Reviews for Simple Choices
zenithar 2007-03-19 id # 5177
Gah!! You're starting another one!? It's start looks awesome, can't wait to see what direction you take with it.
Nice job with portraying the bubbly Buffy and as usuall update!


Ahn 2007-03-19 id # 5179
Nice start. Can't wait to see how you bring B/W together and everything else you do with this story!


zigpal 2007-03-19 id # 5181
great start. I can't wait to see what the dumbass Marine does to piss Buffy off to send where we all know she belongs.


zigpal 2007-03-25 id # 5220
great update. Maybe the Initiative isn't just studying demons, and boy, Willow has it bad for Buffy.


Ahn 2007-03-25 id # 5222
The story is still looking good. I can't wait to see what you do with it. Looks like Riley might be in on the bad with Walsh. Update soon!


zenithar 2007-03-26 id # 5224
Really awsome job with this chapter. Its making me think all sorts of things on why the marines just stood there.
Also really liking how you're splitting from cannon so much and still keeping their story line.


Ahn 2007-04-01 id # 5264
This is getting intersting. Is Willow worried that Tara may find out that she's in love with Buffy if the spell goes wrong? I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy does find out what Willow and Tara are up to. Update soon!


sailor680 2007-04-02 id # 5266
I like how you've structured this, and I'm really curious about what's next.


zigpal 2007-04-02 id # 5268
great update. Hmm, looks like Prof. Walsh isn't the only one that is wondering about all of Buffy's questions. Lets hope the witches don't get caught or the Initiative might get a course in what it is like to get your ass kicked by a slayer.


zigpal 2007-04-08 id # 5293
great update. yeah right, when she gets back. I wonder how Riley will react when he finds out.


Ahn 2007-04-08 id # 5294
That was good. I can't wait to see what Riley's tea finds and if it put Willow and Tara in danger! I can't wait to see how you bring Buffy and Willow together and when! Update soon!


zenithar 2007-04-09 id # 5297
Awesome job with keeping everyone in character so well. Really wonder whats going on in the Initiative right now, so update quickly!!


zigpal 2007-04-16 id # 5338
great update. Boy, I don't want to be Professor Walsh. She had some explaining to before, but after hearing from Willow and Tara, I'm sure she will have to explain more.


Ahn 2007-04-16 id # 5339
I can't wait to see what happens now! Also how's Buff going to make things up to Willow????? Update soon please!


Ahn 2007-04-23 id # 5373
Great update! I like how this story is head and it looks like the Wiffy love is starting! Can't wait for the next update!


zigpal 2007-04-23 id # 5375
great update. Hmm, field trip means Buffy and Willow get to play dress up together. That could be fun.


zigpal 2007-04-30 id # 5407
great update. Willow may be paying for that teasing later after they figure out what the hell is going on.


zenithar 2007-04-30 id # 5408
Nice Wiffyness, it was really good. :) Good job with the cliffy too


Ahn 2007-04-30 id # 5409
Great update! I can't wait to see who was there with them. Update soon!


Ahn 2007-05-07 id # 5433
Great update! It looks like Buffy may not like Tara getting to close to her witch! I think Buffy still owes Willow for being right maybe a special slumberparty. Faith's awake I wounder how this will change things?? Update so, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


zigpal 2007-05-07 id # 5434
great update. Now that Willow knows what double H feels like, she can really help Buffy when she comes all riled up. And it looks like Riley who is getting closer with how Buffy took to Willow after Adam attacked her, plus she is a little wary of Tara's feelings for HER Willow.


-acs- see2go4me@yahoo.com 2007-05-08 id # 5435
Nicely done so far. The interaction between Buffy and Willow is cute though I don't think Buffy should feel too smug that Willow is clueless that there are two blondes checking her out... (ie. Buffy and Tara)

Other things:

Kind of wondering what happened between chapters 7 and 8 that we didn't see. At the end of 7 the creature suddenly appears. Right at the beginning of 8, Buffy calls it by name, even though there is not indication in 7 (or anywhere else before that that I can see) that anyone told her it's name.

You're compressing things in Season 4 by throwing Faith into the Adam mess... I'm assuming you are going very AU with her appearance?


kirky 2007-05-14 id # 5468
good update looking forward to the next chapter
update again soon


zigpal 2007-05-14 id # 5472
great update. Poor poor Riley, I feel bad for him. Oh wait, no I don't. Hmm, looks like Wiffy is right around the corner. I can't wait to hear Willow's answer.


Ahn 2007-05-14 id # 5480
I can't wait to see what Willow's answer will be to Buffy! Update soon, Please!


Ahn 2007-05-20 id # 5525
It looks like Buffy and Willow need to talk but I'm guessing that's going to have to wait with Faith there and then being at Giles. I like how you have Buffy being the strong one and acting on her thoughts. Keep it up! I can't wait for more!


zigpal 2007-05-21 id # 5527
great update. Wiffy kissage, nice.And Faith is giving a go for the good guys. Plus, it looks like Graham and the boys might be a little pissed at the government. Fun for everyone.


