Reviews for Willow's Obstacle's Cleo 2007-09-20 id # 6423 That was awesome! Loved the first story and I can't wait to see where you bring us next! Salix 2007-09-20 id # 6424 I love it so far. It's nice to see that Willow's progressed three months later. Going to an airport can be stressful, especially for someone who isn't used to being around large crowds. The happy yet tearful moment of Dawn flying off to another country was sweet and cool to read. And what exactly did she get up to on those road trips? I am also very curious to see how far Faith is going to go in order to gain Willow's affection. Will she simply be competing with Buffy in the wooing of Willow, or will she get a little forceful? I think it would be a little interesting if those two hooked up for some sexual healing. But that's just me. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you give it to us soon. Howard R 2007-09-20 id # 6425 What's up with Willow? I mean, yeah, I think she's gorgeous, but she shouldn't be the object of *every* slayer's desire. Has her magic turned her into some kind of catnip for slayers? Slayer-nip? I do think it's a good sign that she's trusting Buffy so much and enjoying and taking comfort in being close to Buffy. Gives us hope. willow 2007-09-20 id # 6426 Howard, dude, chill, there's going to be a story line behind it, dunna worry. pffffft men. lol only joking. salix 2007-09-20 id # 6427 holy fuck, two updates in one day, yay! Either your muse is running on over time or you're keeping her very happy. So it's official, they're a couple. I wonder how the others are going to react to this? Well, Dawn was so excited she almost wet herself, but how are Giles, Xander and especially Faith going to handle the news? And will Kennedy come along and try to win Willow back, causing tension between her and Buffy? I can't wait for you to update again, if that wasn't obvious by now. Keep up the fabulous work. Howard R 2007-09-20 id # 6428 I'm just afraid this is too fast. I expect Willow to awaken in terror from finding herself in the arms of a slayer. Hope this doesn't set the Wiffy back too far. willow 2007-09-20 id # 6429 Fucking hell, Howard, way to ruin everyone else's fun. That's what was going to happen, but now I'm gonna change it just for the crack! willow 2007-09-20 id # 6430 P.S: I don't take criticism well LMAO did you guess? salix 2007-09-20 id # 6431 oooooo, someone got yelled at. Haha Howard. willow 2007-09-20 id # 6432 He didn't get yelled at! He got corrected =P Ahn 2007-09-20 id # 6433 Great start to the sequal. Can't wait to see how things go with Faith wanting Willow. Hope she doesn't come between Buffy and Willow. Of course maybe Willow can work through some of her issues by dating Faith first so less issues for her to be with Buffy. Of course then Buffy will have issues. Please update soon! Anne :P 2007-09-20 id # 6434 YAY!! They got together. Don't know why i'm suprised but still. This story is great and is even better with this ray of happyness. well written :) zigpal 2007-09-20 id # 6438 Great start. I didn't like the bit about Faith wanting Red especially now that Buffy and Willow are girlfriendly. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops. Ahn 2007-09-23 id # 6449 Can't wait to see what everybody is going to say when they find out about the new couple. Update soon! salix 2007-09-23 id # 6450 Great chapter, as always. I like that you're keeping it on the realistic side. It's probably going to take Willow a very long time to get over what Kennedy did to her. I wonder if Buffy can really wait that long without things getting tense between them. Guess I'll have to wait to find out. I can't wait to see what's going to happen at the dinner. Will Faith 'make her move' here before the announcement or will she just start competing with Buffy to try and win Willow? Don't leave us in suspense, update soon!!! Please? Howard R 2007-09-23 id # 6455 Well, I expected a stronger reaction than that. I'm not going to speculate about future events so not to force you off track. zigpal 2007-09-23 id # 6461 great update. Oh yeah, dinner is going to be 'fun'. I can't wait to see how the Wiffy goes over with the fam. Howard R 2007-09-25 id # 6476 Sweet. Poor Faith. She needs someone. salix 2007-09-25 id # 6478 Great chapter, as always. I really want to know what Faith is going to get up to now. Is she really going to just take it lying down, or is she going to try and win Willow over? I also get the feeling that some demon is going to come along and tense things up. I mean, this is a Buffy story after all. Demons and whatnot are part of the package. Well, unless you write an all human one. Ok, now I'm just rambling. Sorry about that. It sucks that you're sick. Almost everyone in my family is feeling ill so it must just be that time of year or whatever. I hope you feel better soon. zigpal 2007-09-25 id # 6482 great update. I hope Faith finds herself someone to get over Willow, or things might get rough for the Wiffy. Ahn 2007-09-25 id # 6484 So is Faith going to come between Buffy and Willow? That would be ashame is she did. Of course if they broke up and she got back with buffy it would be great. Update again. Howard R 2007-09-26 id # 6486 You're writing, and that's the best defense against writer's block. zigpal 