-01-03 id # 7047 Great to see this one back! Love that this is a more realistic high school romance rather than prefection and light from the beginning. Great job. You should have replaced chapter 25 with this. A note that the story isn't abandoned is really superceded by a new chapter proving it's not abandoned. Ahn 2008-01-11 id # 7084 I like how you showed the tension between Buffy and Willow. I can't wait to see how you handle them spending a week together. Update soon. Rin 2008-01-11 id # 7086 Updates. Updates. You're so delicious. I love you more than all the little fishes. Anon 2008-03-12 id # 7301 Excellent story! I'm totally hooked. I look forward to your next update. Rin 2008-03-12 id # 7302 I haven't been able to write Wiffy, either...b/c of all my grad papers and all the politics that come with a master's degree. Good to see an update, though! Anon 2008-03-13 id # 7315 Great chapter. Glad to see you focuse on the girl's more again. Can't wait to see what happens on Christmas vacation! Anon 2008-03-14 id # 7320 Great story! Please update soon. Please!