Re: FIC: STILL STRUGGLING (7/7) PG-ish

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

RW,

A fine conclusion to an outstanding fic. (Or is that vice versa?) I
noticed in the beginning that where Buffy's inner voice used to be the
one saying negative things like "you'll lose her forever" and "you're a
fool, Buffy", now that Buffy and Willow are together, it's the inner
voice that is the calm, reasonable one ("someone always gets hurt").
Willow=inner peace. Nice twist, neatly done.

The W/T parting was sweetly done, and then you got me laughing again by
dropping in the "New Moon Rising" lines. Yeah, out you go, Tara; have
an Extra Flamey candle as a parting gift :)

Also liked the very reasonable B/W anxiety moment, and Willow's
affirmation that their relationship was worth all the problems it
caused. And oh, mochas!

And then, there was that final paragraph...pure gold. I'm tempted to
just quote the whole thing for emphasis, but I'll let it go. But just
brilliant work. Seriously.

Dan

> Starting now, the dreams are over. Starting now, we start living...

okay, so I can't resist a **little** bit of quoting...