Howard R 2007-05-21 id # 5530
And Buffy finally makes the simple choice she should have in the tenth grade! Woo hoo!

Willow better stick close to Buffy. If Buffy gets on her own, she's likely to second guess herself over kissing Willow and freak out. It was a little too impulsive for her, I think.


zigpal 2007-05-28 id # 5591
great update. Yikes, Tara might want to watch how much attention she pays to Willow if that gets Buffy's dander up. I can't wait to see if Tara's look into Faith changes the Scoobs outlook on how they see her.


sailor80 2007-05-28 id # 5592
Excellent! Moving fast, lots of conflict, and interesting things to come...soon?


Ahn 2007-05-28 id # 5598
I think Buffy and Willow need to talk before Buffy grinds all her teeth away or kills Tara. What's Tara going to find whn she's looking at Faith? I'm excited to see what you do with this story. Update soon please!!


zigpal 2007-06-04 id # 5621
great update. Whoops, I guess there were feelings on Tara's end. I hope this doesn't throw a wrench into the blossoming friendship between the witches.


Ahn 2007-06-04 id # 5623
Looks like Tara isn't to happy about Buffy and Willow. I wounder how everyone else is going to take it and how long there going to hide it. Update soon please!


Ahn 2007-06-11 id # 5663
So did Buffy get druged like the rest of the initative guys did because she sure is acting like it! She's being down right bitchy. Looks like there's trouble in paradise for the new couple. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!


zigpal 2007-06-11 id # 5664
great update. Well, there is the plan. Now the Scoobs have to come up with a way to destroy Adam, and then Buffy and Willow can tell the fam about their budding relationship.


sailor80 2007-06-18 id # 5690
Sweet! love the angst. I'm thinking Buffy won't get a lot of rest.


Ahn 2007-06-18 id # 5691
That was great! I hope she remembers or is ready to admitt her feelings to Willow or she might just lose her to Tara still. Can't wait to see what happens next!


zigpal 2007-06-18 id # 5698
great update. Hey look Faith was the good slayer there for a second, but I really want to know what Buffy does about the kiss now that she is clear of the badness.


Ahn 2007-06-25 id # 5739
Wow. what's going on with Buffy's dreams? It looks like Buffy is going to help Will. Maybe they'll talk about the kiss. Update soon please!


Whedonist 2007-06-25 id # 5742
Updates rock, updates rock, updates rock my socks...


zigpal 2007-06-25 id # 5743
great update. If Buffy is the girl in the corner, her little hypnotic trip is going open everyone's eyes to what has developed between her and Willow, and let's hope it works because things are looking a little grim for the good guys.


zigpal 2007-07-02 id # 5802
great update. Let's hope Giles or Joyce find Buffy or otherwise it might get ugly. And let's hope this beer isn't cursed.


Ahn 2007-07-02 id # 5803
I don't think things are going to go smoothly when Buffy's found! I wounder who's going to find her? Update soon.


Cuprit 2007-07-09 id # 5887
Things seem to be getting grim. I hope Faith and Willow make it there in time.


zigpal 2007-07-09 id # 5889
great update. As Angelus once said: 'Things don't look good for our heroine.' Let's hope Buffy's friends save her this time too.


Ahn 2007-07-09 id # 5891
I hope Faith and Willow get to Buffy before Spike leaves with her. It might do Faith some good to be the hero to Buffy. I can't wait for the next update.


Ahn 2007-07-16 id # 5935
What's going on with Buffy? Is it magic or what? Is she going to hurt Willow or is seeing Willow bring her back? Can't wait for the next update!


zigpal 2007-07-16 id # 5937
great update. Faith sitting and watching reminds me of Anya eating popcorn in 'Hush', but Willow had to go and screw that up.


Jordan blindside88_77@hotmail.com 2007-07-17 id # 5955
Another great chapter, can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work


Ahn 2007-07-30 id # 6027
Great update! Really can't wait for more!


Whedonist 2007-07-30 id # 6028
Who loves updates? I do...yep that's right. There's definite intrigue. Am eagerly awaiting more. Good work. Thanks!


Skye skyemid@yahoo.com 2007-07-30 id # 6029
This story is gettin better with each chapter, mate!


zigpal 2007-07-31 id # 6033
great update. Well, the good news they got turned into bad news. I can't wait for the next one to see what the drug does to Slayers.


bslayed 2007-08-03 id # 6058
So does that mean Buffy's being druged, Right? If she is has Faith been also? Are Buffy and Willow going to have another special moment soon? I can't wait to see these answers and more!


Cuprit 2007-08-13 id # 6135
Sweet.


Ahn 2007-08-13 id # 6136
That was a great and intense update. I think I'm going to be dying for more. So please updat soon!


zigpal 2007-08-13 id # 6140
great update. WooHoo, we have the Wiffy back. Now, they just have to end Adam, so they can spend the rest of their days together.


Anon 2007-08-13 id # 6144
Glad to see things start to come together for those two. I wounder what is going to happen after they both get a good nights sleep and wake up energized. Update soon!


