Reviews for First Respnse
| Howard R |
2007-07-17 |
id # 5949 |
| A cute AU. I wonder if the twins planned more than just their own companionship.... |
| Sousa |
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2007-07-17 |
id # 5951 |
| Is this yet another excellent AU fic from Cathy?I sure hope so,please update soon. |
| zigpal |
2007-07-17 |
id # 5952 |
| Nice start, I can't wait to see how you develop Buffy and Willow's relationship. |
| Rin |
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2007-07-17 |
id # 5954 |
| Cute! Another story from you...I was beginning to worry... |
| gnome |
2007-07-17 |
id # 5956 |
| Lol, awesome so far. Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for this one! |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-17 |
id # 5959 |
| Looks like a great begining. Can't wait to see where this story goes! Update soon! |
| Anon |
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2007-07-18 |
id # 5961 |
This is an awesome start! I'm excited!
Although...First Respnse? |
| shadowcub |
lesiaf@bellsoouth.net |
2007-07-19 |
id # 5963 |
| They should have left the car, nice chapter~! |
| jerry |
not@chance.com |
2007-07-19 |
id # 5966 |
| I love it :) keep it up. |
| zigpal |
2007-07-20 |
id # 5974 |
| great update. I guess that Buffy and Willow are having a second date even though they 'aren't' dating yet. |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-20 |
id # 5975 |
| If the story is anywhere near as good as the first 2 chapters I'll be captivated for the whole thing! I can't wait to see how thing progress! Is Buffy the slayer? Is Xander and Giles in this story. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 |
| cathy |
knouckout |
2007-07-20 |
id # 5976 |
| No guys in my story. Sorry. Girls falling in love with each other so totally that ............like I did. |
| Howard R |
2007-07-20 |
id # 5979 |
Slayer or not? Very intriguing.
Love this. It's fun!
One note: it's spelled Response. Your title is missing an 'o'. |
| cathy |
cnorth1975@yahoo.com |
2007-07-21 |
id # 5980 |
| Oh my, I didn't notice that typo. Plus my last name is missing the 'H' but I did see that. Also my e-mail address is wrong. Is there no end to the mistakes? |
| shadowcub |
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2007-07-22 |
id # 5981 |
| Hoping for a horror movie. |
| Mags |
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2007-07-22 |
id # 5982 |
| This story is going great. These twins really aren't the best. But hey can't really be too mad at them since the are the reason Willow and Buffy met and are slowly getting to know each other. This story is really great. Wonder how it all turns out. |
| zigpal |
2007-07-23 |
id # 5987 |
| great update. Well, this should be a fun story since neither Buffy or Willow watched the movie. I hope Willow doesn't let the new info scare her from Buffy. |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-23 |
id # 5989 |
| The almost kiss. Looks like there starting to come together. Willow knows how she feels but what's Buffy thinking? Can't wait for your next update! |
| Sousa |
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2007-07-24 |
id # 5997 |
| Oh!It's an alternate beginning thing eh?Very interesting,starting the realtionship spark early in the game. |
| Howard R |
2007-07-24 |
id # 6000 |
| I think a patrol is in order. By morning, Willow will be questioning Buffy's sanity. Buffy begging Willow to let her show her some proof could be a cute scene. |
| zigpal |
2007-07-28 |
id # 6017 |
| great update. Yikes, let's hope one of them steps up before things fester way too long. |
| Ahn |
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2007-07-28 |
id # 6020 |
| So are the girls going to get to talk? I wounder if they'll go to the movies with the twins again. I can't wait for the next update so please, please make it soon! |
| Shadowcub |
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2007-07-28 |
id # 6025 |
| Man that week sounds brutal. |
| IceColdFire |
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2007-08-01 |
id # 6046 |
Aw, that's sad :(
I'm loving it! Can't wait for more :D |
| Howard R |
2007-08-02 |
id # 6050 |
So exciting! Wait till she gets a look at Buffy! I fully expect her to dress to knock Willow's socks off (or other articles of clothing.)
I'm surprised you had Willow so satisfied with her body. While she is undeniably gorgeous, she always seemed to have a poor body-image. And her clothes seemed less Willowy than the series showed. There should have been something about her choosing not to wear the tights she normally wore under short skirts. The shirt should have been a new purchase too, since I doubt her mom picked anything like that out.
