Reviews for Simple Choices
zenithar |
2007-03-19 |
id # 5177 |
Gah!! You're starting another one!? It's start looks awesome, can't wait to see what direction you take with it.
Nice job with portraying the bubbly Buffy and as usuall update! |
Ahn |
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2007-03-19 |
id # 5179 |
Nice start. Can't wait to see how you bring B/W together and everything else you do with this story! |
zigpal |
2007-03-19 |
id # 5181 |
great start. I can't wait to see what the dumbass Marine does to piss Buffy off to send where we all know she belongs. |
zigpal |
2007-03-25 |
id # 5220 |
great update. Maybe the Initiative isn't just studying demons, and boy, Willow has it bad for Buffy. |
Ahn |
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2007-03-25 |
id # 5222 |
The story is still looking good. I can't wait to see what you do with it. Looks like Riley might be in on the bad with Walsh. Update soon! |
zenithar |
2007-03-26 |
id # 5224 |
Really awsome job with this chapter. Its making me think all sorts of things on why the marines just stood there.
Also really liking how you're splitting from cannon so much and still keeping their story line. |
Ahn |
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2007-04-01 |
id # 5264 |
This is getting intersting. Is Willow worried that Tara may find out that she's in love with Buffy if the spell goes wrong? I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy does find out what Willow and Tara are up to. Update soon! |
sailor680 |
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2007-04-02 |
id # 5266 |
I like how you've structured this, and I'm really curious about what's next. |
zigpal |
2007-04-02 |
id # 5268 |
great update. Hmm, looks like Prof. Walsh isn't the only one that is wondering about all of Buffy's questions. Lets hope the witches don't get caught or the Initiative might get a course in what it is like to get your ass kicked by a slayer. |
zigpal |
2007-04-08 |
id # 5293 |
great update. yeah right, when she gets back. I wonder how Riley will react when he finds out. |
Ahn |
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2007-04-08 |
id # 5294 |
That was good. I can't wait to see what Riley's tea finds and if it put Willow and Tara in danger! I can't wait to see how you bring Buffy and Willow together and when! Update soon! |
zenithar |
2007-04-09 |
id # 5297 |
Awesome job with keeping everyone in character so well. Really wonder whats going on in the Initiative right now, so update quickly!! |
zigpal |
2007-04-16 |
id # 5338 |
great update. Boy, I don't want to be Professor Walsh. She had some explaining to before, but after hearing from Willow and Tara, I'm sure she will have to explain more. |
Ahn |
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2007-04-16 |
id # 5339 |
I can't wait to see what happens now! Also how's Buff going to make things up to Willow????? Update soon please! |
Ahn |
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2007-04-23 |
id # 5373 |
Great update! I like how this story is head and it looks like the Wiffy love is starting! Can't wait for the next update! |
zigpal |
2007-04-23 |
id # 5375 |
great update. Hmm, field trip means Buffy and Willow get to play dress up together. That could be fun. |
zigpal |
2007-04-30 |
id # 5407 |
great update. Willow may be paying for that teasing later after they figure out what the hell is going on. |
zenithar |
2007-04-30 |
id # 5408 |
Nice Wiffyness, it was really good. :) Good job with the cliffy too |
Ahn |
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2007-04-30 |
id # 5409 |
Great update! I can't wait to see who was there with them. Update soon! |
Ahn |
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2007-05-07 |
id # 5433 |
Great update! It looks like Buffy may not like Tara getting to close to her witch! I think Buffy still owes Willow for being right maybe a special slumberparty. Faith's awake I wounder how this will change things?? Update so, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
zigpal |
2007-05-07 |
id # 5434 |
great update. Now that Willow knows what double H feels like, she can really help Buffy when she comes all riled up. And it looks like Riley who is getting closer with how Buffy took to Willow after Adam attacked her, plus she is a little wary of Tara's feelings for HER Willow. |
-acs- |
see2go4me@yahoo.com |
2007-05-08 |
id # 5435 |
Nicely done so far. The interaction between Buffy and Willow is cute though I don't think Buffy should feel too smug that Willow is clueless that there are two blondes checking her out... (ie. Buffy and Tara)
Other things:
Kind of wondering what happened between chapters 7 and 8 that we didn't see. At the end of 7 the creature suddenly appears. Right at the beginning of 8, Buffy calls it by name, even though there is not indication in 7 (or anywhere else before that that I can see) that anyone told her it's name.
