Reviews for Ten Thousand Days - 4 - Wings
Rin 2007-12-05 id # 6923
Interesting, though I wish you'd explain the orgasm spell a little more clearly. I was a little confused.


Valyssia 2007-12-05 id # 6924
Rin - You know me well enough to figure that if a detail becomes important it'll be explained. If it's just a detail, adding depth to the mythology, then it could remain buried for awhile. In other words, patience.

Val


Iceflame55 assassin72530@yahoo.com 2007-12-12 id # 6961
Don't stop on my account :). I generally don't say much, unless I've got something important to say. Like now. You have my undivided attention with this fic series!!!


zinerva 2007-12-13 id # 6962
Don't know why you think you're failing, 'cause this is the best stuff written by someone not named Joss in a long time. I've only reviewed the story line a few times because it would basically be 'Wow!' over and over, and that's just a little too spamy for my tastes. But I'll say it again, Wow!

When I read your stuff, it makes my heart beat faster, and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter, even the next paragraph. Why? Because your interpretation of the characters is very real to me, and the strains and stresses you put them under become mine as I'm completely drawn into your little world. Brilliant and very entertaining. If only most fan fic could be this good. I actually check IKOLY almost daily on the off chance you might have updated.

You've made me laugh and cry, soar and crash, even broken my heart twice since you began this storyline.

You don't try to entertain, you do entertain. Very well. I've paid good money for many a book that's not as well written or as entertaining.


Anon 2007-12-13 id # 6963
Be not afraid. This continues to be a very entertaining story. I relish reading it and always look forward to updates.

-Chris-


Rin 2007-12-13 id # 6964
If it's any consolation, I think the fics are brilliant story-telling (and plot)...and I do this for a living (not fanfic, that's my fun, nonwork writing).


Rin 2007-12-16 id # 6981
I think you handled it well.


Lost 2007-12-18 id # 6986
If it makes you feel any better, I'm pretty much stuck on this series, I think youre writing it excelently.- L.


Rin 2007-12-20 id # 6993
Dum dum dum...what a cliffhanger!!!