2007-09-26 id # 6487 great update. Don't know if that is a good or a bad thing that Faith didn't get her admission off her chest. Can't wait to see what you have planned for the threesome. Ahn 2007-09-26 id # 6488 I'm glad your still writing even with writer's block but it was a great update. Can't wait to find out if Faith tells Willow about her feelings or not. Things might get very interesting if she does. Keep the updates coming! Jen 2007-09-26 id # 6490 I'm in an agnsty mood right now and therfore am really feeling for Faith... and i kinda want you to build up on the angst with faith... but that could just be that i'm angry at the world right now. I love where you are bringing this story. and please, DO continue! willow 2007-09-27 id # 6492 Aww, you're all so kind, I love it =] Howard R 2007-09-27 id # 6493 But why did a demon created by the First take a slayer alive? Sounds like the start of a grand adventure. Ahn 2007-09-27 id # 6494 Thanks for the update! Jen 2007-09-28 id # 6495 If you didn't have me hooked yet, i am now... MORE!!!!! i demand more, or else i will show up on your door step with a pitchfork and a torch... yup, you read it right. lol.. jk, obv. .... please right more! becca willowcougar@yahoo.com 2007-09-28 id # 6496 Awesome. you're doing wonderfully. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep going. zigpal 2007-09-28 id # 6499 great update. Nice wrinkle, the Wiffy was getting along fine, so something was liable to happen. Maybe if Faith tells Willow that she has feelings for her, it will dawn on Will that she and Buffy belong together. Howard R 2007-09-28 id # 6500 I can't believe they did that! Shadowcub 2007-09-28 id # 6502 I see lots of angsty goodness, I like it!! Though Faithy is gonna get an asskicking. Ahn 2007-09-29 id # 6514 I don't even know were to go with this one. You can't blame Buffy for being hurt and doing something dumb because she doesn't think Willow loves her. At least she was smart enough to stop before she did something really awful. Willow's mad but not talking to Buffy doesn't help things either. Then you might have to feel sorry for Faith because she thinks she loves Willow but Willow loves Buffy and maybe Kennedy but I'm thinking with the Kennedy thing she just thinks she does. I hope you update soon becaue I can't wait to see what happens next! Howard R 2007-10-01 id # 6532 Willow and Buffy seem to be trapped in a one-up-manship contest on trashing their relationship. Now Buffy has to top "sleeping with Faith." I fear. Rin 2007-10-01 id # 6535 Buffy's gonna get pissed, Faith's gonna get her ass kicked, Willow's gonna get freaked b/c of the violence...hmm, what else... Ahn 2007-10-01 id # 6539 I new that was going to happen but I just don't even know what to say. Willow can't be mad at Buffy now because what she just did was a 1000 times worse at least. Also she loves Buffy I think. Of course she didn't feel guilt until she realized her and Buffy were still together so maybe she doesn't. Willow should now understand why Buffy kissd that other girl but at least she stoped it at that because of her feelings for Willow. That's going to be a hard one for Buffy to forgive even with all Willow's been through and the fact that she made Buffy wait because of all she's been through but could give herself to Faith is going to make it all the harder. Willow's going to be lucky to still be friends with either of them when this is all over. I hope you still plan on bring them back together but I don't see it coming for a long time. Willow's going to have to tell her and I'm sure if she doesn't Faith will and i don't see how Buffy will forgive Faith for this either. I wounder who's side Xander, Giles and Dawn will be on. I'll stop rambling now but please update soon! Anon 2007-10-01 id # 6540 Willow needs to think how she would have felt if Buffy had called out someone elses name when they were about to make love for the first time. Instead she just thinks what's wrong with me. Not the fact that if she wouldn't have said I love you Kenn instead of Buffy she wouldn't be where she is now. Now Willow has sex with Faith but Faith makes love to her and all the problems that's going to cause. And she cheated on Buffy. Can't wait to see how you bring the girl's back together after this. Willow has no reason not to forgive Buffy after what she did because even if she didn't sleep with Faith the first thing she did was still worse then what Buffy did no matter what Willow's been though. How Buffy is I don't see how she's going to get past this but I hope you find a way for her to. Now I beg for you to UPDATE soon! Howard R 2007-10-02 id # 6543 Sometimes they seem to need the superglue. Ahn 2007-10-02 id # 6544 Buffy sure is a better person then I would be. There's noway I'd jump in bed with her right now. I'm not saying i wouldn't get back with her but all those problems are still there and if they want things to last then maybe sex isn't the answer. Of course what do I know. How's Faith going to handle it all? Of course it would be funny for her to catch Willow and Buffy in the act. and how's Buffy going to feel about the fact the Faith is going to hold it over her head that she had Will first. UPdate soon! This one was great by the way! Nikki WBSLAYER@aol.com 2007-10-02 id # 6547 