Reviews for One Last Shot
| gnome |
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2007-04-14 |
id # 5325 |
| Hey, this is really good. Like the idea a lot. Good luck and can't wait to see how it goes. |
| fantagismo |
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2007-04-14 |
id # 5326 |
| hey, this is good! You could perhaps have them sorting out a new york city life for a while, and then maybe a reunion with the rest of the scoobies? But yeah, this is very readable... |
| Ahn |
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2007-04-14 |
id # 5327 |
| I love post stories! This one was great! You could go either way with this. I hope you keep writing more one it though. There going to have to adjust to being together and if Willow's moving there? Also Willow is travel girl how's that going to effect things? I'm sure you will think of something if you want to keep writing on this or you'll think of another great story. Whatever you choose keep writing I love your stories! |
| Lost |
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2007-04-14 |
id # 5328 |
| Ack, what the hell are you talkin' about "stop here" ???? This is just where it gets to the juicy stuff!! |
| Alex |
2007-04-14 |
id # 5330 |
| I think you should definitly keep going, this is great, explore their new relationship more. |
| Howard R |
2007-04-15 |
id # 5331 |
It depends on if you have more story to tell. As it stands, it's a good ending.
However, if you wanted to explore them starting a real relationship, that would be great too.
How will Buffy handle having a girlfriend? Will she tell her coworkers? Her partner? Or will she scream it from the rooftops!
Sunnydale was deliberately written without any predjudice against gays, but the rest of the planet has some. (I assume since Willow was worried about how her friends would react, despite there never being any problem with gays on the show before. So I figure she'd seen predjudice shown elsewhere on TV.) How will our girls handle that?
There could be more story, but that's up to you. It stands well, as it is. |
| zigpal |
2007-04-15 |
id # 5335 |
| great start and as for sugesstions, Buffy is on vacation. They can spend the time reconnceting, dating, making out, showing Willow what double H is all about. If this story turns as well as your last one did, it will be great. |
| IceColdFire |
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2007-04-15 |
id # 5337 |
| Keep going! I love it. I want to see their relationship together :( |
| zigpal |
2007-04-18 |
id # 5351 |
great update. I hope Buffy is joking about the world ending, but hey at least she will be with Willow.
Don't worry about when you update. Wiffy gets eaten when it gets updated, so take your time. |
| Ahn |
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2007-04-18 |
id # 5353 |
| I liked it! Keep it coming! Update soon. |
| Howard R |
2007-04-19 |
id # 5356 |
| Yay! Faith and Xander are a good pairing. Now you just need to pair Giles up with some newbie slayer with a daddy fetish and you'll have a complete set of Scooby/slayer matchups. lol |
| Rin |
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2007-04-19 |
id # 5358 |
| What do I think of this story? Hmm... In my honest opinion, I think you had a great story starting to build, and you threw them together WAY too fast. You had the potential of this great, epic story on how they eventually wound up together, and you threw them together in the third chapter. I get the impatient. That's what makes a good story: if people want to see them together, and the tension between the two works well enough to showcase that point. Your buildup in the first two chapters had exactly that! I'll still read it obviously but you had the potential of having one kickass story!! |
| Kirky |
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2007-04-20 |
id # 5359 |
| Good story looking forward to reading more |
| rebelrsr |
2007-04-22 |
id # 5370 |
| Ok. I so wasn't expecting Xander to the be father (lol) Great story. I like how Willow's the calm and collected on these days. Can't wait to see how the girls move their relationship forward. |
| Ahn |
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2007-04-23 |
id # 5374 |
| That was great and really showed the buffy/Willow we all know. Update soon, Please!!! I can't wait for more! |
| zigpal |
2007-04-23 |
id # 5376 |
| great update. Well, at least Willow knows that Buffy was being taken care of while she was gone, and I can't wait to see if Jimmy asks Willow for some stories he can hold over Buffy. keep up the great work |