You still need to fix the title. Response has an O in it. |
| Sousa |
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2007-08-02 |
id # 6051 |
| Oh,I can't wait to see what happens!Very good update,need more! |
| Unknown |
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2007-08-02 |
id # 6052 |
Hey Howard..lighten up bud this is her story and she already knows the problem w/ the title.AND it's called creative license,she can write what ever she wants,and what I see is Buffy goodness :)
Keep going! |
| Ahn |
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2007-08-02 |
id # 6053 |
| I can't wait to see how the movies go tonight with willow and Buffy! What's Buffy going to do when Willow hits on her or is she going to beat Willow to the punch? Can't wait to find out! |
| zigpal |
2007-08-02 |
id # 6054 |
| great update. Damn, dressed to the nines. I hope Buffy gets the message that Willow is interested. |
| Rin |
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2007-08-03 |
id # 6056 |
| Ohhh....so short...want more...must have more.... |
| Howard R |
2007-08-04 |
id # 6059 |
YAY! Take-charge Buffy to the rescue! I'm glad Willow didn't panic herself out of talking to Buffy. They need each other.
How's school going to be? The terror of going public or the agony of hiding? Can't wait! |
| Howard R |
2007-08-04 |
id # 6060 |
Hi Cathy!
Sorry. I didn't mean to harp on the title but I didn't read your previous reply. But, if you're aware of the title typo, why don't you fix it? It's really easy. Go to the User Panel > Edit Story > Edit Details. Simple.
Unfortunately, it's not that easy to fix your name or your email address. As far as I can tell, that part of the User Panel is broken. And there seems to be no webmaster to tell that to.
Still love the story,
Howard |
| Ahn |
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2007-08-04 |
id # 6061 |
| Gotta say I love those fast updates! I hope the twins don't catch the two kissing. That might ruin the mood or make things hard on them again. I really can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Anon |
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2007-08-04 |
id # 6062 |
SQUEEEEEEEEEEE! *happiness*
But much, much too short. =( |
| Sousa |
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2007-08-04 |
id # 6063 |
| Woot!Got that all cleared up,hope things work out.Much too short :(,update soon! |
| zigpal |
2007-08-04 |
id # 6064 |
| great update. Let's hope the girls get the gist of the movie before they start making out, or their weekly date might hit a bump, and what are the Chandler girls doing? |
| Cuprit |
2007-08-08 |
id # 6093 |
| I thought u did a great detailing the make out session. Good Job. |
| Sousa |
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2007-08-08 |
id # 6094 |
| Lol,true dat,got steamy there.Great update |
| Ahn |
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2007-08-08 |
id # 6097 |
| You did great on this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. Are the girls ever going to get together without the twins there? Update soon please! |
| zigpal |
2007-08-08 |
id # 6098 |
| great update. Exactly, were they glad they were interupted, or were they upset? Maybe a little of both. Nicely written and i can't wait to see what are pair do next. |
| Sousa |
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2007-08-12 |
id # 6125 |
| Aww,it's a sweet high school romance,and the slayerdom is tied in but not overbearing.Great work :) |
| Ahn |
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2007-08-12 |
id # 6127 |
| Wow they really moved ahead with this relationship. Is all they did was talk Saturday night at the sleep over? I can't wait to see how there date goes. Update soon! |
| zigpal |
2007-08-13 |
id # 6130 |
| great update. Aww, they are in the goofy stage of dating. They are so cute together. I can't wait to see what Buffy plans for her and Willow's date. |
| Howard R |
2007-08-13 |
id # 6134 |
| Sweet! Glad things are working out so spectacularly for them. |
| Sousa |
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2007-08-14 |
id # 6150 |
| Hmm..that was very short ~.~ almost felt rushed but oh well I liked it ^.^ |
| cathy |
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2007-08-14 |
id # 6151 |
| You are right on Sousa. I did push it out too quickly because..........of outside circumstances. I knew I did and I hoped no one would notice. Now I feel bad. (not cause you pointed it out). I should have let it lay for a month or so. I wanted it to go further and deeper. I guess I goofed. |
| Ahn |
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2007-08-14 |
id # 6152 |
| Great ending! I hope you plan on writing another story! I really enjoy your work. |
| Howard R |
2007-08-15 |
id # 6155 |
Wonderfully touching and sweet.
I would have liked more about Willow dealing with Buffy being the slayer. |
| zigpal |
2007-08-15 |
id # 6158 |
| Excellent ending. Now, that would be some fun practicing, and they could practice in different places. Nice work C. |
| Shadowcub |
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2007-08-23 |
id # 6211 |
| sEQUEL?? |
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