Rin 2007-08-27 id # 6224
Bom chicka bom bom...


Ahn 2007-08-27 id # 6225
So is Buffy going to be able to stay in the moment after they make love or is she going to run for cover? I can't wait to see what happens next.


zigpal 2007-08-27 id # 6226
great update. Wiffy strippings, now that is a way to wake up, and a little Wiffy lovins is even better way to start the day.


bhv virgotex@gmail.com 2007-08-29 id # 6232
I've really gotten caught up in this story, especially the last several chapters. I hope you've got a lot more in store for us- you r style is is so fluid. I love the pacing of the emotional narrative


Ahn 2007-09-24 id # 6468
Glad to see an update. I hope those walls are sound prof or all the scoobies are going to know what Buffy and Willow are doing! Can't wait to find out what the plan is to get Adam. Update soon!


zigpal 2007-09-25 id # 6480
great update. Hip hip hoorah, the other Slayer and the Zeppo finally come into their own. Kudos for making them the heroes for the moment, and their kids would be sassy and cute *winks*


Ahn 2007-10-09 id # 6601
Great update! I'll be interested to see what Graham has to say. Update soon.


zigpal 2007-10-10 id # 6611
great update. Hmm, Graham wants a meeting. Could be a trap, but it could also be a straight up meeting with some positive outcome. I can't wait to find out which.


Whedonist 2007-10-11 id # 6613
I've been playing catchup on all the stories and realized that I haven't said anything...I suck I'm sorry. So this is me offering apologies and saying rockin' job, you will be updating again when? =0D


Ahn 2007-10-23 id # 6697
Can't wait to see how Buffy respondes to that. Also what's going on with Graham, Faith, and Xander. Update soon!


zigpal 2007-10-24 id # 6704
great update. Damn, Willow better have a tight rein on Buffy's leash after hearing that considering what happened with Spike when the Slayer took over.


zigpal 2007-11-07 id # 6770
great update. Very good question. Lets see who have as contestants, Joyce, Giles, Tara, or Graham. Maybe they should make a game wheel.


Ahn 2007-11-07 id # 6772
Great update! I can't wait to see who you have control Faith's slayer. Tara may have her hands full with that one. Also what everybody else has to say about Buffy and Willow. Can't wait for more, update soon!


Ahn 2007-11-19 id # 6851
Good update, Keep it coming.


Shadowcub 2007-11-19 id # 6855
I just figured out what bothered me about this fic Faith getting any power at all.
After all of the stuff (torture) she did, I can't warm up to her character.


zigpal 2007-11-19 id # 6856
great update. Well, we have a plan in place, but if Faith comes back in pieces, the plan won't work as well. Lets hope Faith can outsmart the no-necks and gets home to 'her' witch.


rebelrsr 2007-11-20 id # 6858
Thanks to everyone who has reviewed this story. I have to admit - when I started it, I had no plans for a long, complex fic. (lol) Now I'm outlining Chapter 27. There have been a few of you with questions or concerns about the characters and how I've set things up. All I can say is...I was always bothered by Joss' attitude toward Faith. The Scoobies were very much a forgive and forget group. Angel/Angelus and the death of Jenny and his other victims in S2; Willow and the death of Warren and her attempt to end the world. I wanted to know: why not Faith? It was clear in S7 (really even in 'Sanctuary') that Faith felt remorse, was willing to accept responsibility. This fic is my attempt to show how things might have been different; although, it isn't the primary focus of the story - that's Buffy and her inability to embrace her Slayer and the more Primal side of her Calling.

I welcome any comments or questions. Please feel free to email me off-site as well. Cheers!


Ahn 2007-12-04 id # 6922
Faith hopefully will make it back to the safe house soon. I can't wait to see the witches get friendly with the slayers. Great update. Can't wait for more!


zigpal 2007-12-11 id # 6956
great update. Woo Hoo, Adam has a possible brother, and Faith may or may not make it back, but at least they know how to stop Adam.


beau 2008-01-01 id # 7040
Damn, Buffy can't even get away from Mom lectures with slaying now either, but at least Faith will have the answer the Scoobies need. Plus, Tara could play a little doctor with 'her' Slayer, not to mention her HHs from the Riley fight.


Ahn 2008-01-01 id # 7041
Great update. Can't wait for more.


Rin 2008-01-14 id # 7091
Fun...Riley as a demon.


Ahn 2008-01-15 id # 7102
Can't wait to see Faith's full reation to the plan.


SHELLEY 2008-01-18 id # 7120
LOVIN THIS ONE. HOPE THERES AN UPDATE SOON. I GET BORED AT WORK! LOL.


Ahn 2008-01-29 id # 7163
Great update! I sure hope Willow finds the way through prof. Walsh's office. Update soon.


Ahn 2008-02-11 id # 7210
Great update. I'll be waiting for the for the next one.


Ahn 2008-03-12 id # 7303
Good side of Faith to see. It'll be interesting to see how things work out.


Rin 2008-04-20 id # 7501
Oh....action jackson....yay!