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Re: FIC: STILL STRUGGLING (7/7) PG-ish



i'm really glad you enjoyed it. i have a lot of fic ideas i've jotted down... but this is my
first full length (sort of)... and first for B/W though i've... so all the pos feedback really
helps and inspires... *feeling all warm and fuzzy*
RW

--- danspector@xxxxxxxxx wrote:
RW,

A fine conclusion to an outstanding fic. (Or is that vice versa?) I
noticed in the beginning that where Buffy's inner voice used to be the
one saying negative things like "you'll lose her forever" and "you're a
fool, Buffy", now that Buffy and Willow are together, it's the inner
voice that is the calm, reasonable one ("someone always gets hurt").
Willow=inner peace. Nice twist, neatly done.

The W/T parting was sweetly done, and then you got me laughing again by
dropping in the "New Moon Rising" lines. Yeah, out you go, Tara; have
an Extra Flamey candle as a parting gift :)

Also liked the very reasonable B/W anxiety moment, and Willow's
affirmation that their relationship was worth all the problems it
caused. And oh, mochas!

And then, there was that final paragraph...pure gold. I'm tempted to
just quote the whole thing for emphasis, but I'll let it go. But just
brilliant work. Seriously.

Dan

>Starting now, the dreams are over. Starting now, we start living...

okay, so I can't resist a **little** bit of quoting...




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"What is a poet? An unhappy person who conceals profound
anguish in his heart but whose lips are so formed that
as sighs and cries pass over them they sound like
beautiful music"
-Soren Kierkegaard

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