| zigpal |
2007-04-27 |
id # 5397 |
| great updates. Boy, you weren't kidding about the angst. I just hope Willow is prepared for what Buffy is about to say to her and hopefully get through all her crap. continue soon, I want to see how it goes. |
| Ahn |
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2007-04-27 |
id # 5399 |
| I hope Willow can stop Buffy from shutting down and running again! Looks like there going to be in an emotional roller coaster for awhile. Can't wait for the next update! |
| Howard R |
2007-04-27 |
id # 5400 |
| Wow, you've got the angst covered, don't you! Yikes! Looks like Willow will have her hands full just reconnecting with Buffy again. |
| ema |
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2007-04-27 |
id # 5402 |
| it's good so far liked what you have writen hope to read more soon |
| Rin |
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2007-04-28 |
id # 5404 |
| See?? I told you...you threw them together too fast. LOL. Even you think so...lol. |
| Rin |
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2007-04-28 |
id # 5405 |
| See?? I told you...you threw them together too fast. LOL. Even you think so...lol. |
| zigpal |
2007-05-01 |
id # 5410 |
| great update. Damn, I guess Willow is not to be messed with. I hope a good night's sleep helps Buffy realize that Willow loves and is willing to put up with all her slayer crap. |
| Howard R |
2007-05-01 |
id # 5411 |
| Excellent! Way to go, Willow! Buffy *so* needed that. Good job. |
| Ahn |
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2007-05-05 |
id # 5426 |
| That was one heck of a lesson that Willow taught Buffy! I can't wait to see the next lesson. I wounder what makes Buffy think that Willow is going to leave???? Willow might need to give Buffy a lesson about that! I can't wait for the next update! So Please soon. |
| zigpal |
2007-05-05 |
id # 5427 |
| great update. Good to see that when the girls woke up, Buffy was fine with her and Willow. So much so, she invited her to stay with her. |
| zigpal |
2007-05-14 |
id # 5473 |
| great update. Now that everything seems settled, maybe our favorite duo can figure out what they are doing. |
| Ahn |
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2007-05-14 |
id # 5481 |
| I wounder who the dead girl was??? Also how Willow's and Buffy's last night before Buffy goes back to work is?? Update soon! |
| zigpal |
2007-05-20 |
id # 5521 |
| 2 great updates. Hmm, if I was Kennedy, I wouldn't be making any trips to NYC real soon, or she might get a big sister/slayer ass kicking. Love that the duo is getting comfortable with each other. |
| Ahn |
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2007-05-20 |
id # 5523 |
| This was a great update and 2 chapters. I wounder how things will go with Buffy's friend? Did Buffy's partner find anything on the girl from Sunnydale? Maybe Willow knows her. Can't wait for more! |
| Howard R |
2007-05-21 |
id # 5528 |
| Very appropriate reactions with both Buffy's nervousness and her co-workers' acceptance. Fits both the Jossverse canon and the real New York. Cops have seen too much to get bent out of shape over a woman with a girlfriend. |
| zigpal |
2007-05-28 |
id # 5584 |
| great update. I'm thinking Willow isn't going to be real happy after hearing what happened to her girlfriend on the job. And an interesting case with the Sunnydale girls. I can't wait to see how it develops. |
| Howard R |
2007-05-28 |
id # 5588 |
| That was unexpected. Poor Buffy, having to hear crap like that. Don't worry, Willow will make it all better. |
| Ahn |
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2007-05-28 |
id # 5595 |
| That was well deserved! I hope that guy learned his lesson. I wounder if it's all going to blow over in 3 days or not. Or if this is going to be used to get Buffy thrown off the force. Can't wait for more! |
| Ahn |
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2007-06-02 |
id # 5611 |
| Buffy's partner took all that pretty good. So they have like five more people staying there. Buffy and Wills finally going to share a room? Is it going to cause them problems? Can't wait to find out! Update soon, Please! |
| Anon |
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2007-06-02 |
id # 5613 |
| Wow the whole gang together again. With all of Buffy's guilt over her family and friends is it time for lesson 2 from Willow?????? Update soon! |
| Howard R |
2007-06-03 |
id # 5615 |
At least someone thought it was too coincidental.