I didn't like how Faith and Willow were making Buffy the bad guy in chapter 8. I did think think chapter 9 was rushed, and Buffy was way too forgiving so quickly. Your girlfriend having sex with your best friend is pretty big. Kinda hard to get over that. Anon 2007-10-02 id # 6548 At least Willow finally realized she was the one that was wrong. I do think both girls need to realize that sex isn't going to help work though anything and that there's more of a chance that it's just going to make things worse. Faith made Buffy the bad guy forgeting that if Willow did that to her she'd do the samething Buffy did. All Faith wanted was to be with Willow and didn't care how she got her. I just can't believe Buffy would forgive Willow so easly. Buffy has every right to be pissed at both girls and she should be. Being angery doesn't mean you stop caring but it she should have major trust issues with Willow right now. I just don't think Willow should get off so easly. I think she needs to earn her forgiveness and not with sex. japmap japmap@yahoo.com 2007-10-02 id # 6550 What a relief! That last chapter(8) was so intense, and I felt so bad for Buffy and pissed at Willow and Faith; you did a great job with that,especially since it's hard to be mad at Willow for anything, especially after all she has been through... Must admit, though, yay for major happies in Ch 9. Buffy has shown so much maturity in how she has handled everything from the beginning. Can't wait for more! Still enjoying this story so the much. Thanks for sharing. Anon 2007-10-03 id # 6553 thanks for the update! i'm glad you didn't let them use sex to try and fix things. i really think that would have messed things up with them and it should be special in someway. i do think buffy should be showing more of her hurt or at least let her have a big out bust about it or something. maybe faith come over and everthing seem fine and after she leaves buffy be her closed off self because of the hurt. update again soon! Jen 2007-10-04 id # 6554 Dun, Dun, DUNNNNNNNN!!!! dooooooode... more! i felt that was extremely cliff hanger ish, without being a cliff hanger .... but MOOOOOOOOOOORE PLEASE!!!!! Rin 2007-10-04 id # 6558 Rock demon...dum dum dum... cleo_rose 2007-10-05 id # 6565 Sorry to see this story on Hiatus but would love to see what you come up with on the challenge! zigpal 2007-10-05 id # 6567 8-11 were rock 'em, sock 'em. No worries with the plot ideas, we will be waiting with baited breath for your next installment. Shadowcub 2007-10-07 id # 6570 Sorry but the Faith/Buffy sister slayer thing is gone, the trust and respect is gone if you sleeep with my girlfriend while we are having trouble that's it. japmap japmap@yahoo.com 2007-10-13 id # 6629 Brainstorming plot bunnies is always of the good; maybe try asking readers to toss out some ideas about where/how the story could go? Or do a poll? Personally, I think it's time for "take charge" Willow, starting with wooing her girl. Initiating and controlling things romantically and physically at this point would increase her feelings of safety and trust with Buffy and their relationship. But I think something has to happen soon, or Buffy's going to pop. Slayers arent' exactly known for their patience, especially when it comes to primal instincts. But I think Buffy as girl and slayer are going to have to surrender and submit, physically as well as emotionally to Willow... Just my 10 yen's worth. salix 2007-10-13 id # 6630 what I do when I'm in a rut is not write anything. I give my brain a break and let it come up with ideas on its own instead of trying to force them out. DarkWillow 2007-10-13 id # 6631 Huh...First of all, "help me" in french is "aidez-moi", so you were really close! Second of all, I don't know...What if Kennedy was back and had something to do with the stone demon? It seems a bit far-fetched, but maybe it could be interesting... willow 2007-10-13 id # 6635 Yeah, I was actually thinking of that, DW, but, the same thought of far-fetched...ness crossed my mind. Mind you the whole story's been a little far-fetched looking back lol. It all seemed so plausible when I was actually writing it. Werewolf SHEWOLFOFTELAVIA@people'spc.com 2007-10-14 id # 6636 I have a idea for Your writer's block how about the return of Nutsso Kenn or a menber of Her Family? Remennber Kennady was from a Latain Family and They are very Clannesh and big on Revenge agaist Those Who wrong Their Families Rin 2007-12-04 id # 6919 What do I do when I get stuck?? I start watching or reading transcripts from old episodes to get the voices back. I play with my loose action figures (placing them in various pornographic positions). I stare at the screen until something comes to me, or start to freewrite without stopping, and then revise later. It just depends on the story, my mood, and what else needs to be done school and work wise. z121 2007-12-10 id # 6947 Well, my writing prof always said "If you can't tell a story, you can still create one scene." She encouraged us to visualize one image, and write about it. She said that even if it didn't result in releasing the block and starting the story flow again, at least we had one good scene out of the effort. BTW: I like the story. My only suggestion is to slow it down a bit and lest us enjoy it more.