Reviews for Thirteen Steps -6- Pet Ahn 2007-09-08 id # 6323 Also another good one. Why does that guy think the slayers are all bad because they want to kill all the demons? Valyssia 2007-09-09 id # 6325 The end of this story hooks back up with the comic. The part you are tripping over is pure Joss, I was quoting. Not much has been made plain about twilight in the comics so far, the role of the organization is still pretty much a mystery. An overview might be something like this, the government of the United States perceives the rise of so many slayers as a terrorist threat. It's like Buffy's raising her own army from their POV. You can do a ton of reading between the lines from the things the Voll characters says. Frankly, my question has nothing to do with Buffy and her "army" killing demons... What I wanna know is how Voll knew that the power of the slayer line is based on demonic essence. That's not something the Watchers ever splash painted on any billboards. In fact, it's one of the most closely guarded secrets of the slayer. The remainder of the questions...well...I think I ask them in the next piece. Val bhv virgotex@gmail.com 2007-09-12 id # 6342 I am loving this wonderful LOOONNGG fic. Thyank you!!!!!!! Things I am NOT liking too much: The (seemingly) forced old school ScoobuSpeak. Could just be me but it is a bit much-i find it irritating. Next, WTF is with Willow calling Giles "Mr. Giles?". Do.,Not..Get. Small concerns over all, yet they nag. Also, B and W calling each other "Dear" just sounds false but again could just be me. It sounds too oldm tho. However, kudos for bringing such a great, long, well-structured fic. It has been such a delicious treat!! Valyssia 2007-09-12 id # 6350 Glad to both amuse and annoy you. It's funny when I go back through and force myself to reread these older stories I find myself irritated but by other things. One big gripe I have is redundancy of language. It's a learning curve...what can I say... Anyway...you're not alone. I'll keep your remarks in mind if I ever get bored enough for a rewrite. Right now...not that bored. Sorry. As to the Mr. Giles thing...see the notes on story 10 for an explanation. It was dead intentional and something that you are not alone in feeling. I personally don't have an issue with it. Val