A great story. I really love it. |
| zigpal |
2007-06-03 |
id # 5620 |
| great update. There is nothing that naked sleeping can't cure until the next morning. Heres hoping when the Avengers assemble, they can figure out what is going on. |
| Ahn |
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2007-06-05 |
id # 5638 |
| Those chapters were intense! It looks like the scooby gang is in for a tuff ride. I can't beleive Xander would be such an ass! Hopfully some time will make them all see how wrong they've been about Buffy and what they think of Willow! I'll try and wait patiently for the next update! Thanks for the great writing! |
| zigpal |
2007-06-05 |
id # 5639 |
| 3 great updates leading to a nice Scooby explosion. Maybe by the time you update the shock of it all will have warn off. |
| Howard R |
2007-06-07 |
id # 5646 |
| Ooh, someone is cruising for a beat-down. Sad that Xander's will be so well deserved. He should know better. |
| zigpal |
2007-06-14 |
id # 5671 |
| great update. Well, that is one down, and maybe after Faith and X talk things can start to get worked out. |
| Ahn |
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2007-06-14 |
id # 5673 |
| Faith seems to have really grown up. At least it sounds like Faith, Buffy, and Willow got all there sorries said. I wounder how Faith and Xanders talk will go? Where did everybody go? Update soon, Please!!!! |
| Howard R |
2007-06-15 |
id # 5675 |
| Kudos for Faith! Very cool. |
| Howard R |
2007-06-19 |
id # 5703 |
| Great chapter! Loved Jimmy's backstory. |
| zigpal |
2007-06-19 |
id # 5706 |
| great update. Buffy might want to be careful what she asks for. |
| Ahn |
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2007-06-19 |
id # 5707 |
| I can't wait to see how that talk goes. Everybody is thinking about how everything that happened to Buffy is about them and that it effected her more then them. Buffy also needs to realise that everything that happened to her effected her friends and family also. Please update soon. I hope everbody opens there eyes and listens to each other. |
| Rin |
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2007-06-24 |
id # 5733 |
I love updates. I love updates. I love updates. Hey hey hey hey...
That was my song for you. LOL. |
| zigpal |
2007-06-24 |
id # 5734 |
| great update. Nice gut wrenching emotional talking looks like it did some good, and I'm surprised that Xander didn't offer to become puffy Xander and let Buffy pummel the crap out of him. I can't wait to see how the 'family' dinner goes with the three extra people, it should be fun. |
| Howard R |
2007-06-24 |
id # 5735 |
| Glad they made up. They needed that. |
| Ahn |
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2007-06-24 |
id # 5736 |
| Hopefully Buffy and Willow can help Jimmy out with his kids. Looks like things went good with Buffy's talk with Xander and Giles. How'd it go with Dawn though? Can't wait for your next update! |
| zigpal |
2007-06-28 |
id # 5762 |
| great update. Nothing says complete day like family reunions and sex, nice job. |
| Howard R |
2007-06-28 |
id # 5763 |
| Well, after everything gets settled comes the make up sex. Okay, so it wasn't Buffy and Willow making up, but any excuse for Wiffy sex is a *fantastic* excuse for Wiffy sex! |
| Ahn |
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2007-06-28 |
id # 5768 |
| Looks like Buffy and Willow did a good thing for her partner. I wounder if everybody else is the house is going to figure out what Faith ansd X did?? Update soon! |
| Howard R |
2007-07-02 |
id # 5797 |
Getting very interesting. Love the character interactions.
