Re: [FIC: Life's Surprises Series - Someone Different (Part 2)]

[Mad Hamlet <Mad-Hamlet@xxxxxxx>]

Greetings,
This is pretty good.
I wouldn't mind if it had been a little slower. A little more backround on how
Tara's er..infatuation jumped the rails from Willow to Buffy.
Also 'Talking Heads' is a real stopper here. You should keep an eye out for
that kind of thing.
Finally, you're answering all of Tara's problems pretty quick. Family,
confidence, her humanity etc. What with all these problems being knocked down,
BAM BAM BAM BAM, it's kinda hard to see where this fic is going. But I trust
ya.

On the other hand some of the Dialiouge is priceless. Particularly the 'Is
White a Color?' bit, that was quite good and very scoobyish.

Now, I just have to ask...

*"Can she kiss or what? But what I thought was even cooler, was how *someone
who liked girls, could fall in love with a guy. You think that *works in
reverse, but with a happier ending? Like, on occasion?"

Are you implying something? Huh? Are ya? Huh? Well? Speak up boy! I can't
HHHEEEARRRR YYYOOUU!!!

It's intresting bit of work, really. A little rough around the edges, do some
spit N'polishing though and yeah, it's a keeper.

I remain, as always,
Mad-Hamlet

There is only one thing that can damn me.
That can send me down in a swirling maelstrom of fire and pain.
And it is not the word of Man.
And it is not the lessons and rules of the Church, hypocrites every one.
And it is not the words of God, nor the judgements of Angels.
And it not a fair tribunal of my 'peers' that can find me guilty of crimes
immortal.
No. 
I can only be accused, judged and damned by my own Soul.
And I would never be so betrayed.

Mad-Hamlet