You're compressing things in Season 4 by throwing Faith into the Adam mess... I'm assuming you are going very AU with her appearance? |
kirky |
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2007-05-14 |
id # 5468 |
good update looking forward to the next chapter
update again soon |
zigpal |
2007-05-14 |
id # 5472 |
great update. Poor poor Riley, I feel bad for him. Oh wait, no I don't. Hmm, looks like Wiffy is right around the corner. I can't wait to hear Willow's answer. |
Ahn |
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2007-05-14 |
id # 5480 |
I can't wait to see what Willow's answer will be to Buffy! Update soon, Please! |
Ahn |
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2007-05-20 |
id # 5525 |
It looks like Buffy and Willow need to talk but I'm guessing that's going to have to wait with Faith there and then being at Giles. I like how you have Buffy being the strong one and acting on her thoughts. Keep it up! I can't wait for more! |
zigpal |
2007-05-21 |
id # 5527 |
great update. Wiffy kissage, nice.And Faith is giving a go for the good guys. Plus, it looks like Graham and the boys might be a little pissed at the government. Fun for everyone. |
Howard R |
2007-05-21 |
id # 5530 |
And Buffy finally makes the simple choice she should have in the tenth grade! Woo hoo!
Willow better stick close to Buffy. If Buffy gets on her own, she's likely to second guess herself over kissing Willow and freak out. It was a little too impulsive for her, I think. |
zigpal |
2007-05-28 |
id # 5591 |
great update. Yikes, Tara might want to watch how much attention she pays to Willow if that gets Buffy's dander up. I can't wait to see if Tara's look into Faith changes the Scoobs outlook on how they see her. |
sailor80 |
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2007-05-28 |
id # 5592 |
Excellent! Moving fast, lots of conflict, and interesting things to come...soon? |
Ahn |
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2007-05-28 |
id # 5598 |
I think Buffy and Willow need to talk before Buffy grinds all her teeth away or kills Tara. What's Tara going to find whn she's looking at Faith? I'm excited to see what you do with this story. Update soon please!! |
zigpal |
2007-06-04 |
id # 5621 |
great update. Whoops, I guess there were feelings on Tara's end. I hope this doesn't throw a wrench into the blossoming friendship between the witches. |
Ahn |
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2007-06-04 |
id # 5623 |
Looks like Tara isn't to happy about Buffy and Willow. I wounder how everyone else is going to take it and how long there going to hide it. Update soon please! |
Ahn |
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2007-06-11 |
id # 5663 |
So did Buffy get druged like the rest of the initative guys did because she sure is acting like it! She's being down right bitchy. Looks like there's trouble in paradise for the new couple. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!! |
zigpal |
2007-06-11 |
id # 5664 |
great update. Well, there is the plan. Now the Scoobs have to come up with a way to destroy Adam, and then Buffy and Willow can tell the fam about their budding relationship. |
sailor80 |
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2007-06-18 |
id # 5690 |
Sweet! love the angst. I'm thinking Buffy won't get a lot of rest. |
Ahn |
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2007-06-18 |
id # 5691 |
That was great! I hope she remembers or is ready to admitt her feelings to Willow or she might just lose her to Tara still. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
zigpal |
2007-06-18 |
id # 5698 |
great update. Hey look Faith was the good slayer there for a second, but I really want to know what Buffy does about the kiss now that she is clear of the badness. |
Ahn |
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2007-06-25 |
id # 5739 |
Wow. what's going on with Buffy's dreams? It looks like Buffy is going to help Will. Maybe they'll talk about the kiss. Update soon please! |
Whedonist |
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2007-06-25 |
id # 5742 |
Updates rock, updates rock, updates rock my socks... |
zigpal |
2007-06-25 |
id # 5743 |
great update. If Buffy is the girl in the corner, her little hypnotic trip is going open everyone's eyes to what has developed between her and Willow, and let's hope it works because things are looking a little grim for the good guys. |
zigpal |
2007-07-02 |
id # 5802 |
great update. Let's hope Giles or Joyce find Buffy or otherwise it might get ugly. And let's hope this beer isn't cursed. |
