Reviews for THE SECRET OF THE RABBI
VeronicaUK 2008-03-14 id # 7323
I like the beginning of this story. I hope you keep it going.


Anon 2008-03-15 id # 7324
Oh no! Things are about to get serious. Update soon.


veronicaUK 2008-03-15 id # 7330
Opps sorry about the other one. I'm still learning this website. Anyway:
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Has Anybody got a Clue on what Willow has in Her back Pocket? COMON Kiddies try to guess before the next posting and I'll give You a big kiss.

Um, I think you've kind of telegraphed it with the title.

Nice part, keep them coming.


Cuprit 2008-03-16 id # 7334
Well I don't does she have some Jewish magic in her back pocket. PMS.
Good Job.


veronicaUK 2008-03-17 id # 7337
I liked it but I didn't catch the importance of the referance. Sorry.

The rest was good!


japmap japmap@yahoo.com 2008-03-17 id # 7339
Very interesting plot idea; looking forward to seeing how you develop it. Hang in there and stay safe.


birdie 2008-04-25 id # 7528
yes please more of all :D