Re: Fic: "Life: Version 2.0" (2/?)

[JDMeans@xxxxxxx]

Thanks for the feedback, Dan.  Actually Iappreciate the nitpicking as much as anyone else(anyone else remember thatscene from the classic Star Trek ep "Obsession" when the gaseous alien creature entered the Enterprise through a ship's vent?  I was eight when I first saw that ep and I wanted to shout to the TV, "What's a space ship doing with vents?").  Edits will be made before sending this sucker to ikoly.com.

On the other hand;

> Stuff that's dubious:
>
> Willow starting the ritual in Latin, when she knows that once the spirit
> (apparently not Jenny, since Jenny's still alive here) possesses her, it
> spoke in Rumanian.  I had the same problem with "Orpheus"—the