Reviews for It's called sharing Anon 2008-04-05 id # 7426 Very cute. And don't worry, your English is very good. guy youn2731@yahoo.com 2008-04-05 id # 7427 Cute little drabble. Rin 2008-04-05 id # 7430 That was a cute little snippet, and I think you did just fine! Valyssia 2008-04-05 id # 7434 Very cute. For someone who made so many apologies as a prelude you do a fine job. Honestly, depending on the season you intend--the setting--I might be inclined to find a replacement for the word 'ass' next time. Willow is very careful with the swearing. It's not something that comes naturally to her. She's normally pretty upset, even in later seasons when she does. Something cute, something silly to describe that part of the anatomy would be a better fit. That's it though...the only flaw I see. Otherwise, totally golden. Keep going. Offer us more! Val Didge didge4@btinternet.com 2008-04-06 id # 7436 Nice piece, cute as everyone says. No complaints about the grammer. How about a little bit more? What happened before this scene? What happened afterwards? Experiment with a few more short scenes and then try to join them together. Hope to see some more from you. Dirk Howard R 2008-04-19 id # 7490 Sweet! Very cute. English isn't your first language? It doesn't show. Very well done. zingrrrl 2008-04-25 id # 7525 I agree with all that this is very cute. A breath of much needed fresh air I stumbled upon after wallowing in the darkness of my so called vision. Very cool. And I agree with Val about Willow's language. Willow would be to uncomfortable to say ass. As an example from the show, in s7's 'Killer in Me' she stumbled over gaydar. I don't remember exactly what she said, but the point is words make her uncomfortable. Great Job! emily LatteGirl 2008-04-25 id # 7526 I wanted to thank everyone for the FB. I didn't expect that at all. Valyssa, zingrrrl: Thanks for pointing out the 'ass' thing. I have to admit that it didn't even cross my mind that Willow would probably say something else. I hope I can come up with something more Willow-y in the future. Which will be quite the challenge, I think. I should probably go look for my dictionary. (It would be cool if there was a Willow-speak-dictionary somewhere on the net. *wink*) As for the timeline, I leave that up to the reader. Picture them in any season you prefer. P.S.: I do have one or two drabbles more on my computer somewhere. I never really thought of ever sharing them with anyone because I only write for myself. I still don't know what made me post this one. Anyway, if I decide to post the other ones as well I'd like to have them beta'd first. Just because I fluked the grammar in this one doesn't mean I know anything about it. ;-) Anyone willing to help me out with that? (Assuming, people read this.) Lattegirl