Tech note: severe lack of commas. |
| zigpal |
2007-07-02 |
id # 5799 |
| great update. Well the good news is, they know where the bad guy is. The bad news being knowing how to stop him. Plus, they have to save Jimmy from dying. |
| sailor80 |
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2007-07-02 |
id # 5800 |
"Jesus Christ All Mighty in a little red nightie." My new favorite swear words.
Good job with the action. What's next? |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-02 |
id # 5807 |
| Please don't let anything to bad happen to Jimmy! I like him and he just worked things out with his kids. I do hope we see more of them. I wish I new who the evil dude was. Update soon please! |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-06 |
id # 5845 |
| So glad Jimmy ia alright! I was worried. I can't believe his daught. I can't wait for the next update. Make soon please! |
| zigpal |
2007-07-06 |
id # 5847 |
| great update. Well, so much for the big happy family since Susie thinks her Dad is sleeping with lesbians, but intersting twist on the reversing a slayer. can't wait to see how it turns out. |
| Howard R |
2007-07-06 |
id # 5849 |
| Susan's a trip! I can maybe see where she's coming from, but eew! And ick! Can't forget the ick. |
| sailor80 |
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2007-07-06 |
id # 5852 |
| Whoa! Whoa! and Whoa! again. My brain is reeling at the very thought of unmaking a slayer. |
| zigpal |
2007-07-10 |
id # 5896 |
| great update. Uh-oh, let's hope cooler heads prevail, or there might be an ass beating coming down. |
| Rin |
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2007-07-10 |
id # 5898 |
| Updates...yeah, yeah, yeah. Updates....yeah, yeah, yeah. I love it when you update. |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-10 |
id # 5902 |
| So how are they going to stop the reversel? I hope this coven girl didn't just make problems between Buffy and Willow! I'm thinking if Buffy over heard any of that or saw the kiss the shit is going to hit the fan! Can't wait for the next update! |
| Howard R |
2007-07-11 |
id # 5907 |
| Enter new character; exit new character into horrible, gruesome death. First rule is: don't kiss the slayer's soulmate. Second rule is: *don't* kiss the slayer's soulmate! |
| gnome |
2007-07-12 |
id # 5909 |
| Wow, can you say "STUPID" I mean you know what a slayer is and how protective they can be and you go around kissing their mates? Wow, don't know what else to say except Jimmy might be getting some company! |
| zigpal |
2007-07-15 |
id # 5924 |
| great update. Damn, Aradia is just asking for a Buffy beatdown. If it were me, I just shut my mouth and look for the guy in question. |
| Anon |
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2007-07-15 |
id # 5925 |
| I hope the Aradia girl stays out of Willow and Buffy's relationship. Of course if Willow can't shake off that kiss she had with Aradia even after her lovins with Buffy that kinda says something not so good. Also I hope Willow doesn't let any thoughts out through her connection with Buffy. I can't believe Willow's a cheater. That was mind blowing. Can't wait for the next update! |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-15 |
id # 5926 |
| Aradia sure isn't going to make friends with Buffy if she keeps all this up. Why can't Willow shake off that kiss? Looks like there might be more trouble coming for the love birds and Willow hasn't given Buffy any lessons for awhile. Hope you update soon! |
| Howard R |
2007-07-16 |
id # 5927 |
| Well ... I guess Darth Willow is a good companion in a demon bar. But she better go away before she sees Buffy again. |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-19 |
id # 5967 |
| That was a great story! I like how you did the ending. I hope your going to start another story soon! Thanks for the read! |
| Rin |
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2007-07-19 |
id # 5971 |
| YAY!!! Good times!!!! |
| zigpal |
2007-07-19 |
id # 5973 |
| Great ending. It was an interesting twist to end all anti-climatic without a lot of action. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
| Howard R |
2007-07-20 |
id # 5978 |
| Kinda makes you want to slap Giles and ask why they didn't have guns all along. And by a cop, no less! Damn Sunnydale PD! They could've helped! |
| Valyssia |
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2007-11-10 |
id # 6784 |
| Nicely done. Enjoyed it much. - Val |
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