Reviews for Dreams and Wishes
Rin |
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2008-03-11 |
id # 7298 |
Interesting that you choose to put them together already, and not have it drawn out why, how, or when exactly they got together. I'm curious to see what you come up with! |
MVMP |
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2008-03-11 |
id # 7299 |
Well...you've caught my attention. Please update soon. |
Cuprit |
2008-03-13 |
id # 7306 |
If I was Buffy, I would be freaked out too. Great detail. I like it. Good Job. |
Anon |
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2008-03-13 |
id # 7314 |
Interesting start to the story. You got me wanting to know what's going to happen next. |
Anon |
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2008-03-16 |
id # 7332 |
Cool story so far. Please update soon. |
zinerva |
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2008-03-16 |
id # 7333 |
These two chapters are a nice start. You've definitely established a sense of foreboding and tension in both the potential action and the 'ship and used that tension to establish the characters as well.
I usually can't get my head into stories that start with a preexisting Willow/Buffy 'ship, but I didn't have that problem with this piece. probably because you started with the tension.
I look forward to reading more. |
Ahn |
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2008-03-16 |
id # 7336 |
I'm woundering if these are slayer dreams. Also if the dreams start right after she got together with Willow could somebody being doing it to her for being with Willow? Maybe like Kennedy. Update soon. |
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