Ahn |
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2007-07-02 |
id # 5803 |
I don't think things are going to go smoothly when Buffy's found! I wounder who's going to find her? Update soon. |
Cuprit |
2007-07-09 |
id # 5887 |
Things seem to be getting grim. I hope Faith and Willow make it there in time. |
zigpal |
2007-07-09 |
id # 5889 |
great update. As Angelus once said: 'Things don't look good for our heroine.' Let's hope Buffy's friends save her this time too. |
Ahn |
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2007-07-09 |
id # 5891 |
I hope Faith and Willow get to Buffy before Spike leaves with her. It might do Faith some good to be the hero to Buffy. I can't wait for the next update. |
Ahn |
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2007-07-16 |
id # 5935 |
What's going on with Buffy? Is it magic or what? Is she going to hurt Willow or is seeing Willow bring her back? Can't wait for the next update! |
zigpal |
2007-07-16 |
id # 5937 |
great update. Faith sitting and watching reminds me of Anya eating popcorn in 'Hush', but Willow had to go and screw that up. |
Jordan |
blindside88_77@hotmail.com |
2007-07-17 |
id # 5955 |
Another great chapter, can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work |
Ahn |
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2007-07-30 |
id # 6027 |
Great update! Really can't wait for more! |
Whedonist |
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2007-07-30 |
id # 6028 |
Who loves updates? I do...yep that's right. There's definite intrigue. Am eagerly awaiting more. Good work. Thanks! |
Skye |
skyemid@yahoo.com |
2007-07-30 |
id # 6029 |
This story is gettin better with each chapter, mate! |
zigpal |
2007-07-31 |
id # 6033 |
great update. Well, the good news they got turned into bad news. I can't wait for the next one to see what the drug does to Slayers. |
bslayed |
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2007-08-03 |
id # 6058 |
So does that mean Buffy's being druged, Right? If she is has Faith been also? Are Buffy and Willow going to have another special moment soon? I can't wait to see these answers and more! |
Cuprit |
2007-08-13 |
id # 6135 |
Sweet. |
Ahn |
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2007-08-13 |
id # 6136 |
That was a great and intense update. I think I'm going to be dying for more. So please updat soon! |
zigpal |
2007-08-13 |
id # 6140 |
great update. WooHoo, we have the Wiffy back. Now, they just have to end Adam, so they can spend the rest of their days together. |
Anon |
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2007-08-13 |
id # 6144 |
Glad to see things start to come together for those two. I wounder what is going to happen after they both get a good nights sleep and wake up energized. Update soon! |
Rin |
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2007-08-27 |
id # 6224 |
Bom chicka bom bom... |
Ahn |
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2007-08-27 |
id # 6225 |
So is Buffy going to be able to stay in the moment after they make love or is she going to run for cover? I can't wait to see what happens next. |
zigpal |
2007-08-27 |
id # 6226 |
great update. Wiffy strippings, now that is a way to wake up, and a little Wiffy lovins is even better way to start the day. |
bhv |
virgotex@gmail.com |
2007-08-29 |
id # 6232 |
I've really gotten caught up in this story, especially the last several chapters. I hope you've got a lot more in store for us- you r style is is so fluid. I love the pacing of the emotional narrative |
Ahn |
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2007-09-24 |
id # 6468 |
Glad to see an update. I hope those walls are sound prof or all the scoobies are going to know what Buffy and Willow are doing! Can't wait to find out what the plan is to get Adam. Update soon! |
zigpal |
2007-09-25 |
id # 6480 |
great update. Hip hip hoorah, the other Slayer and the Zeppo finally come into their own. Kudos for making them the heroes for the moment, and their kids would be sassy and cute *winks* |
Ahn |
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2007-10-09 |
id # 6601 |
Great update! I'll be interested to see what Graham has to say. Update soon. |
zigpal |
2007-10-10 |
id # 6611 |
great update. Hmm, Graham wants a meeting. Could be a trap, but it could also be a straight up meeting with some positive outcome. I can't wait to find out which. |
Whedonist |
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2007-10-11 |
id # 6613 |
I've been playing catchup on all the stories and realized that I haven't said anything...I suck I'm sorry. So this is me offering apologies and saying rockin' job, you will be updating again when? =0D |
Ahn |
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2007-10-23 |
id # 6697 |
Can't wait to see how Buffy respondes to that. Also what's going on with Graham, Faith, and Xander. Update soon! |
zigpal |
2007-10-24 |
id # 6704 |
great update. Damn, Willow better have a tight rein on Buffy's leash after hearing that considering what happened with Spike when the Slayer took over. |
zigpal |
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2007-11-07 |
id # 6770 |
great update. Very good question. Lets see who have as contestants, Joyce, Giles, Tara, or Graham. Maybe they should make a game wheel. |
Ahn |
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2007-11-07 |
id # 6772 |
Great update! I can't wait to see who you have control Faith's slayer. Tara may have her hands full with that one. Also what everybody else has to say about Buffy and Willow. Can't wait for more, update soon! |
Ahn |
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2007-11-19 |
id # 6851 |
Good update, Keep it coming. |
Shadowcub |
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2007-11-19 |
id # 6855 |
I just figured out what bothered me about this fic Faith getting any power at all.
After all of the stuff (torture) she did, I can't warm up to her character. |
zigpal |
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2007-11-19 |
id # 6856 |
great update. Well, we have a plan in place, but if Faith comes back in pieces, the plan won't work as well. Lets hope Faith can outsmart the no-necks and gets home to 'her' witch. |
rebelrsr |
2007-11-20 |
id # 6858 |
Thanks to everyone who has reviewed this story. I have to admit - when I started it, I had no plans for a long, complex fic. (lol) Now I'm outlining Chapter 27. There have been a few of you with questions or concerns about the characters and how I've set things up. All I can say is...I was always bothered by Joss' attitude toward Faith. The Scoobies were very much a forgive and forget group. Angel/Angelus and the death of Jenny and his other victims in S2; Willow and the death of Warren and her attempt to end the world. I wanted to know: why not Faith? It was clear in S7 (really even in 'Sanctuary') that Faith felt remorse, was willing to accept responsibility. This fic is my attempt to show how things might have been different; although, it isn't the primary focus of the story - that's Buffy and her inability to embrace her Slayer and the more Primal side of her Calling.
I welcome any comments or questions. Please feel free to email me off-site as well. Cheers! |
Ahn |
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2007-12-04 |
id # 6922 |
Faith hopefully will make it back to the safe house soon. I can't wait to see the witches get friendly with the slayers. Great update. Can't wait for more! |
zigpal |
2007-12-11 |
id # 6956 |
great update. Woo Hoo, Adam has a possible brother, and Faith may or may not make it back, but at least they know how to stop Adam. |
beau |
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2008-01-01 |
id # 7040 |
Damn, Buffy can't even get away from Mom lectures with slaying now either, but at least Faith will have the answer the Scoobies need. Plus, Tara could play a little doctor with 'her' Slayer, not to mention her HHs from the Riley fight. |
Ahn |
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2008-01-01 |
id # 7041 |
Great update. Can't wait for more. |
Rin |
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2008-01-14 |
id # 7091 |
Fun...Riley as a demon. |
Ahn |
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2008-01-15 |
id # 7102 |
Can't wait to see Faith's full reation to the plan. |
SHELLEY |
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2008-01-18 |
id # 7120 |
LOVIN THIS ONE. HOPE THERES AN UPDATE SOON. I GET BORED AT WORK! LOL. |
Ahn |
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2008-01-29 |
id # 7163 |
Great update! I sure hope Willow finds the way through prof. Walsh's office. Update soon. |
Ahn |
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2008-02-11 |
id # 7210 |
Great update. I'll be waiting for the for the next one. |
Ahn |
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2008-03-12 |
id # 7303 |
Good side of Faith to see. It'll be interesting to see how things work out. |
Rin |
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2008-04-20 |
id # 7501 |
Oh....action jackson....yay! |
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